Alright the first one i posted wasn't one of the greatest. I think this one is a lot better. I Removed the bad pieces that didn't fit and i quit like the mix right now so here it is: link
Not bad at all, although, if I may point out, there are some audible 'clicks' here and there, presumably where you cut Freddie in and out. It's also been recorded very loud, to the point of some distortion (crackle) in places. One difference between yours and mine seems to be that you haven't used the studio version on it's own at any point, which makes a more consistant sound throughout, although I'm still not sure that some of the vocals in the verses marry too well, but the guitar solo is surprisingly almost in sync. I say 'surprisingly', not referring to your mix, but to the fact that Brian very rarely performs a live solo, note perfect to the studio version, which in this case, he almost has.