For me it doesn't work, sorry. I think there's too much mess, some spots are out of key and tempo. It sounds like you had no idea what you want to create and you put the samples randomly here and there. They simply not fit in many spots. Maybe you should start to create a bit 'subtle' remixes first and when you are an old hand at it, then start with something more advanced. Practice makes perfect ;-)
@ Kacio : Thank you!
@ PiotreQ : I'm sorry if you don't like it, but i'm not an expert and i'll improve my work. You're right, but I do not agree about "mess". I love your works, and if you want to give to me some advices, I'll be happy to take them.
Thank you (mate) anyway!
The intro part wasn't a bad idea, but went on for too long before the song got going, and, as Piotre said, there are some mismatched parts, such as the guitar being out of key with the keyboards in places. By the time the song did get going, I'm afraid I'd lost interest, as, personally, I don't like the track much anyway.