Erm,
Timing was a bit off. Didn't really 'sing' too much. Lyrics weren't properly rehearsed.
Spelled his name incorrectly.
Still - you posted something up which is commendable. Far too many arm-chair critics who have never offered anything before but spout off their opinions.
It's Freddie - not Freddy.
Also for many.... it's 'DeaCy. Not DeaKy!
:-)