| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 00:32 |
I've never tried to write a story with everyone, but here it goes. It's a sweet story and you can all join in. I'll start. A 23 year old girl watched from a front row seat at wemley stadium. She couldn't believe for the first time she was seing Queen! She had always wented to meet Freddie, but how could she get to him? Her head was spinning on how she could do this very thing, when she heard Freddie's vocal improvs. They deeply touched her. Without realizing it, while he was singing, she shouted, I love you Freddie! Freddie |
| Queen_Rox 18.09.2006 01:00 |
heard the woman's cry and responded without his mike as loud as he could for her to hear him. "I LOVE YOU, TOO, DARLING," he yelled as he threw a free backstage pass to her to get her to meet him after the show and continued singing his vocal improvision. The woman... |
| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 01:08 |
couldn't believe what she had just heard! After the vocal improv, Brian turned to Freddie and asked, |
| Queen_Rox 18.09.2006 01:10 |
"Freddie, are you all right, mate?" Freddie looked at Brian causing the crowd chattered puzzledly about those two on stage. "Sure, Brian," he responded. "Why wouldn't I be?" The already annoyed Brian sighed and said, |
| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 01:58 |
Then, let's continue with the show! I'm staving! So, they sang love of my life, which touched the woman's heart deeply. Freddie couldn't help but stare off in to the distance, as if in a hazy dream. After the song was completed and Freddie got off the stool, roger |
| deleted user 18.09.2006 02:01 |
"Freddie, you're already outrageous, why are you doing this now?" "Oh loosen up once in a while Brian!" But Brian didn't like that remark so... |
| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 15:06 |
he scowled. "Freddie! I just don't see the point at shouting I love you, darling to someone. I mean, you don't even know her!" "And what if I found the person of my dreams?", Freddie said hopefully. "Oh? And you think that shouting back at her would get her attention?" Freddie |
| Queen_Rox 18.09.2006 16:11 |
scowled angrily at Brian. "Yes, it did get her attention! But did you see how she reacted? NO!" Freddie yelled, which caused Brian to growl in frustration. Meanwhile the two continued arguing, Roger watched from behind his drumset more than a thousand Queen fans in the crowd chattering puzzledly once again. "What the bloody hell are they arguing about?" one fan asked. "I don't know, but whatever it is, it must be something serious," his friend answered. "HEY, C'MON! WHAT THE BLOODY HELL IS GOING ON?!" a die hard fan screamed, which interrupted the heated arguement between Brian & Freddie. So Freddie shouted back to the fan, |
| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 16:52 |
"We are just acting a little crazy tonight my beauty! Let's get on with the show! I'm in a show and this is action! Everyone soon forgot about the heated argument and stomped and clapped to action this day! Freddie was releieved that the argring subsided and so was Brian. Meanwhile, Roger |
| Queen_Rox 18.09.2006 16:57 |
still couldn't help but think about how the woman felt after she reacted to Freddie's response, but simultaneously kept focusing on his drum parts of the song. Meanwhile in the crowd, the woman |
| Stare at the Moon 18.09.2006 17:44 |
Was wondering if she was dreaming, and deicided to do something outrageous to find out. So the woman suddenly... |
| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 17:50 |
to make a run toward the stage, hoping that no one would notice. She made her way showly out of the bleachers and made a daring run! Out of the corner of his eye, John spotted her! He |
| Queen_Rox 18.09.2006 18:00 |
paused, ran to approach the woman who was about to climb up the stairs to the stage, and told her, "Darling, I don't think you're allowed onstage. If you want to meet Freddie, you might want to wait until after the concert." The woman felt slightly embarassed and said, "Okay, thanks for telling me, John." John grinned and winked as he went back to his spot to continue playing, but Freddie, who saw her |
| deleted user 18.09.2006 18:09 |
shoved John off the stage into the roaring crowd and yelled "That's what you get for telling my girl off!" Fred turned and noticed the girl on stage and |
| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 18:13 |
motioned her to come on! The girl came on, but not before making sure John was okay. He was fine and he stood up and was ready to play again. Roger noticed the girl and whispered over to Freddie, "Man, she's hot! Freddie then |
| deleted user 18.09.2006 18:17 |
took the girl in his arms, and low dipped her then gave her a passionate kiss to the cheering of the crowd and the occasional "Why not me?!?" He then whispered in her ear... |
| Queen_Rox 18.09.2006 19:04 |
"May I ask you for your name, darling?" She sighed dreamily and said, "Jacqueline." Brian, however, saw what he'd call "the entire fiasco" made his way over to Freddie and Jacqueline, whom are now standing hand in hand, and cried out, "What the hell are you doing, Fred? You're ruining the show!" "No he's not, Brian!" Roger hollered from behind his drumset as the crowd agreed with him. "The crowd loved it!" |
| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 19:18 |
Yes. Jacqueline's my name. Smile. If Jackie is shorter and better, that's fine. Smile. Jacqueline just sounds, more, fit for a queen. Xd! |
| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 19:21 |
Lol! I thought you were asking for my name! Sorry. Xd. Okay. So anyway, Roger then comes over to the Freddie and takes him aside. "Excuse me miss." "Not at all.", she replied. "Don't listen to anyone who says you are ruining the show. How long have you been looking for that special person?" Freddie |
| Queen_Rox 18.09.2006 19:31 |
began to explain. "Well, Rog, I've been looking for someone like Jacqueline since Mary and I broke up in 1976." Roger begin to notice how lonely Freddie has been before he fell in love with Jacqueline. "I completely understand your feelings for her, mate," he consoled Freddie. "You do?" Freddie asked. "Sure! Why don't you ask her out after the show and maybe you two will get to know each other," Roger beckoned. Freddie seemed to like the idea, since Roger is known as "the lady's man" from Queen. "Okay, Roger, I'll do it!" Freddie said with confidence. "Way to go, loverboy! C'mon! John and Brian are waiting for us to finish the show with him." "Okay." So Freddie and Roger ran back out to continue playing while Jacqueline |
| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 19:49 |
was on the stage, chatting to the crowd on the microphone! "Darlings, this is a splended night! I don't know how I got here. Let me tell you!" The corwd cheered. Roger and John smiled and really liked this performence. "Wow! She's doing pretty good at this! It's like she's done this before!", John said in astonishment. Freddie came up to her and took the other mic. "What are you doing Darling?", he laughed. "Oh! Just helping you out. That's all." The cowd cheered. Meanwhile, John |
| Queen_Rox 18.09.2006 19:51 |
Queen Mercury wrote: Lol! I thought you were asking for my name! Sorry. Xd. Okay. So anyway, Roger then comes over to the Freddie and takes him aside. "Excuse me miss." "Not at all.", she replied. "Don't listen to anyone who says you are ruining the show. How long have you been looking for that special person?" FreddieI wasn't sure if I was going to add your name to the story because I didn't want to make the Freddie lovers on Queenzone jealous. I, too, a love Freddie, but I wouldn't mind using someone elses name in that story. However, I decided to add yours anyway, since it's probably your story. |
| blerp 18.09.2006 20:37 |
jajajja LOL xD this is one weird story ... but carry on.. |
| Bohemian MAY-niac/Deaconite 18.09.2006 20:52 |
Hmmmm... What will John do? This story is really good!! Ok... What if this happened? John walked up to the mic where Jackie was talking and they started to sing a duet. Meanwhile Freddie and Brian were still carrying on when all of a sudden they hear some singing. A very pretty female voice and a very squeaky male voice singing "Hello Mary Lou, Good-bye Heart". (I love how John sings when you can hear him) They couldn't believe their ears... |
| Queen_Rox 18.09.2006 21:14 |
"Wow! Jackie must've been a trained singer," gushed Freddie. "Yeah, she's got one hell of a voice," Roger agreed. Amazed with Jackie's voice, Freddie |
| deleted user 18.09.2006 21:17 |
...said, very suddenly - "Make sure your tongue is in the "ng" position, not flat !" Of course, giving this advice away... |
| Queen_Rox 18.09.2006 21:20 |
Jackie heard what Freddie said and did as she was told, which impressed him. Brian |
| queen mercury 33542 18.09.2006 23:47 |
You didn't have to use my name in the story. No problem. And Lol about the tung thing! You can take that how many different ways. Lol. |
| Queen_Rox 19.09.2006 00:30 |
Queen Mercury wrote: You didn't have to use my name in the story. No problem. And Lol about the tung thing! You can take that how many different ways. Lol.Well, okay, it can be a fiction Queen fan with the named Jacqueline. I mean, I had to put a girl's name in there somehow. Is that okay? :) By the way about Freddie reminding the character to use her tounge the right way while singing, I edited whatever I wrote and picked up where Kelley left off. So, go ahead and pick up where I left off. |
| queen mercury 33542 19.09.2006 00:52 |
Yes. That's fine Queen Rocks. Smile. Okay. Brian picked up his guitar and started playing along with John and Jacqueline, singing Hello Mary lou, and the whole crowd was clapping in time to the song. Meanwhile, Freddie was wondering what to say to this girl. Was she shy? Outgoing? What did she like? Shampaign, Vadca, dacories? She didn't seem like the kind of girl to smoke or drink. He wondered if he could ever be a family man with the parties he through and the wild times he had. When the song was done, Freddie |
| Queen_Rox 19.09.2006 01:00 |
approached the audience and announced that they're going to take a break and come back onstage for an encore. Once the band along with Jackie went backstage, Freddie asked, "Jackie, can we talk privately? I promise it will be quick before we all get back onstage." "Sure, Freddie," Jackie replied as Freddie took her to his dressing room. When he finally closed the door, Freddie began. |
| queen mercury 33542 19.09.2006 01:13 |
Um, I don't know how to say this., he began. I'm usually shy, which surprizes most people. I've never felt like this. I've always wanted to find that special person, and I think I've found her." Jackie was speechless! She didn't know what to say! "I hope I ddidn't say anything wrong to offend you darling.", he said shyly. "No. You're fine. Jackie then |
| Queen_Rox 19.09.2006 01:23 |
admitted, "I've never felt the same way, either because I'm very shy, too, just like you are. I seemed to have found just what I was looking for." "Really, darling?" Freddie asked. "Yes," Jackie responded. "Who?" Freddie inquired. "Well," Jackie began. "He is slightly taller than I am with black hair, brown eyes, and Asian tan skin complexion." "So, where is that special someone," Freddie wanted to know. "He's standing in the exact same room as I am right now," Jackie said. Freddie was speechless as well and things were quiet in the room between them. Just when they were about to kiss yet again, a sudden knock at the door disturbed their moment. |
| queen mercury 33542 19.09.2006 01:36 |
It's time to go on!", John shouted. "Are you ready Freddie?" Xd! "Yeah. Be right there.", he replied, but thought, "Oh man! Why does this have to happen now?" They came back on to the stage, and did we will rock you and we are the champions. and when the songs were done and Freddie said good night to everyone, the two lovers went straight for Fred's limo. In the back seat, |
| Queen_Rox 19.09.2006 01:44 |
Jackie was amazed because she had never been into a limo before. Just as she was staring out the window, she felt Freddie cuddling closer to her. "Oh, gosh! Freddie, you kinda scared me," she giggled. "Oh, sorry, love," he said in a soft tone. "It's okay," she assured him, but then she wondered. "So, what happened to Brian, Roger, and John?" "They're in another limo behind us," Freddie answered while his hand was running up and down her.Jackie and Freddie were talking about themselves, getting to know each other. |
| queen mercury 33542 19.09.2006 01:52 |
He told her about his birth in Zanzibar and that his real name was Farrokh, which he never told anyone, well, hardly anyone. She told him about how she was born in America, but her parents were Japanese americans. All the sudden, |
| Queen_Rox 19.09.2006 02:07 |
the London press & paparazzi approached the limo when it stopped at the hotel, as Freddie and Jacqueline stepped out carefully. "We'll pick up our conversation when we get to my suite, does that sound okay, darling?" "Sure," Jacqueline agreed as they carefully proceeded pass the press. "Freddie, the show was amazing. How does that feel?" "Um, you guys, I really don't have time for you questions, now so, could we please do this later?" Freddie asked, knowing how exhausted he is after the show. "Honey, are you sure you don't want to do this?" Jacqueline asked. "I'm positive, darling," Freddie answered as the continued toward the entrance and took the elevator up to the suite. Jacqueline couldn't blame Freddie for not talking to the press. What dawned on her was that she senses that he was not only exhausted, but also he didn't care for his conversation with the press, especially in interviews. However, Freddie was surprised to see that Jacqueline was giving him a break. |
| Queen_Rox 19.09.2006 17:12 |
**REVIVE** |
| queen mercury 33542 19.09.2006 20:05 |
In the hotel sweet, they both contined their chat about their lives, values and anything else they could think of. Freddie's back was very tense, so he lay down on the bed. Jackie pulled out a small bottle from herpocket. "I carry this around in case my back gets tense. I make these soothing oils myself." "Oh really?", Freddie observed. "How interesting!" He rolled on his stomach and told her that she could message his back. When she was done, she |
| Queen_Rox 19.09.2006 20:48 |
got up from the bed where Freddie was lying on his stomach, walked into the bathroom, and washed her hands. "Darling, would you like me to massage your back?" Freddie called from outside the bathroom. Jackie poked her head out from in the bathroom after drying her clean hands, "Yes, please. I mean, if you don't mind, Freddie." "No, not at all, darling," he assured as he sat up on the bed and motioned her to come over to him. |
| Queen_Rox 20.09.2006 20:31 |
**REVIVE AGAIN** I don't think I'd want this to move to the next page! |
| queen mercury 33542 20.09.2006 23:29 |
What does revive mean queen rocks? Okay. So Freddie starts messaging her back, feeling her muscles are very tense. "Darling, have you had a lot of stress lately?" Jackie mumbled yes as his hands gentle carressed her back. His fingers were slender, warm and soft. "Gosh! Those piano hands!", She thought. "They are going to drive me crazy!" When he was finished, and all the tention was released, she |
| Queen_Rox 20.09.2006 23:42 |
^According to the Merriam-Webster Online Dictionary, Revive means to restore from an inactive or unused state. In other words, I had to revive this page because I didn't want this thread to remain unused for it to move to the next page. I just wanted to see what will happen next. Sorry if I'm being so pushy. |
| Queen_Rox 20.09.2006 23:55 |
Queen Mercury wrote: So Freddie starts messaging her back, feeling her muscles are very tense. "Darling, have you had a lot of stress lately?" Jackie mumbled yes as his hands gentle carressed her back. His fingers were slender, warm and soft. "Gosh! Those piano hands!", She thought. "They are going to drive me crazy!" When he was finished, and all the tention was released, shesighed in relief while lying on her stomach as Freddie went into the bathroom to wash the oil off his hands. After he came out with dry, clean hands, Jackie got up from the bed to go back to the bathroom for a shower, but turns to Freddie first. "You go first, dear," Freddie said with a smile. "Are you sure?" Jackie asked. "Yes, love. Go ahead and get your shower," he shooed her. "Okay, thanks," she said as she walked into the bathrom with the door shut behind her. |
| queen mercury 33542 21.09.2006 21:55 |
As she was standing in the warm water, thoughts of Freddie drifted in to her mind. His voice, his hands roaming over her back, his smile. Suddenly, she realized, that she was falling in love with him. Or was it a crush? She wasn't sure. WHen she was done, she appeared, wearing a long nightgown that was purple. Meanwhile, Freddie found some beeds and string someone had left in the hotel. "This must have been from someone who makes very nice jewelry.", he thought to himself, as he constructed a bracelet. When Freddie saw Jackie coming out, he had just tied the not in the string. These were very oriental looking glass beeds, but they were blue, to match her sparkling eyes. He then |
| Queen_Rox 21.09.2006 22:08 |
motioned Jackie to him with her eyes closed. Once she approached him, she paused as she felt a round, oriental glass beaded jewelry sliding on her wrist. "Okay, open your eyes, honey," Freddie beamed. "Ooh! What a beautiful bracelet, Freddie! Where did this come from?" "Someone had left behind some string and beads in this suite, so I made a bracelet for you," Freddie explained. "These blue beads match your lovely, sparkling eyes." "Thank you," Jackie beamed as Freddie nodded as a way of saying "you're welcome." He then leaned in and planted a long, passionate kiss on Jackie's mouth. This kiss lead them to a warm, gentle embrace while their hands roamed over each other's skin. When their lips & arms finally unlocked after five seconds, Freddie decided to get a shower, since Jackie finished hers. "I'll be right back, darling," he whispered tenderly in her ear as he left for the bathroom. |
| queen mercury 33542 21.09.2006 22:57 |
While Freddie was in the shower, Jackie took out a queen record and put it on the record player that she found. It was her favorite, romantic album, a day at the races. You take my breath away, filled the room as she imagined laying on a grand piano as Freddie played it for her. Just then, |
| Queen_Rox 21.09.2006 23:11 |
she started singing along with it, but decided to turn the music down slightly to avoid a complaint with the hotel manager, let alone the other guests. While Jackie was singing, she heard the shower turn off causing her to stop singing and turn off the record. Then the door opened, as Freddie poked his head out while in a towel. "Why'd you turn off the record for, darling?" he asked puzzledly. "I thought I'd avoid a complaint from the manager, let alone the other guests," she answered, still blushing with embarassment. "Oh," Freddie said as he quickly shut the bathroom door. Once he dried off, he soon appeared in the room in a T-shirt and boxer shorts, he decided to turn the record back on. Freddie then sat down on the edge of the bed beside to Jackie as they listen to the record. Although the volume was turned down to a quiet, soft tone, the music still filled the room. "So, what do you think of 'A Day At The Races'?" Freddie asked curiously. "It's my favorite album because it's so romantic," Jackie commented. "Aww! Thank you, darling," Freddie beamed. "You know, my favorite song on that album is 'Somebody To Love'." "So is mine," Jackie revealed. |
| Queen_Rox 22.09.2006 03:07 |
Next door to Freddie's suite, Brian, Roger, and John were playing a card game of "Go Fish." "Hey, Brian, you got any sixes?" Roger asked. Brian checked his cards. "No, Roger, go fish," Brian said as Roger picked another card as the game continued. "Hmmm, I wonder what those two lovebirds are up to now," pondered John as he let out a yawn. "Well, we're next door to them, couldn't we hear them?" Roger asked. "Maybe they'll get laid eventually" "How can you be so sure, Roger?" Brian asked suspiciously. "Well, didn't you see the way Freddie was acting towards Jackie on stage earlier today?" Roger asked in a smart aleck-like tone. "Bloody hell! Freddie was all over her when he kissed her in front of a crowd of more than ten thousand fans." "Okay, I hope you're not jealous of her because you have Dominique and you should remain faithful to her," John told Roger sternly. "Are you saying I'm jealous of Freddie?" Roger asked looking rather offended. "As a matter of fact, yes you are jealous, but don't be so sure if you're even thinking about stealing her from Freddie," advised John. "Besides, she loves Freddie more than you anyway. So, I'd suggest you be satisfied with what you have and you have Dominique in your life." "You have a point, John," agreed Roger now feeling guilty. "Well, whatever it is they're doing is really none of our business anyway," Brian chimed in. "You're right, Brian," John & Roger agreed in unison. |
| Queen_Rox 22.09.2006 03:07 |
Back at Freddie's suite... |
| queen mercury 33542 22.09.2006 15:52 |
They talked on about the new album, until it was over. Then, Freddie turned on a night at the opera. Jackie smiled, remembering when she first heard Bohemian Rapsody. She mentioned it to Freddie. "Aw! Yes Darling. That one's a mssterpiece." "What about killer queen?", Jackie put in with a smile. "Thought we were talking about a night at the opera.", Freddie joked. "Aw Yes." A long kiss followed, as Freddie ran his fingers through her long silky black hair, almost the color of his. "You are so beautiful.", he whispered. "So are you.", she replied. |
| queen mercury 33542 22.09.2006 15:57 |
Meanwhile, back to Brian and the others, Roger got over his jealosy about Jackie and still kept trying to listen in for any sign of making out. "Rog! Stop it!", Brian said with a look that said, better not snoop on him this time. Maybe she's the right one. "Alright.", Roger said reluctantly, as he slumpted down on his bed. "WHy don't you go out for a bit to eat?", John suggested. "Yeah. YOu don't have to spy on people all the time. You need a new hobby.", Brian said seriously. Roger got his coat on and gave the others a look of pitty. "No one likes me!" "Oh quit!", Brian said with a chuckle. "We all love you.", John smirked. Meanwhile, Freddiee |
| Queen_Rox 22.09.2006 16:58 |
and Jackie continued kissing to the point where they were already making out. Freddie took his T-shirt off, threw it down, laid her down on their bed, and began to nuzzle her neck & the left side of her upper chest without noticing that Roger was standing outside the window of their suite, spying on them. "Oh, crap! I forgot to close the curtian," Freddie said. "I'll be right back, darling." Jackie nodded as Freddie left the room. Just then, he suddenly saw Roger outside the window of their suite. "Roger, what the hell are you doing out here? Have you been spying on Jackie and me all this time?" he asked again this time with an angry tone. |
| queen mercury 33542 22.09.2006 20:30 |
Roger, slightly embarrassed, nodded. "Well, I suggest you find some other hotel room to spy on! I'm sure there are plenty of honeymoon sweets around here! Now, fuck off!" Freddie closed the certain and stomped inside the room. "What's wrong?", Jackie said, worried. "Well, I don't even get privacy in my own fucking hotel room!", he roared. "I can't even go to the bathroom without someone coming up to the bloody stall wanting to chat or what not! I'm sorry Darling.", he said, much calmer now. "I shouldn't be taking it out on you. It's not your fault." "It's okay Freddie, she said, understanding how he must feel. Meanwhile, Roger |
| Queen_Rox 22.09.2006 21:17 |
snuck back into the room, knowing his plan to see any make out signs almost worked, but didn't go quite far. "What happened," John asked. "Freddie told me to fuck off and he's right anyway," Roger said. Brian sighed in frustration. "Roger, I told you not to spy on them," Brian scolded him. "You know how pissed Freddie get when his privacy is invaded. I suggest you respect it from now on, understand?" "Yes, Brian," Roger obeyed. "I guess I forgot that I'm the one who encouraged Freddie to tell Jackie how he felt about her." "You sure did," John agreed. |
| Queen_Rox 22.09.2006 21:20 |
Early the next morning in Freddie's suite, Freddie and Jackie were in each other's arms, still asleep after their first night alone together. |
| mayniac316 22.09.2006 21:27 |
Awww! This story is so sweet :) Is Brian taken? Can we get married and go on a honeymoon too? :D |
| queen mercury 33542 22.09.2006 21:57 |
Sure. We can make up someone for you. Smile. And you can get with brian. |
| mayniac316 22.09.2006 22:22 |
Aww! Thank you!! :D |
| Queen_Rox 22.09.2006 22:32 |
Hey, Queen Mercury, I'm gonna continue with the story, is that okay? If it is, does anyone wanna help me and Queen Mercury? |
| queen mercury 33542 22.09.2006 23:35 |
Sure queen rocks. Perfectly fine. Smile. And we need more people on here! Come on darlings! |
| Queen_Rox 22.09.2006 23:49 |
Well, if they don't come, can you pick up from the last sentence I left before mayniac came in? |
| queen mercury 33542 23.09.2006 00:59 |
Sure. I'll do that. No one seems to like this story. Lol. So Freddie and Jackie lay in each other's arms from their first night together. Jackie awakes, and seing that Freddie is still sleeping, watches him. He looked so peaceful and had a big smile on his face, as if he was in peace, for maybe the first time in his life. She leans down to give him a gentle kiss. "Good morning love." He turns over and smiles at her. "Well, hello there!" Suprizingly, freddie takes Jackie and |
| Queen_Rox 23.09.2006 01:11 |
Well, maybe...maybe not. Some of the QZers have gone to bed anyway, so maybe if they saw my message, they might pitch in. |
| Queen_Rox 23.09.2006 01:26 |
lays her on her back with him on top as they giggle. Just then, their fourth-time passionate kiss was then interrupted by a knock on the door. "Oh, dammit," Freddie cursed. "What's wrong?" Jackie asked with concern. "It's probably Roger again, but I'll find out," Freddie told her as he climbed out of bed in his boxer shorts. Jackie didn't say anything, she was worried that he'd loose his temper again. Freddie answered the door to find Brian standing outside his suite. "Well, good morning, Freddie," Brian greeted. "Hello, Bri," Freddie greeted back. Brian saw Jackie still sitting up in bed. "Hi, Jackie," Brian waved and Jackie waved back as she headed to the bathroom to get dressed. "How are you after what happened last night?" "Well, I'm calm now after telling Roger to get lost," Freddie explained. "Hmmm," Brian nodded. "How are you doing?" Freddie asked as Brian walked in followed by the close of the door. They sit down on the couch as the conversation continued. "Well, fine this morning, but I'd like to apologize for Roger's behavior anyway," Brian began to explain. "Oh, don't worry about it, Bri," Freddie assured. "Like I just said, I told him to get lost anyway. I don't know why actually." "Well, he's been jealous of you being with Jackie," Brian went on. "Oh? He was," Freddie asked in surprise. "Yes, but I told him that he should remain with Dominique. I mean, he really loves her on the inside & outside," Brian stated. "He didn't mean to be a jealous guy because he forgot that he encouraged you to reveal your feelings to Jackie. Besides, he wants you to remain with her anyway. I mean, you guys are best friends and Roger knows that you and Jackie are an amazing couple." "Thanks, Bri," Freddie said. "No problem, mate," Brian responded. |
| queen mercury 33542 23.09.2006 15:10 |
Jackie returned from the bathroom, wearing some nice cacky shorts and a top. "You look lovely darling!", Freddie exclaimed as he walked over and gave her a peck on the cheek. "Thanks Freddie, but it's only a top and shorts." "It doesn't matter.", Freddie chimed in. "It's not the clothes that matter anyway, it's the beauty with in." Jackie blushed at this, and seing that her face was redened, Freddie kissed her again, this time with more passion, causing her to blush deeper. "I must go.", Brian said. "Her face is turning scarlet. It's probably because I'm standing here." When Brian left, Jackie and Freddie went off to get some breakfast. On the way, |
| Queen_Rox 24.09.2006 01:45 |
they ran into a few American fans, who are on their High School graduation vacation, but one of them wanted to leave him alone. "Hey, look, you guys!" one fan named Angela squealed. "It's Freddie Mercury from Queen!" "Oh, my gosh! It is him," exclaimed her friend Stephanie. "C'mon, guys, let's just leave him and his new girlfriend alone, okay," suggested Rachel. "Why?" asked Angela. "I think they need their privacy," answered Rachel. "So let's do them a favor by not invading it, okay?" "Okay," agreed Angela & Stephanie. Freddie was stunned and surprised by what he saw. He seemed to realize that one of Queen's fans is trying to give him a break. "Sorry, I had to stop my friends from trying to invade your privacy, Freddie," apologized Rachel. "I was trying to encourage them to be considerate towards the feelings of others, not to mention celebrities." Stephanie and Angela agreed with what Rachel said and apologized, too. Freddie... |
| queen mercury 33542 24.09.2006 14:37 |
held out his hand to Angela. "It's alright darling. Thanks for the privasy. You don't know how much a lot of fans invade that." "I would hate it too.", replied Stephanie. "Once again, we appologize.", Angela said with embarrassment. "No trouble. Here, sit down." He motioned to three chairs that he had placed at the table. Jackie and the girls talked about all kinds of things, including how they first heard queen. "So, this is what it would be like if I went to a queen fan convention!", Freddie laughed. The girls and Jackie smiled and laughed back. Meanwhile, Brian roger and John for |
| Queen_Rox 24.09.2006 20:11 |
Meanwhile, John, Roger, and Brian were going out for breakfast, they couldn't find a good restaurant to dine. Worse yet, they couldn't find Jackie or Freddie anywhere in London. Until finally, they found a restaurant where they also found Freddie and Jackie, talking to three 18-year-old fans from the United States. "So, Angela, what brought you and your friends to London," inquired Freddie. "Well, we came here for a week as a highlight of our summer break before going off to college this fall," Angela explained. "Really?" Jackie asked. "Where are you guys heading to college?" "We applied for UCLA and we finally got in!" exclaimed Stephanie. "That's great," Freddie commented. Just then, Roger, John, and Brian found them. |
| queen mercury 33542 25.09.2006 00:05 |
"Hello darlings!", Freddie greeted warmly. "Hi you two love birds.", Roger joked. Rachel loved brian and couldn't believe she was staring in to his eyes! "Hello Mr. May.", she said shyly. "Rachel!", Angela scolded. "Leave him alone!" "It's alright.", Brian said warmly. Jackie went to get Freddie another cup of tea. When she returned, the whole cup spilt on her! She returned in sobbs. "What's wrong Darling?", Freddie commented as he stroked her hair. "I went to get you another cup of tea, and this rude guy bumped right in front of me!" "Now, who would do such a thing?", Freddie asked hotly. "Not sure." Freddie got up and |
| Queen_Rox 25.09.2006 20:33 |
found the same guy who knocked the tea on Jackie. Freddie then discovered---to his disgust---that the guy was an 18-year-old American teenager dressed in punk clothing, with spiky red hair, and black eyeliner. "Excuse me, young man," he snapped. The young man turned around to see the angry Freddie standing before him. "What," snapped the teenager. "It is my concern that you knocked the tea in front of my girlfriend Jackie," Freddie roared. The teenager pretended to be shocked although he knew that what he did was wrong. "I did?" he asked, feigning a puzzled look on his face. "Yes, you did!" Freddie yelled. "Hey, man, what'd you want me to do about it," he asked again, but rudely. "Well, kid, I want you to go over there and apologize to Jackie," he suggested. "Hey, it's not my fault!" the punk teen complained. "She didn't watch where she was going!" "Save it, young man," Freddie demanded sternly. "Now do as I say this instant!" "Okay, dude, just chill out," the young man told Freddie. So, they went back to Jackie and the rest of the group, as the young man apologized. |
| Queen_Rox 25.09.2006 20:45 |
"Jason," scolded Rachel. "How could you?" "You know this guy," asked Jackie, who's eyes are now dry and is now surprised. "Yeah, he was part of the rebelious group in our high school," explained Stephanie. "What a slacker!" Roger commented rudely. "How the hell did he manage to graduate anyway?" "Roger!" Brian snapped in a hoarse voice. "Sorry, Bri," Roger apologized. "Well, he's no longer a slacker," Stephanie said. "Rachel, Angela, and I tutored Jason and his group to get them to get their act together to complete their graduation required classes. You know what? They finally made it." "Oh," said Roger, who was feeling guilty for labeling Jason. "Sorry, Jason." "Ah, no big deal, dude," Jason said. "At least I'll try to apply for college, as long as I study hard." "Good for you," Brian said, patting Jason on the back. "Well, you're forgiven, but you must straighten up often, young man," Freddie told him. "You've got it, boss and thanks," said Jason, shaking Freddie's hand. |
| queen mercury 33542 25.09.2006 20:50 |
Jason, queen and the rest of the group at the table talked for a long time about different things. "So what will you be majoring in Jason?", Roger asked with interest. "Not sure yet. I'd like to be a doctor, but I'm not sure yet." "Sounds very interesting.", Freddie observed. "What sort of doctor would you be?", Freddie asked. " "A sergeon." "My mother said before I wanted to play guitar, that I wanted to be a sergeon.", Brian said. "I don't remember that though." "What about you, pretty lady?", Roger said flertaciously to Stephanie. Stephanie, blushing told him that she was studying to be a nurse. "Very lovely!", he exclaimed. "Then, maybe you can pop my back in to place?", he suggested with a smerk. "Now Roger!", John scolded. "You have a wife. Leave her be." But Roger |
| Queen_Rox 25.09.2006 21:52 |
wasn't listening. Being a lady's man of Queen, he tried to kiss Stephanie, but Freddie has had it. "Roger," Freddie said in a stern voice. "Keep your hands off this young lady. She may be 18, but she's probably got a boyfriend back home." "That's right," Stephanie said. "Brandon may be somewhere here in London with the rest of the class, but at least you're lucky he isn't here." "Why?" Roger asked, now feeling guilty again. "He may not be the violent type and if he were here, he might tell you to back off without hurting you." So, Roger backed off of Stephanie. "You're right, John," Roger said. "I do have a girlfriend." He apologized to Stephanie for his behavior. "Don't worry about it," she said. "I got this all the time at school." "Well, good luck with the nursing program at the University," Roger told her. "Thanks," Stephanie said with a smile. "So, Angela," Brian began. "What will you major?" "Well, I'm planning on studying opera in college, so I'll be majoring in music," revealed Angela. "Really?" asked Jackie. "I actually majored in music as well, my main instruments my voice as well as piano." |
| Queen_Rox 26.09.2006 00:10 |
"Awesome!" Angela commented and then asked. "So, how did you and Freddie meet?" "Yeah, you guys make such a cute couple," Rachel commented. "Thank you, darling," Freddie chimed in and began to explain tp the girls and Jason as well. |
| queen mercury 33542 26.09.2006 00:59 |
As Freddie explained how he and Jackie met, Jackie blushed, taking a drink of her hot chockolate. "When he does love of my life, it brings tears to my eyes.", Jackie confided. "I don't mean to make you cry darling.", Freddie soothed. "Oh no. It's okay. It's just that you sing it from your heart and I feel your emotions." After the girls and Jason left, the four members of Queen, and Jackie said they were all very polite and they wondered if they would ever run in to them again. "That angela sure looked pretty.", Brian said with a dreamy look in his eye. "Aw! Bri's getting romantic tonight.", Freddie laughed. "Nothing wrong with that. Is there?", Jackie asked, taking a bite of a cinamon bagle. "You're right my dear. There is nothing wrong with that.", Freddie said, as he gently scooped her in to his arms. John smiled, happily watching the couple. Just then, cinamon bege |
| Queen_Rox 26.09.2006 02:31 |
accidentally fell out of Jackie's hand and onto Freddie's lap. "Oops," Jackie gasped. "Sorry, honey." "There's no need to be sorry, my dear," Freddie laughed. "Accidents happen." They laughed as Jackie helped Freddie clean the stain on Freddie's jeans with a napkin partly soaked from a cold glass of water. "Thank you, dear," Freddie said. "You're welcome," Jackie responded. Brian and Roger giggled at them like fourth grade boys. "Boys, don't laugh, it's not funny," John scolded Brian and Roger as if he were their father. "Yes, it is, John," Freddie assured him. |
| Queen_Rox 26.09.2006 19:00 |
**revive** |
| queen mercury 33542 26.09.2006 19:08 |
Back at the hotel, Freddie showed Jackie some tapes of some solo material he was working on. "Wow! This is all great.", Jackie commented as Freddie lay beside her. "You really think so?", Freddie asked smiling. "Yes.", Jackie said smiling in to his eyes. He turned the tape off and a long passionate kiss followed and then, they lay in each other's arms, just enjoying the companionship and warmpth of one another. "You're a beautiful girl.", Freddie whispered as he stroked her hair. "So are you.", she gigled like a small girl. They lay for what seemed like hours, until they fell asleep. They were awakened by the sound of the phone. "Hello.", Freddie said in a groggily voice. |
| Queen_Rox 27.09.2006 01:10 |
I'm kinda out of ideas right now, so what should I add next? |
| queen mercury 33542 27.09.2006 01:19 |
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| queen mercury 33542 27.09.2006 01:20 |
Maybe the phone ringing could be Freddie's mom or sister? I'm not sure really. I'm sorry I haven't been posting. I haven't been feeling well. |
| Queen_Rox 27.09.2006 01:32 |
Oh, hope you feel better. You have a cold or something? I'll carry on with this story tomorrow when I get the chance. |
| queen mercury 33542 27.09.2006 02:42 |
I have this tickle in my throat and earlier I had a touch of fever. Hope I'm not coming down with something. Thanks queen rocks. |
| Queen_Rox 27.09.2006 10:32 |
You're welcome. :) |
| Queen_Rox 27.09.2006 21:45 |
"Freddie," a female voice was on the other line. It was Kashmira. "Hi, Kash," Freddie greeted followed by a yawn. "How are you doing?" |
| queen mercury 33542 27.09.2006 22:58 |
Kash then let out a yawn as well. "Stop that Freddie! Yawning is contagous you know!" Freddie laughed. "Sorry Darling. What are you up to?" "Nothing really. Just wanted to know if you wanted to come down to India with me and the parents. Aunt Shero isn't doing so well." "What's wrong?", Freddie said, tears swelling in his eyes. "She's got to have tests done at the hospital. They don't know what it is, but something is wrong." Jackie, sieng Freddie in distress, put her arms around his neck. "It's okay love." When Freddie got off the phone, he explained to Jackie what was going on. "She was the aunt who I loved to stay with during my days in school.", he explained. Jackie then |
| Queen_Rox 27.09.2006 23:15 |
asked Freddie, "Is there anything I can do to help you?" "Yes," Freddie answered. "I want you to come down to India with me and my family for additional support. You can meet them and my aunt as well. Would you do it for me, darling?" "Of course I would, honey," Jackie accepted. "Thank you," said Freddie in relief as they shared a quick kiss and started packing. "Have you travelled down to India before, darling?" asked Freddie as he took his under garments out of the top drawer. "Yes. As a matter of fact, I flew down there just last year for a wedding of my college roommate named Sahana," Jackie explained as she neatly packed her suitcase while telling Freddie her social experience with one of her roommates from India. "What was her major," asked Freddie. "She majored in nursing, so she might be working at the hospital down there now," Jackie explained. There was a knock on the door and Freddie answered. There in the doorway stood Brian. "Brian, what are you doing here?" Freddie asked in surprise. "I just came to ask what the commotion is about," Brian answered. Freddie explained about the phone call he received from Kashmira. "Oh, my gosh! I'm sorry," Brian said sympathetically. "It's okay, I thought I'd ask Jackie to come with me for additional support," Freddie told him. "Oh, we'll stay behind. Good luck, Freddie," Brian said. "Thanks, Bri," said Freddie as he shared an embrace with his long-time companion. |
| queen mercury 33542 27.09.2006 23:44 |
As Freddie and Jackie headed out of the hotel, The three other friends waved goodbye as the lemo took off for the airport. "I should have put on a warmer sweater.", Jackie admitted, trying to snug in to her thin coat. "Here.", Freddie said, handing her his. "But you'll get cold!", she protested. "No I won't darling. I'll be fine. Don't worry about me." They sat huddled together as the lemo stopped and they got on to the plane heading for India. "So, tell me about your days in school.", Jackie asked curiously. "Well, I was good at boxing. If youc an believe that." She laughed. "Well, I saw your face torn pretty ugly around Jason and you looked like you were going to clobber him!", she said. THey |
| Queen_Rox 27.09.2006 23:56 |
laughed. "Yeah," Freddie agreed. "Except, since he was a punk teen I could tell he was acting like a tough guy. I bet he was involved in fights at school." "He probably was, according to Rachel," Jackie said. When they got to the airport, they gave their plane ticket to the ticket-taker and boarded the plane to India. |
| queen mercury 33542 28.09.2006 01:25 |
Jackie had forgotten that Freddie had a fear of flying and he squeezed her hand tightly. "Shshshsh. It's okay Darling.", she said softly. Freddie relaxed and huddled down beside her, smiling peacefully. "No one has ever made me feel the way you do.", he admitted. She blushed a little as they sipped on sodas and waited patiently for the plane to stop. It would take awhile, they knew, but they loved being with one another. That was the main thing. When they landed, after a day or two, they were greeted by Freddie's family. |
| Queen_Rox 28.09.2006 02:30 |
"Well, hello, Freddie," Jer greeted. "Who's this beautiful young lady?" "Mum, dad, and Kashmira," Freddie began. "I'd like you to meet my new American girlfriend Jackie. She's also a Queen fan." Then, he turned to Jackie. "Darling, these are my parents: Bomi Bulsara, my father and Jer Bulsara, my mother; and my younger sister, Kashmira Bulsara-Cooke." |
| Queen_Rox 28.09.2006 19:12 |
Jackie was excited to finally meet Freddie's family, even Kashmira. "So, you've been to India before," asked Kashmira. "Yes, I travelled here last year to attend a wedding of a college friend named Sahana," Jackie explained. |
| deleted user 28.09.2006 19:22 |
Sorry for interupting, but I love this story....carry on! xD |
| Queen_Rox 28.09.2006 19:25 |
It's okay. Thanks. Jackie's not feeling well, though. So, I'm gonna try to keep this thread alive until she's well again. |
| deleted user 28.09.2006 19:29 |
Awwwwww! I hope you feel better Jackie! |
| Crezchi 29.09.2006 05:26 |
Come on girls, keep it going! |
| Queen_Rox 29.09.2006 10:34 |
I'm trying, but I have to think of some more things to write. I was hoping Jackie would help me; however, it's best that she rests until she has recovered from her current affliction. So I'll write today when I get the chance. Please bear with me, guys. |
| Queen_Rox 29.09.2006 18:28 |
Okay, guys, here's the next part: "What major does Sahana have," Kashmira asked curiously. "Kashmira," Jer exclaimed. "It's okay, Mrs. Bulsara," Jackie assured her and then turned back to Kashmira. "Sahana's major is nursing, so she's probably a nurse here in India." Once Jackie is accquainted with Freddie's family, she, Freddie, and everyone headed for the hospital. Jackie, I hope you're feeling better because I need you to write the next part. If not, then I'll try to think of something. |
| queen mercury 33542 29.09.2006 19:22 |
I'm feeling a little better. Okay. I'll try the next part. When they arrived, they were dirrected to Freddie's aunt Sharoo's room and saw she was in room 4. "Hello Aunt Sharoo.", Freddie said smiling. She held out her arms. "Freddie! How have you been?" "I've been wonderful! I'd like you to meet my girlfriend Jackie." "Hello Mrs., um." "It's okay Darling.", Freddie assured. "Call me Sharoo my dear." It's lovely to have met you." They talk for awhile and then, Freddie and Jackie excused themselves and walked to the hospital caffitiria. On the way, |
| Queen_Rox 29.09.2006 19:34 |
Awesome! :D Anyway, back to the story... On their way, they ran into Sahana, Jackie's former college roommate whom was almost finished with her break from work. "Jackie," exclaimed Sahana, whom is very happy to see Jackie. "Hello, Sahana," greeted Jackie as they hugged. "My goodness! It's been quite a year since you came here for Rasheed and my wedding," Sahana admitted. "How have you been?" "Well, I was in England recently at one of Queen's shows," Jackie explained, then noticed Freddie is still with her. "How are you?" "Well, working at this hospital since last year. My break is done in three minutes." "Oh, Sahana, this is my boyfriend, Freddie Mercury, the lead singer and pianist from Queen," Jackie introduced. "Freddie, this is my former college roommate Sahana." "Hello, darling," Freddie greeted. "Nice to meet you, Freddie," Sahana said. "Jackie's told me some good things about you," Freddie told Sahana, whom blushed. "So, you went to school here in India," Sahana inquired. "Yes, I attended St. Peter's Boarding School in Panchgani," Freddie answered. 'Which was where I took piano lessons." "Well, Jackie and I went to the San Diego State University together and we graduated last year with our degrees,' Sahana explained. "She's the one who got me interested in your music. Now my husband and i are fans of yours, too. We both love all the albums, including the latest 'A Kind Of Magic.'" "Really," Freddie asked. "Yes," Sahana said. "Well, I'm gonna let you get back to work," Jackie told her. "It was nice to see you." "It was nice to see you, too, Jackie," Sahana said. "It was nice to meet you, Freddie." "You, too, darling," Freddie said as he and Jackie headed on to the cafeteria and Sahana went back to check on other hospital patients. When they got to the cafeteria... |
| queen mercury 33542 30.09.2006 12:30 |
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| Queen_Rox 30.09.2006 22:35 |
What happened, Queen Mercury? Okay, I'll try to come up with some more ideas for the next part. |
| deleted user 01.10.2006 01:13 |
This story is scary, I wonder what Freddie would think about it? |
| Crezchi 01.10.2006 03:03 |
<font color=Puce>I'm White And Nerdy wrote: This story is scary, I wonder what Freddie would think about it?He would think that you should stay out if you don't like it. No offence dude, but this is a STORY! FICTION, let them have their fun, some of us are enjoying it. |
| Queen_Rox 01.10.2006 03:13 |
Thanks, dude! I'm glad you and the others are enjoying this fiction so far. Don't worry, Jackie (hopefully) and I will come up with some new ideas for new parts tomorrow. Except, if I'm not here tomorrow, I'll be back the next day. |
| Queen_Rox 01.10.2006 17:02 |
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| Queen_Rox 03.10.2006 01:28 |
**Revive, again** |
| queen mercury 33542 03.10.2006 01:46 |
They sat and drank tea and talked about different things. Freddie told Jackie that he was thinking about donating money to this hospital. "I like doing things to help people. It's one of the joys of living.", he said, as he scooted clser to her. "That's so sweet love. ", she said smiling "It's just something that I've always wanted to do. While on he way to boarding school and while I was there walking the streets, I'd see all these people living in poverty. It always made me sad to look at them." As they stood up, a woman came over to them. "Are you Freddie Mercury?" "Mam. If you don't mind.", Freddie said briskly." "Sir, my daughter is here on vacation and she got sick from drinking the water here. They don't know what's wrong. She said she'd always wanted to meet you." Freddie gave a short sigh. "Alright. What's your name?" "I'm Charlotte from California.", she explained. "My daughter has loved you ever since she heard killer queen and she's ten years old." After awhile, Freddie and Jackied headed off to the girl's room. While inside, Freddie found some flowers on a table. |
| Queen_Rox 03.10.2006 02:10 |
He and Jackie then peered over at Charlotte's daughter, who is fast asleep in her bed. They sat down in a chair next to her quietly and maticulously to not wake her. Freddie appeared nervous, as he saw that she began to move and open her sleepy eyes. He was afraid that he's waking her, but Jackie took his hand to calm him down. When the girl saw Freddie and Jackie, she smiled showing a sign that she's glad that they're here. "Hello," Freddie greeted in a warm, soft tone. "Hi," she greeted back groggily. "Your mother told me that you're a Queen fan," he told her. "Yes, I am," the girl admitted as she sat up in bed. "What is your name, darling," he inquired. "My name is Kimberly, but my family and friends call me Kim," the girl answered. |
| Queen_Rox 04.10.2006 00:53 |
"It's such a pleasure to meet you, Kim," Freddie accquainted, giving Kim's hand a light kiss. She was surprised at how he acted like a gentleman. "This is my girlfriend, Jackie," Freddie introduced. "Hi, cutie," Jackie greeted reaching for Kim's hand. "How are you feeling?" "I'm feeling tired, but now that you're here, I'm really happy to meet you and Freddie," Kim answered. |
| deleted user 05.10.2006 08:53 |
REVIVE Does anybody know if Queen_Rox has left yet? If she has, then I'll continue the story with Queen Mercury. It won't be nearly as good, but I love this story so much! |
| queen mercury 33542 05.10.2006 15:05 |
Freddie smiled warmly at the girl and gave her hand a gentle squeeze. "What's your favorite song, my dear?", he asked with a smile. "I love Don't Stop me now, but one of my all time favorites is Killer Queen. The lyrics are so different, and well, cool!" Kim started to get excited and coughed a little. Jackie then went to get her some tea, but Freddie stopped her. "Darling, there is a thermus that I had filled up freshly with warm tea to take back with me. I haven't drank out of it. Pour some in a cup for her. Here. I brought an extra one. Hurry! She's coughing hard!" When Jackie gave Kim the tea, she relaxed a bit now. |
| deleted user 05.10.2006 23:52 |
Is it okay if I continue this story with you? If not, just act like I never wrote this.....xD After consuming every last drop of the warm liquid, Kim thanked Freddie and Jackie took the empty cup from her small, soft hands. Freddie, Kim and Jackie were so caught up in conversation that they lost track of time. Kim yawned and Freddie took a look at his watch. "Oh my!", he exclaimed, "look at the time!". "We had better let you rest, sweetheart. It was nice meeting you", Jackie said in a caring tone. "We'll see if we can come by tomorrow to chat", Freddie said as a loving smile grew on his face. "I really enjoyed meeting both of you!", the girl said cheerfully. Jackie and Freddie left the hospital and went to their hotel...... |
| queen mercury 33542 06.10.2006 13:21 |
I love it Beth! Sure. You can continue darling! You can help. |
| deleted user 06.10.2006 13:24 |
^Thanks...I miss Queen_Rox already! The story won't be the same without her! :( |
| Queen_Rox 06.10.2006 14:52 |
Freddie and Jackie left the hospital and went to their hotel to get ready for bed that night. They couldn't help but think about Freddie's Aunt Sharoo and his & Jackie's new friend Kim while they were still cooped up in their regular hospital rooms. Jackie and Freddie were fortunate that Charlotte asked them to meet her beloved, yet afflicted daughter Kim. They couldn't help feeling sympathetic of not only her, but also Aunt Sharoo, as they hoped to God that they will be all right. |
| queen mercury 33542 06.10.2006 17:59 |
As they lay together in bed that night, they talked as to what they could do to help the young girl. "If she needs money for anything, an operation? Maybe I can help out in that way.", Freddie smiled. "Perhaps, we both can or something. I'm not sure at this point. We'll have to see what happens. A lot of people that vacation here do have money.", she suggested with a smile. "Okay. Let's think of something a little more, special.", Freddie said smiling. "She privately told me that she always wanted to love Brian."", Jackie laughed. |
| Freddies Delilah 10.10.2006 04:58 |
Wait, how did this thread die?!? It's great. Really interesting idea, Queen Mercury. And, if you want this to continue, can I help with the story?? |
| Sweetie 10.10.2006 05:16 |
Why is Roger the basterd? I'd let him kiss me if he wanted to. |
| queen mercury 33542 10.10.2006 13:38 |
Sure. You can help out my dear. This thread is surely dying. As for Roger being a bastard, he isn't one. Why would you say that? That's to whoever wrote that comment. |
| queen mercury 33542 10.10.2006 15:28 |
"Hello?", Freddie said. "Hello Freddie.", His mother responded. "We just heard that Aunt Sharoo will be fine. It's a really bad stomach flu." "Oh my! I'll come down to visit with her. What did the doctor say?" "He told us that she was dehydrated and will be fine in a few days. They had to put an i vee in her." The next morning, Freddie and Jackie set off for the hospital once more. When they got there, |
| deleted user 10.10.2006 18:09 |
I belive I have "writers block" today because I don't know what to write! xD |
| queen mercury 33542 10.10.2006 20:08 |
<font color=grape>Mrs.Freddie Mercury wrote: I belive I have "writers block" today because I don't know what to write! xDI can totally understand that. Smile. I sort of have that too. Smile. |
| Freddies Delilah 11.10.2006 00:09 |
They were met by Kim's mother, Charlotte. Jackie smiled easily at her. "Hello. How's Kim feeling today?" Charlotte looked worried. "She's feeling worse. The doctors are trying their best, but..." she trailed off, not being able to finish the sentce. Freddie, seeing her distress... |
| deleted user 11.10.2006 16:58 |
He gave her a hug in order to calm her down. Hot tears began streaming down Charlotte's pale face like raindrops in a thunderstorm. "Shhhh. It's okay Charlotte, it's okay", Freddie said softly. After a few minutes of comforting from Jackie and Freddie, the worried mother's tears stopped flowing and she put a smile on her face. "I'm sorry, it's just I'm very scared", Charlotte confessed. "It's alright. Would it be okay for us to visit Kim's hospital room and talk with her?" |
| Sergei. 11.10.2006 18:18 |
Freddie was gaygaygaygaygaygaygay! Sorry to be a killjoy (Bad guy... big talkin'... small fry) I have a wild imagination too, but this is just weird. :/ Not meaning any offence. |
| deleted user 11.10.2006 18:28 |
<font color=teal>Cookies!!<h6>Spicy<h6> wrote: Freddie was gaygaygaygaygaygaygay! Sorry to be a killjoy (Bad guy... big talkin'... small fry) I have a wild imagination too, but this is just weird. :/ Not meaning any offence.*extreme sarcasm* WHAT?! FREDDIE WAS GAY?! xD |
| Sergei. 11.10.2006 18:33 |
I know people are gonna hate me for this, and I don't want them to, 'cause I'm a peacenik J and I know it's fiction, but…. It's just not real!!!! Freddie liked MEN… He was GAY. I know it doesn’t matter, but I was just saying… (And all this coming from a person who likes to hold their nose and shout "SCONES!!!") Okay… please no one hate me… carry on. :P PS and by the way, Queen Mercury and Queen rox, you guys are AWESOME writers :) |
| deleted user 11.10.2006 18:44 |
<font color=teal>Cookies!!<h6>Spicy<h6> wrote: I know people are gonna hate me for this, and I don't want them to, 'cause I'm a peacenik J and I know it's fiction, but…. It's just not real!!!! Freddie liked MEN… He was GAY. I know it doesn’t matter, but I was just saying… (And all this coming from a person who likes to hold their nose and shout "SCONES!!!") Okay… please no one hate me… carry on. :P PS and by the way, Queen Mercury and Queen rox, you guys are AWESOME writers :)I don't hate you Cookies! :) You said that "it's just not real"...well, that's why it's FICTION! xD I love ya cookies! You crack me up! :) I REALLY do not mean to be rude, I swear! |
| queen mercury 33542 11.10.2006 22:17 |
<font color=teal>Cookies!!<h6>Spicy<h6> wrote: I know people are gonna hate me for this, and I don't want them to, 'cause I'm a peacenik J and I know it's fiction, but…. It's just not real!!!! Freddie liked MEN… He was GAY. I know it doesn’t matter, but I was just saying… (And all this coming from a person who likes to hold their nose and shout "SCONES!!!") Okay… please no one hate me… carry on. :P PS and by the way, Queen Mercury and Queen rox, you guys are AWESOME writers :)It's okay cookies darling! I don't hate you. We do have slight oppinions though. I think Freddie was bi. He was with other women. We won't o in to that. Xd. Hugs. |
| queen mercury 33542 11.10.2006 22:44 |
Okay. Let's carry on! Xd! As Freddie and Jackie walked in to Kim's hospital room, they saw the fragile state the girl was in. "Poor girl.", Freddie softly said, as he looked at the sleeping girl. "What's her condission?", Jackie asked Charlotte. "The doctors don't know what it is yet. They are going to run more tests, but things arn't going so well." "We could ask a nurse to tell us what is going on.", Freddie suggested. "They won't tell you anything Freddie. It's impossible.", Jackie said with a sad face. "Well, at least we could try.", Freddie said, with hope in his eyes. Seing that Kim wasn't waking at any time, they said they would return back later and went off to see his aunt Sharoo, who was recovering nicely. |
| Freddies Delilah 12.10.2006 01:07 |
Freddie's aunt smiled and patted her newphew's cheek as Freddie sat on the chair beside her bed to talk to her. Jackie sat on the chair beside Freddie's as he chattered away to Aunt Sharoo. Somehow the topic got onto Kim. "She really is the sweetest little girl," Jackie said. "I only wish there was something we could do to help her." Seeing the tears in her eyes, Freddie put an arm arond her. "Shhhh, darling," he said softly. "She'll be ok." Jackie nodded, smiling shakily at Freddie. "I hope so," she replied, then stood up. "I'm going to go see if she's all right." Freddie nodded and... |
| Freddies Delilah 13.10.2006 04:57 |
*revive* Sorry, I just really don't want this thread to die!! And by the way, Queen Mercury, how's your Freddie Mercury FanFiction blog going? |
| queen mercury 33542 13.10.2006 21:19 |
Freddies Delilah wrote: *revive* Sorry, I just really don't want this thread to die!! And by the way, Queen Mercury, how's your Freddie Mercury FanFiction blog going?I don't want this thread to die either. By the way, my story isn't finished yet. Still working on it. The chapters are out of order with in the blog. The seventh chapter has eight feedback comments and the others have 0. |
| Freddies Delilah 14.10.2006 08:33 |
Queen Mercury wrote:Yeah, 'cause it's really good!! I can't wait to see what happens next - you're a really good writer!! In fact, I'm going to go leave a comment right now... :-)Freddies Delilah wrote: *revive* Sorry, I just really don't want this thread to die!! And by the way, Queen Mercury, how's your Freddie Mercury FanFiction blog going?I don't want this thread to die either. By the way, my story isn't finished yet. Still working on it. The chapters are out of order with in the blog. The seventh chapter has eight feedback comments and the others have 0. |
| Freddies Delilah 16.10.2006 02:29 |
*revive*!!! |
| queen mercury 33542 16.10.2006 18:06 |
said that he would be there as soon as he made sure his aunt was alright. When he got to Kim's room, her mother was holding her and trying to stay calm. "I think she'll be alright, but she needs blood and there isn't much time for her to live.", Charlotte sobbed. Freddie tried to soothe Charlotte but it wasn't any use. "Is there anyone who could give her blood?", Charlotte asked, wiping her eyes. "What is her blood type?", Jackie asked calmly. "It's O possitive.", Kim said. "Damn! I have A.", Freddie said in exasperation. "I have a too.", Jackie said hopelessly. Freddie thought for a moment. He went to a pay phone and called the only member of queen who had the same blood type as Kim. |
| galileo_figaro_magnifico 16.10.2006 21:26 |
ohhhh i love this story soo much! you guys rock!! lol carry on... |
| queen mercury 33542 17.10.2006 12:37 |
galileo_figaro_magnifico wrote: ohhhh i love this story soo much! you guys rock!! lol carry on...THanks darling. I'm glad you are enjoying it. You can join in on it if you like. |
| queen mercury 33542 17.10.2006 19:56 |
Meanwhile, while Freddie was on the phone, Jackie, Charlotte and Kim were listening to Queen's Album, The Game. "I don't know what it is about save me.", Kim said smiling, but it sounds so beautiful. Can you hear the emotion in Freddie's voice as he sang?" The other two women smiled. "Actually love, Save me was written by Brian May.", her mother corrected with a laugh and a soft smile. Kim returned her smile with a blush. "Aw! So you like Brian?", Jackie teased. "Yes. Well, if he was younger, of course." Freddie returned and |
| Freddies Delilah 17.10.2006 22:24 |
said, "All right, Brian's on his way. He'll be here as soon as possible." "Brian?" Kim asked. "As in, Brian May?" Her mother gave her a fond smile as Freddie nodded. Kim... A/N: Sorry it's short. I think I've got writer's block today, lol. |
| queen mercury 33542 17.10.2006 22:28 |
smiled even wider as Brian's name was mentioned. Freddie Jackie, and Charlotte excused themselves and Kim said it was alright. "Brian's blood type is the same s Kim's.", Freddie explained. "Most people wouldn't agree to such a thing!", Charlotte exclaimed with a smile. "Brian wants to do this.", Jackie said calmly. Just then, Brian arrived. When he spotted the two women and Freddie, he said hello and chatted to them for awhile. "So, what's wrong with the young lady?", he inquired sadly. |
| Freddies Delilah 17.10.2006 23:06 |
Charlotte sighed sadly. "She got sick from drinking the water here," she informed Brian. "The doctors say it's not too serious, but she needs blood..." She trailed off, thinking of her only daughter. Brian put a large comforting hand on her shoulder. "Hey," he said softly. "She'll be ok. I promise." She smiled shakily at him. "Thank you, Mr May," she said. Brian laughed. "Please, call me Brian. Nobody calls me Mr May." He paused. "Now, where is this young lady?" |
| queen mercury 33542 17.10.2006 23:51 |
"She's in the room acrossed from us.", Freddie said. As the four walked in to the room, Kim was fast asleep. "I don't want to wake her.", Brian whispered to Charlotte. "We can come back. Visiting hours arn't over till nine.", Jackie replied. They all walked out down to the caffitiria to have a cup of tea. While they were there, they |
| Freddies Delilah 19.10.2006 23:57 |
Chatted some more, Freddie with his arm around Jackie. Brian and Charlotte seemed to be getting along very well. While they were sipping tea, Sahana walked past and, grinning, put her hands over Jackie's eyes. "Guess who," she said playfully. Jackie wriggled her head. "Sahana! Come on, get off." "All right," her friend laughed, removing her hands. "Excuse me," said Brian. "I don't think I've met this young lady before." Jackie quickly made the introductions. "Brian, this is my old college room mate, Sahana. 'Hana, this is Brian, one of Freddie's friends." "Nice to meet you," they both said at the same time, then laughed. |
| deleted user 20.10.2006 18:14 |
(This is really good! Ok sorry, go on!) |
| Freddies Delilah 23.10.2006 06:47 |
*revive* |
| Queen-Obsessed 24.10.2006 16:06 |
(wow this is really good glad I checked this thread...sorry keep going, PLEASE!) |
| Queen-Obsessed 24.10.2006 16:18 |
K kind of random but do you realize that Brian May was in a band called smile before he was in QUEEN? just thought I'd mention that since people say smile alot as in the action but it is still kind of entertaining |
| queen mercury 33542 24.10.2006 20:37 |
QUEEN OBSESSED wrote: K kind of random but do you realize that Brian May was in a band called smile before he was in QUEEN? just thought I'd mention that since people say smile alot as in the action but it is still kind of entertainingYes. I never thought of that, but he was in a band called smile. Laugh. Thanks for bringing that up. |
| queen mercury 33542 24.10.2006 20:40 |
The friends chatted away until Sahana had to return back to work, and Freddie, along with Jackie brian and schalotte, arrived back at Kim's room. They found her awake now, smiling shyly at who she imagined was Brian May. "It couldn't be.", she thought, as she peered up in to his eyes. Charlotte walked over to her. "Honey, a special friend is here. He's going to give you some blood okay? You're going to be just fine." |
| Freddies Delilah 26.10.2006 09:10 |
Kim went pale, though nodded at the same time. "Kim?" asked Jackie, concerned. "Are you all right?" The girl nodded, then shook her head, then shrugged. "Um, yes, sort of. I just kinda have a phobia of needles." Jackie laughed in sympathy as Brian grinned (author's note: Ha! For once it wasn't 'smiled'. That was an interesting point, by the way, QUEEN OBSESSED). "It's all right," he soothed the girl. "I'm also not all too fond of needles," he confessed. |
| queen mercury 33542 26.10.2006 20:10 |
"Well, maybe we'll just think pleasant thoughts.", Kim suggested to Brian. "I think so. What a wonderful idea!", he beamed. Freddie agried that thinking posatively was the best way to go. Just then, the nurse came in. "It's time for the blood transfusion to take place. Are you two ready?", she looked to Kim and Brian. "Anything to save this young lady's life.", Brian replied. |
| Freddies Delilah 27.10.2006 01:13 |
Kim blushed and smiled shyly at Brian, who, seeing she was still slightly nervous, put a large comforting hand on her shoulder. "Well, then," said the nurse said, "let's get started." Kim took a deep breath. "All right," she said. "Let's go." |
| queen mercury 33542 28.10.2006 14:54 |
The nurse took Brian and Kim to another room, where Brian gave the blood to Kim. Afterward, they both felt weak and tired so the nurse took Kim back to her room and put another bed acrossed from Kim's for Brian. The others looked on in concern. "Did everything go alright?", Freddie asked the nurse. "Yes. It's normal for the recipient giving the blood and the one recieving it, to be weak after." |
| Freddies Delilah 30.10.2006 02:55 |
Freddie nodded in reply to the nurse, and walked out of the room. Jackie was sitting with Charlotte, the two woman chatting quietly. "Darling?" he said to Jackie. Jackie looked up from Charlotte's face. "Yes, Freddie?" "Ready to go back to the hotel?" he asked. Jackie nodded, standing up. Freddie put his arm around her waist, and said to Charlotte, "We'll see you tomorrow." |
| deleted user 31.10.2006 08:31 |
As soon as the couple arrived at the hotel room, Jackie sat down on the bed and broke down in tears. Freddie ran over to her and scooped her up in his muscular arms and kissed her on the forehead. "What's wrong, darling?", asked Freddie. "I'm worried about Kim and Brian", Jackie confessed. Freddie comforted Jackie and made sure she was alright. Eventually, the streams of tears turned into giggles and kisses. Freddie threw Jackie onto the soft silken sheets and jumped on top of her. |
| queen mercury 33542 31.10.2006 15:07 |
They made long passionate love. Afterward, Freddie ordered some take out for chinese, since Jackie was craving it badly. "Don't worry darling. They'll be fine.", Fredie whispered in to Jackie's hair as they still lay intangled in each other's embrace. "I hope so Freddie. A lot of complications can happen." "I don't think anything will happen. Everything will be fine. I'll call them to make sure. Alright?" "If they are asleep, don't wake them.", she cried silently. Freddie kissed her lightly on the mouth and told her everything was okay once more. |
| Freddies Delilah 02.11.2006 22:51 |
Jackie wrapped her arms around Freddie's neck, entangling her slender fingers in his dark hair. Freddie pulled her even closer to him and lightly kissed her neck. Then he turned her head and kissed her on the mouth. "Everything's going to be all right, darling," he said softly. "Everything, I promise." |
| queen mercury 33542 03.11.2006 01:01 |
"I sure hope so.", Jackie sobbed again. Freddie snuggled close beside her and touched his hand to her cheek to wipe away the tears that formed there. "Darling, people have things like this happen a lot. Everything will be fine." "Okay. I am just so tired, emotional, drained. All of it." "Rest dear.", Freddie said soothingly, wrapping the blanket around her. |
| deleted user 03.11.2006 07:57 |
Freddie called to make sure everything was alright. Nobody answered the phone, so he decided to try again in the morning. Freddie joined Jackie on the bed and realized she was already sleeping like a baby. He watched Jackie sleep for hours. Freddie loved the way her hair was draped over the thick pillow and how her entire body was peaceful. He kissed her on the forehead and fell into a deep sleep.... "Wake up Freddie!" Jackie's voice sounded urgent. The bright morning light shone through the window as Freddie saw tears streaming down Jackie's delicate face. |
| queen mercury 33542 04.11.2006 00:00 |
"What's wrong darling?", he asked in alarm. "I don't know, but I just had a terrible dream that something is wrong at the hospital. I have dreams like this, and sometimes they come true. Oh Freddie!", she sobbed. "Now, calm down dear.", he said softly, dabbing at her eyes. "I'll ring the hospital." |
| Freddies Delilah 07.11.2006 22:58 |
Queen Mercury wrote: "What's wrong darling?", he asked in alarm. "I don't know, but I just had a terrible dream that something is wrong at the hospital. I have dreams like this, and sometimes they come true. Oh Freddie!", she sobbed. "Now, calm down dear.", he said softly, dabbing at her eyes. "I'll ring the hospital."Ok, the post order obviously got messed up, so I'll continue from here. |
| Freddies Delilah 07.11.2006 23:09 |
Freddie dialed the hospital's number and waited as the phone rang, still watching Jackie with worry. "Hello, the (sorry-I-can't-think-of-a-good-name) Hospital, how may I help you?" "Hi, I'm a friend of Kim Simmons and Brian May. I was wondering, how are they?" "Just hold on a minute, sir," the woman on the other end of the line replied. Freddie could hear the rustling of paper. "Ah, yes, Brian May and Kim Simmons... they had a blood tranfusion yesterday. However, not everything has gone to plan." Freddie could hear the worry in her voice, and couldn't contain his worry. "What happened?" he asked quickly. Jackie's eyes were wide as she watched him. |
| Queen-Obsessed 07.11.2006 23:12 |
ACK!!! KEEP GOING!!! lol sorry I love this thread. |
| Freddies Delilah 19.11.2006 07:55 |
*REVIVE* Sorry, it might take me a while to write my part of this whenever... my computer's kind of messed up right now, so I have to borrow my dad's laptop... |