after listening to it for a whole minute....just didn't like it at all - all sounded a bit too "clean"
also - the title:
"Like A Tear In The Rain" - bit cliched don'tcha think?
the whole "water lost in bigger water" concept has been [ahem] saturated.
Hi brENsKi!
Thank you for listening! :-)
I'm a little sad you didn't like it but it's fair.
You're right I'm in a cliché here, you put the thing in perspective.
I'm taking it back and I'll go back to work. :-)
Thanks for your help.
Nono.