Munchsack's Novel - Chapter 2 [QueenConcerts]

Munchsack 07.03.2006 13:18	Sorry it's taken so long.
Munchsack 07.03.2006 13:23	Also must apologise for multi-posts, couldn't get the damn thing to work properly.
flash! 28068 07.03.2006 14:01	Its about time! lol
deleted user 07.03.2006 17:05	I love it.Keep the chapters comin.would you mind a tiny critisism though??? T just thought you said Bethany way too many times and it sorta bugged me.Thats all,otherwise it was great and cant wait for ch 3!!!
Munchsack 08.03.2006 12:22	Really? Munchsack changed that because he thought he was saying 'she' too many times.
Haystacks Calhoun 08.03.2006 13:10	oh my
Munchsack 08.03.2006 13:11	What do you mean, Haystacks?

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