OK, but not brilliant - sorry! Nice ideas for the intro, but the vocal is in a different key to the instruments on a couple of bits. Also, some of the edits are quite abrupt in places. Thanks for taking the time to try something though - I think most of us are a bit stuck for ideas at the moment.
I think it's good. As I said before it would be interesting to hear and it is I like what you've done at the beginning. It's kind of unpredicatable when you first hear it.
And thankyou Daniel vZ for e-mailing it to me.