| blerp 05.03.2006 00:11 |
THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 1. (Based on the famous Freddie and Roger story of them trying to boil an egg.) "Rog, darling, how exactly do you boil an egg??" asked Freddie, holding an egg. "Umm, I don't know, it has something to do with water though." responded Roger, putting down his paper. "Well, let's just try...I put the water on the stove already. Oh! It's boiling!" exclaimed Freddie. Freddie tries to put the egg in, but hesitates and withdraws. "Here - you try!" Roger then tries to put the egg in, creeping up to the pot with Freddie very close behind him, his hands on Roger's shoulders, peering over at the pot. He drops it rather roughly, an as doing so, Freddie squeezes Roger's shoulders quite hard. "Dammit! Let me try again." Another cracked egg. "Here, Rog, dear, let us get ready to go out to eat since we can't make a damn egg." "All right." They both leave the kitchen. (To be continued.)© R.P. |
| A2thaB 05.03.2006 01:58 |
Classic! |
| MelinaMercury 07.03.2006 16:26 |
haha that is good!! X |
| RETROLOVE 07.03.2006 17:38 |
LadyMercury: That was too funny, lol I just find it hard to believe that they cant cook, especially Roger!! I mean come on, Debbie should have taught him something, lol! |
| blerp 07.03.2006 18:34 |
Thanks! The story is set in the early 70s, as was the real story - I just thought it would be cuter. And this whole thing is supposed to be very silly, and not serious or anything. Glad you liked chapter 1! Here's chapter 2! :P THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 2. So while Freddie and Roger are getting ready, John walks into the kitchen and sees the pot of still boiling water and egg yolk on the counter and goes, "Freddie and Roger must have been trying to cook again...", then sighs and puts in another egg for Freddie, thinking that once Freddie and Roger come back from wherever they are in the house, that the egg will be done. John leaves the kitchen. After a few minutes, Brian walks in, feeling rather peckish, and sees the egg. "Oh, joy!" he says. So Brian scoops out the egg and eats it with pleasure, with a side of tea and some toast. Just after Brian finishes his little lunch, Freddie and Roger come bounding into the kitchen all dressed up to go on their dinner-do. Then John comes in after them and says to Freddie, "Did you like your egg, Freddie?" and Freddie by the minute is becoming more and more flustered saying, "What egg? I see Brian has had the egg you made for me, John! Eh!!!" Silence in the kitchennnnn. (i'm on chapter 4, haha) |
| blerp 07.03.2006 18:37 |
onelonelypussycat wrote: LadyMercury: That was too funny, lol I just find it hard to believe that they cant cook, especially Roger!! I mean come on, Debbie should have taught him something, lol!Haha, I know! To be honest, I really like Debbie, I'd like to meet her! |
| RETROLOVE 07.03.2006 18:52 |
Ladymercury: This is like R.Kelly's trapped in the closet video...keep going, keep going!!! I wish I could add something on, I dont have a good imagnation like that, lol? Have you seen that movie "the 40-year old virgin?" |
| blerp 07.03.2006 19:07 |
Nope, never watched it! I love Trapped in the Closet! I didn't finish it though...That's about the only rap I listen to, hahaha |
| blerp 07.03.2006 19:09 |
THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 3. Brian just sits there, very content, and says to Freddie, "I'm sorry. I was hungry." Freddie doesn't really respond, just sticks his tongue out at him and turns to John: "Well! Let us go out to dinner! Shall we?" John makes to follow him and Roger, and Brian gets up as well. "Brian -- you've already eaten. You're staying home." says Freddie. "Aww, man..." So John drives Freddie and Roger to a fancy Italian restaurant and are seated at a table immediately. The waiter comes by and asks what they'd like to order. Roger orders first: "Have you got spaghetti-Os here?" asks Roger. "Yes." "Oh, goodie!" exclaims Roger, clapping his hands together like a child does when very delighted. Then John orders. "Tea...And cheese on toast, and cold chicken." Lastly, Freddie: "I will have a lobster, caviar, and a bottle of champagne. I prefer Cristal...Make that two bottles, the second one being Chandon, please." As you can see, Freddie is probably the only one to have ordered real food, and food that might actually be served at a fancy restaurant. Maybe. Er...maybe not. Ahem. The End. Probably not. |
| RETROLOVE 07.03.2006 19:16 |
LOL @ Brian couldnt go, cause he already ate....LOL!!! |
| blerp 07.03.2006 19:34 |
this is a funny bit. then i'll put up ch. 4 ha DELETED SCENE OF THE EGG STORY. Roger, a little frightened of going near the stove, stood two feet away from it. Then Roger emitted a very long: "Eeeeeeoooouuuuggghhh!" And chucked the egg. The egg landed in the pot, splashing water everywhere. "Slam dunk!" yelled Roger, turning to Freddie, in hopes of a few |
| blerp 07.03.2006 19:35 |
... exclamations of praise from the dark-haired beauty. But Roger only received a very put-out looking Freddie, with his arms crossed, because he really-verily wanted that egg. |
| RETROLOVE 07.03.2006 19:44 |
Hell to tha naw...lol! |
| blerp 07.03.2006 19:50 |
Oo, this is fun THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 4. Freddie, Roger, and John had finished their meals and were now talking amicably and drinking their coffee. John looked at his watch and started, then took out a piece of paper in his pocket. "What's wrong, John, darling?" asked Freddie, taking another swig of his coffee, then his champagne. "I just forgot! I have a grocery list! But I never bought the groceries! We must get to the shops now!" cried John, standing up quickly, knocking over the croissants. "Oh my! Let us go then, I don't feel like making peanut butter and jelly for the next week!" said Freddie, putting down a bunch of bills on the table, leading Roger and John out of the restaurant. |
| RETROLOVE 07.03.2006 19:58 |
What...you said John forgot to get the groceries...lol, yeah, they'd better do that, but I must say, that Peanut butter and Jelly sandwiches are the bomb!!! One of favorites!! |
| RETROLOVE 07.03.2006 20:10 |
Oh yeah, Ladymercury, make sure John doesnt forget to grab his coupons that he clipped, and saversclub card, when he goes to the grocery store, lol! |
| blerp 07.03.2006 21:18 |
Favourite chapter, i think, 'cos it's so indifferent haha THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 5. "Are corn flakes on your list?" asked Freddie. "Erm...Yes. Yes, yes, I have corn flakes on here," replied John. A small moment of silence. "What about ham?" said Roger from the back, leaning against the window with his hands behind his head. "Mhmm..," said John. "Don't worry. I have everything on here. Do we need sugar?" "Sugar! Of course. I put that in my tea for me to stay sweet!" cried Freddie. "Sheesh." The car became silent. John drove on, speeding up every so often, humming a tune of something. Freddie fiddled with the radio, flipping around till he found a station he liked. Then he became bored with it and changed the station again. Freddie turned it off after a while and stared out the window, admiring the prettiness of downtown London. Roger still layed on the seat, head against the window, feeling a bit sleepy. He twisted a fine golden lock of hair on his head and occasionally scratched his nose and sniffled. "All right, we're here." said John, breaking the silence. "Is anyone coming with me?" Freddie and Roger shrugged. "I'm tired." muttered Roger. "Mm, me too! I just want to sit at the driver's seat for a bit while you do your shopping." said Freddie. "Why do you want to do that?" asked John. "Because I want a feeling of driving, darling! You know I don't know how." "Oh, yeah. Well, be back in a while!" said John, climbing out of the car. He went into the store. Freddie scrambled over to the other side and sat behind the wheel. He turned on the radio again, went through a bunch of stations again, and stopped at one playing "Break On Through" by the Doors. Freddie started singing along, squirming in his seat like a toad. Roger almost fell asleep into a light doze, but woke up again and stared for a bit at Freddie while he drummed on the steering wheel and shouted. Roger laughed. "Hm? Like my singing, Rog, hm, don't you?" said Freddie, cocking his head to one side. "Yes, ha, it's fantastic!" cried Roger, sitting up now. "Join me in the front, will you? Be a dear, now." Roger climbed over from the back into the passenger seat. Freddie patted him on the shoulder, rested his hand there for some time, and continued singing along with the next song that had come on, "Come Together." "Cor, I like this song!" said Roger, bouncing up and down. Freddie and Roger put their arms around each others shoulders and sang the song as loudly as they could. Passersby walking by the car stared quizzically into the car, wondering what such thing could provoke so much enthusiasm in two young, wild men. |
| RETROLOVE 08.03.2006 01:16 |
Okay, LadyMercury... Meanwhile, what is John and Brian up too? I feel kinda bad for Brian in the story, dude was just hungry, he did know who's egg it was, but hey, your the writer, I'm the reader...SERIOUSLY, FREDDIE DIDNT OR COULDNT DRIVE IN REAL LIFE, RIGHT? I wish I could add more to this story, but I'm noooooo good at this kinda stuff, but I'm good writing poetry, but not this kinda stuff, lol... |
| RETROLOVE 08.03.2006 01:16 |
Okay, LadyMercury... Meanwhile, what is John and Brian up too? I feel kinda bad for Brian in the story, dude was just hungry, he did know who's egg it was, but hey, your the writer, I'm the reader...SERIOUSLY, FREDDIE DIDNT OR COULDNT DRIVE IN REAL LIFE, RIGHT? I wish I could add more to this story, but I'm noooooo good at this kinda stuff, but I'm good writing poetry, but not this kinda stuff, lol... |
| All I Hear Is Radio Gaga 08.03.2006 09:39 |
Hahhahah this is great.... |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 08.03.2006 10:13 |
LadyMercury wrote: Favourite chapter, i think, 'cos it's so indifferent haha THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 5. "Are corn flakes on your list?" asked Freddie. "Erm...Yes. Yes, yes, I have corn flakes on here," replied John. A small moment of silence. "What about ham?" said Roger from the back, leaning against the window with his hands behind his head. "Mhmm..," said John. "Don't worry. I have everything on here. Do we need sugar?" "Sugar! Of course. I put that in my tea for me to stay sweet!" cried Freddie. "Sheesh." The car became silent. John drove on, speeding up every so often, humming a tune of something. Freddie fiddled with the radio, flipping around till he found a station he liked. Then he became bored with it and changed the station again. Freddie turned it off after a while and stared out the window, admiring the prettiness of downtown London. Roger still layed on the seat, head against the window, feeling a bit sleepy. He twisted a fine golden lock of hair on his head and occasionally scratched his nose and sniffled. "All right, we're here." said John, breaking the silence. "Is anyone coming with me?" Freddie and Roger shrugged. "I'm tired." muttered Roger. "Mm, me too! I just want to sit at the driver's seat for a bit while you do your shopping." said Freddie. "Why do you want to do that?" asked John. "Because I want a feeling of driving, darling! You know I don't know how." "Oh, yeah. Well, be back in a while!" said John, climbing out of the car. He went into the store. Freddie scrambled over to the other side and sat behind the wheel. He turned on the radio again, went through a bunch of stations again, and stopped at one playing "Break On Through" by the Doors. Freddie started singing along, squirming in his seat like a toad. Roger almost fell asleep into a light doze, but woke up again and stared for a bit at Freddie while he drummed on the steering wheel and shouted. Roger laughed. "Hm? Like my singing, Rog, hm, don't you?" said Freddie, cocking his head to one side. "Yes, ha, it's fantastic!" cried Roger, sitting up now. "Join me in the front, will you? Be a dear, now." Roger climbed over from the back into the passenger seat. Freddie patted him on the shoulder, rested his hand there for some time, and continued singing along with the next song that had come on, "Come Together." "Cor, I like this song!" said Roger, bouncing up and down. Freddie and Roger put their arms around each others shoulders and sang the song as loudly as they could. Passersby walking by the car stared quizzically into the car, wondering what such thing could provoke so much enthusiasm in two young, wild men.I want the next chapter! (and incidently it should include more Freddie and Roger :D) hehe. |
| DreaminQueen 08.03.2006 18:23 |
i love this!!! Keep going... I want to write a chapter! Let me know which one and when its my turn!!! :-P Good music mentioned in here btw!!!! |
| blerp 08.03.2006 20:12 |
Voila! Chapitre 6! THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 6. Roger and Freddie were quite bored now. How long was it going to take John to buy groceries? They passed the time for a while poking each other, then playing footsies. The radio was still blaring, and it was very dark out now. "I miss John," said Roger. "I wonder if he will come back. With my ham." "Don't you worry, dear," replied Freddie, draping an arm around him. "I will keep you company!" They sat a little closer, glimpsing at each other every so often. Freddie then lay his head on top of Roger's and began to sing softly. Roger was sweetly lulled by this and smiled. He lifted his right arm up and put it round Freddie, then drawing him in and hugging him. He heard Freddie sigh into his hair. "You are very sweet, Roger!" murmured Freddie, excitement rising in him. He rested his hand over Roger's elbow. But then they were interrupted by John, knocking on Freddie's window. Freddie took himself off Roger and rolled it down. "Freddie's Tarts and Prozzies Service, how may I assist you?" Freddie called out in a humourous, light tone. "Haha, Freddie, but come on, let me in. These bags are heavy!" "You're going to have to pay us if you want to bag us!" replied Freddie, showing John his chest. Roger chuckled. John smiled and opened the door, shoving Freddie aside. Roger quickly got out and went into his place in the back. John set the bags between he and Freddie, and Freddie almost immediately began rummaging through them. "Hey!" exclaimed Freddie, picking out a lemon, "This looks like me!" He was pointing down to his privy area. John and Roger both grinned widely, laughing silently. They drove off. I'm taking this sensual stuff slowly, I want to keep you all on your toes, haha! |
| RETROLOVE 08.03.2006 21:56 |
LadyMercury: You had me cracking up with the Roger and Freddie stuff, looking into eachothers eyes n'shit,lol!!...girl, this is just like R.Kelly's Trapped in the closet, just without the violence, lol!! "Now he opened the closet, then he opened the closet...closet...closet...closet!!! |
| RETROLOVE 09.03.2006 02:07 |
Things were ***seriously*** about to get ***hot*** in that car, and then John had to come with the groceries, DAMN!!! |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 09.03.2006 14:02 |
Keep it coming LadyMercury! :D |
| blerp 09.03.2006 21:40 |
Sorry for the long wait. I actually had homework tonight, and I had a nice nap. With my mascara still on. Ergh, I hate falling alseep with make-up on, haha. THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 7. John pulled up into a spot, and all three climbed out of the car. John walked up the steps with his portion of groceries, leaving the remaining two bags for Freddie and Roger to bring in. "Are you two staying out here?" asked John, turning around. "It's bitter cold!" "Yes, but only for a little while," said Roger, chewing on a cracker he'd stolen from the bag. "All right...Just bring those bags in, okay?" answered John. He went into the warm flat, leaving them behind in the cold night. Roger and Freddie leaned against the car, side by side, glancing around the quiet street. It was pitch black, except for a dim streetlight that glowered faintly, like a dying ember. "Erm..." said Roger, pushing a little closer into Freddie. Freddie stared out straight ahead, arms crossed, then took one out and put it around Roger. Freddie still stared ahead. He seemed to be in one of his bouts of deep thought; Roger could tell. Freddie had his eyebrows slightly furrowed, chewing his lip, and pinching his thigh. "What are you thinking about, hm?" asked Roger. He was becoming slightly impatient: he didn't really like long periods of awkward talk. "Things...A lot of things, really...And you!" replied Freddie, kicking his leg out. Roger felt his face get a bit hot. He loved when people mentioned him, or complimented him. He liked the feeling of being thought of. "Thinking of anything else?" he said, after a while. "A lot of things, like I said. Things I can't quite explain..." said Freddie indifferently. As he said this, he turned his face up towards the sky. "I am also thinking of ways to get you into bed!" he said then, in a playful manner. He tackled Roger's waist. "Erm, what?" said Roger, a little wide-eyed, he laughed out when Freddie grabbed him round the middle. "Joking, darling, joking!" said Freddie, though he was not very sure if he was. Roger put his arm around Freddie again. Freddie turned to look at him, studying him even, and said: "Would you like me to tell you what I think of you? I think you are very charming! And fun...And er...Wild!" "Thank you! I think you're very charming yourself. Irresistible." said Roger, blushing. They looked at each other again, and something seemed to spark. Roger closed in on Freddie, pushing him gently against the car. The excitement yet again was unbearable to Freddie. He patted Roger's head every so often, and let his hand rest on his back. Roger was very close to his face now; he wanted a kiss of some sort, he kept moving his head everywhere, and Freddie became sort of frazzled. "Oh my!" exclaimed Freddie, finally letting his excitement show. All Roger did was heave a big sigh and lightly pressed his mouth onto Freddie's. Freddie's knees buckled; he seemed almost close to fainting. He and Roger started to feel pleasure growing down -- er, well, you get it. Roger lifted off of Freddie's lips, but let his lips linger round his. He stared at him intently, smiling sweetly, and Freddie smiled back. Freddie put his face forward and kissed him lightly again. They kissed like this for ten minutes or so, pausing gently, holding each other's faces. You could hear the light clicking of tongues and the smacking of lips, and of breathing into one another's mouths. It was all very erotic, and light - almost sweet and loving. "Well now!" said Freddie, quickly pulling away from his grasp, "I think we shall go in. I'm very cold." "Hmm...Yeah, let's go in." said Roger, still looking at Freddie. He was very pleased. "Oh, dear! The groceries! That would have been amusing if we forgot those!" crie |
| RETROLOVE 10.03.2006 00:32 |
***Giggling and looking down shyly at my computer keyboard***! Girl, you snapped with that chapter...Yeah, Freddie and Roger got mad chemistry, kinda like Jake Gyllenhaal, and Heath Ledger, for real!!! But I want to know whats going on with poor Brian!! |
| RETROLOVE 10.03.2006 01:13 |
...I mean, HAD mad chemistry!! Ahhhhh, what COULD have been, lol! Fred and Rog would have made such a CUTE couple, lol!! Ladymercury, I read in your profile that you were 15, I had no idea!! KEEP ON WRITING, AND CHERISH YOUR TEENAGE YEARS, I WISH I DID, and learn as much as you can while your still in high school, and dont let ANYBODY OR ANYTHING GET YOU OFF TRACK!! Its funny, my brother is 15, and he always makes fun of me, for having Queen's CD's, DVD's etc...its good that you like classic music, hell, people even make fun of me, for liking classic music, and I'm 23!! Anyways, just keep writing, and hopefully you'll get a great scholarship/grant, and go to a great college!! |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 10.03.2006 07:58 |
You have to carry this story on! |
| blerp 10.03.2006 14:19 |
Thank you for the advice! You all make me feel special, haha. Yeah, I'm on some sort of creative roll here, I've been writing a lot, and drawing too - I did some marvy drawings for the song Lazing On A Sunday Afternoon! My friend was supposed to scan them and send them to me, but I haven't gotten his email yet. But I want you lot to see them! Anyway, I will put up chapter 8 after this. :D |
| blerp 10.03.2006 14:22 |
NOTE ON CHAPTER 7 - Seriously...Writing chapter 7 was unbearable. In a good way. Chapter 8 is pretty funny. Enjoy! :) THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 8. Freddie and Roger walked into the kitchen and set down the bags. Brian was standing near the counter, eating a sweet biscuit. They were still a bit awkward about the egg fiacso, but then Freddie came over to him and took him by the hand. "Brian, Brian, hello! How are you? Everything is fine here, enjoying your biscuit?" cooed Freddie. "Ermmph," Brian said, putting the rest of the cookie into his mouth. "Very good, yes. And you?" "Fabulous!" said Freddie, still holding his arm. "Now why don't we go into the living room and play a few songs?" Brian and Roger followed Freddie down into the parlour. Brian and Roger sat down on the couch for a bit of a chat, while Freddie went up into Brian and John's room to get his acoustic guitar. Freddie crept into the room, to find John reclining on his bed reading a book. John nodded to him, and he continued with his reading. Freddie took up Brian's guitar, and saw a piece of paper stuck on the front of the guitar. He took the note off and read the large, neat letters: "BRIAN WOZ ERE." Freddie shook his head and dropped the note. He walked back down to the living room, where Brian and Roger were still talking. Brian took his guitar and played a few songs for the two. Some of them were songs he'd written on his own, some heard on the radio many times before. Roger and Freddie watched him in slight admiration. Brian felt a stream of calm and comfort come over him. He played with his eyes closed, moving his hands quickly, from chord to chord, strumming out a sweet ballad. Freddie stared at the long, thin fingers moving around the neck of the guitar; he seemed quite turned on by this. Roger went to lay on the couch, feeling tired again, the sounds of music soothing him. He soon fell asleep, his hand on his chest, with his mouth slightly open. This was quite a pretty sight if you'd seen it. Brian finished his song and looked up at Freddie. Freddie clapped for him, smiling, and asked for him to play another song. But Brian shook his head and insisted that Freddie to play a song. "Come on, you play something!" said Brian, grinning. "Oh, but erm, well, I'll try..." said Freddie, taking the guitar. He sat still for a few minutes. Freddie only knew about three chords on the guitar. He played those. He and Brian laughed at his pitiful guitar acumen. Brian then commenced into teaching Freddie a little more on the guitar, and as it went on for a while, Freddie became a little trapped. He liked to learn things in his own way. They eventually became bored and sat on the floor, talking every now and then. They looked over at Roger, who was still sleeping, his soft breathing barely audible. His chest rose and sank, rose and sank. It was very late now, so Freddie and Brian decided to go off to bed. They didn't want to disturb Roger, so they put a quilt over him and left a small light on in case he woke up and wanted to find his way upstairs. They left the room. A few hours later, Roger woke up again, disoriented. "W-w-where am I?..." asked Roger out loud, quite stupidly. He then returned back to his memory and got off the couch, then slouched upstairs to his room with Freddie. |
| bohemian_queer 10.03.2006 20:49 |
MORE MORE MORE! I love this stuff, you're a brilliant writer. Write more soon! |
| RETROLOVE 10.03.2006 22:43 |
Wow...good stuff Ladymercury!!! Just for the heck of it...and I know its just a story that you thought of, what year did you set this in?? |
| RETROLOVE 10.03.2006 23:43 |
Oh, ladymercury, your welcome, anytime!! |
| blerp 11.03.2006 01:08 |
onelonelypussycat wrote: Wow...good stuff Ladymercury!!! Just for the heck of it...and I know its just a story that you thought of, what year did you set this in??I set this somewhere round the early 70s...So maybe 71-72? Thanks again! :) |
| blerp 11.03.2006 01:13 |
freddieistheloveofmylife_89 wrote: MORE MORE MORE! I love this stuff, you're a brilliant writer. Write more soon!Yes! I will continue on with chapter 9. I'm not on my regular computer, so I don't know if I should just continue on here or wait it out a bit. Torture you all, you know? Hahaha. Thank you! Sheesh, I like compliments. I like writing this because it's like putting myself into the story. The way I make Freddie and Roger act in these chapters is exactly how I act around love. So basically you get an idea of how'd it'd be if you met me. Anyway, that was random! New chapter will be up soon! |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 11.03.2006 16:07 |
What happens next...? |
| Sergei. 11.03.2006 16:36 |
LOL this story is good :-D LadyMercury you're an awesome writer! I want to write too, have started about three stories all with good plots and whatnot but don't have enough attention span to actually finish them :-( I guess I can't get it through my head that I can't just sit around all day on my arse and think my stories will write themselves. Anyways, keep writing because you're damn good at it! Hopefully you're not like me and stuck in some freaky limbo over what you want to do when you grow up....well, time to go and let all my good ideas grow moldy in my head! :) |
| deleted user 11.03.2006 18:42 |
Wow, impressive stuff LadyMercury. You shoud really consider seriously of being a writer....your bloody brilliant! :D keep up the good work..maybe you should start up your own site with loads of different Queen stories lol! |
| DreaminQueen 11.03.2006 20:51 |
Wow my dear you are fantastic! You are very articulate!! Its finally nice to see someone within my generation that enjoys writing, they're pretty few and far between, atleast where i go to school... Keep it up my dear! |
| blerp 12.03.2006 00:14 |
<font color=violet>Poppy wrote: What happens next...?Don't worry! I'll have chapter 9 Sunday night! I'm quite busy now, sorry. P-) |
| blerp 12.03.2006 00:17 |
Thanks for all the feedback and compliments and so on: I appreciate it! :) I am definitely continuing of course, and if you write also, continue doing so! Heh. :D |
| Sergei. 12.03.2006 09:28 |
You have given me an inspiration! I will finally force myself to get off my lazy arse and type up the story that has been stewing in my moldy brain the longest! Thanks! :-) |
| blerp 12.03.2006 22:14 |
Here's chapter 9, i've returned the stoy to it's silliness, so watch out! Yet again more Freddie and Roger. P-b THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 9. Roger went into the bathroom, brushed his teeth and washed his face. He looked into the mirror, studying himself: somewhat large, blue eyes, staring back at him, smooth yet uncombed blond hair (now even more unkempt due to his nap), and a small, dainty mouth. He stared at himself for a few minutes, then swept the hair out of his face and walked out into the small, dark hall and into the room. The door was ajar, and when he pushed in, he found Freddie asleep in his bed. Roger didn't want to turn the light on and disturb him, so he groped his way around the room and to his drawers, opening one to find some pajamas. It was a mess in that drawer, and Roger became a little irritated; pulling only a pair of flannel pajama pants out before pushing the drawer shut with a loud 'thunk'. He breathed out and put the pants on his bed, and stood to undress. He unbuttoned his shirt at a steady pace, slipping it off and throwing it onto a wooden chair. He sat on the floor to slide his pants off, throwing that onto the chair also. His fair skin seemed to glow in the moonlight. He then came onto the decision of whether to sleep with his knickers under his pants or to go commando. He liked being as comfortable as possible, so before doing so, he peered over his shoulder to look at Freddie, who had his back turned to him, and then stripped off the knickers. He walked over to the chair and put the knick knacks in between the shirt and pants, for privacy, and well, politeness. He stood there for a while fixing the pile, and then quickly stuffed some bits of clothing that were sticking out of the drawers. He finally walked over to his bed when... "My, my, my, Roger, you shouldn't be walking round like that!" said Freddie, now facing Roger and leaning on his elbow. Roger paused in mid-step, giving Freddie a full view of his side and many other things. He looked over at him with awkwardness and embarrassment. "Oh, don't worry, Rog!" Freddie reassured him, "I do that all the time too!" "Erm..." thought Roger aloud. "Tisk, tisk, will you look at that!" joked Freddie, staring right at Roger's member. "Stop it, Freddie," said Roger, laughing a little, then covered himself. He sat on the bed slowly, and put his pants on quickly. He layed down. Meanwhile in Freddie's mind, he wanted Roger very badly right now. But he couldn't just jump to all that right now. They talked and joked around for a little, teasing each other. "God, I just feel like dancing right now, you've got me all thinking of music now," said Freddie. Roger beckoned for Freddie to get up and dance, making a face that said, 'Well, then do it!' "All right! Badda do do do doop-ah, do do dooo ska-dahhhhhhhhh!!" sang Freddie in some weird jazz skat tone. He jumped up from under the covers and revealed to Roger that he was indeed, wearing nothing but satin panties. Roger leaped in bed, his eyes widened in humourous shock. He laughed very much, this was almost too much for him. Freddie jumped to and fro in his small little knickers around the room, like a nervy animal. He then jumped onto Roger's bed, stood up on it and began jumping and making much noise -- singing and shouting and so on. He didn't seem to care that Brian and John were trying to sleep. Roger finally pulled Freddie down and tried to calm him, which took a few tries. "Freddie! Calm--" "Rock n' roll music! Any old kind of music!!!" "Erm, please," said Roger, struggling to steady his shoulders, but then Freddie reached out and put his hands on his shoulders and began to do a sort of sexy dance. "Oh, Rog, darling, I must strip for you! Wait, I have already done so," he said, looking down at his panties. He stood on his knees and wrapped himself aro |
| RETROLOVE 13.03.2006 00:54 |
Ladymercury: LOL @ Freddie and Roger, why do they always end up alone in these "sexual" situations, lol...and where the devil is Brian and John, don't they all have the same bedroom, lol... Like Stewie says from Family guy....oooooh yeah, thats the good stuff!!! LOL!!! |
| RETROLOVE 13.03.2006 00:57 |
Another thing Ladymercury: Both Brian and John should have walked in on them, that would have been hilarious!!! But it was hilarious enough with just Brian walking in on them, holding the rubber duckie, etc.... |
| Sergei. 13.03.2006 06:57 |
LOL this is rich coffee....heehaw! If me maw saw me reading this shit she would perish!! |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 13.03.2006 08:37 |
I love it! hahaha. So funny :D |
| Sergei. 13.03.2006 15:11 |
Please add more to this story!...that is, unless you are like us unlucky kids in Maryland and have to busy yourself with those blasted state assessments. phoo. |
| TheGame 13.03.2006 20:56 |
I finally read the whole story now, and it gives me a big laugh. Great stuff!! Brian with that duck, lol :) |
| blerp 14.03.2006 16:50 |
childwhoevery1hates wrote: Please add more to this story!...that is, unless you are like us unlucky kids in Maryland and have to busy yourself with those blasted state assessments. phoo.yep! i have those...this is the last week for me though, thankfully, no school friday, woo! yeah, i'm trying to continue to chapter 10, i'm way behind haha |
| blerp 14.03.2006 16:51 |
TheGame wrote: I finally read the whole story now, and it gives me a big laugh. Great stuff!! Brian with that duck, lol :)Ee!! thank you! that's the point of my story obviously, but yay!! P-D |
| DreaminQueen 14.03.2006 17:56 |
lol i love how Bri walked in wearing a bath robe w/ a ducky!! haha i can even see him saying the thing about taking a bath haha! |
| FreeSpirit328 14.03.2006 22:49 |
LMAo! Keep writing, it's hilarious :) |
| blerp 15.03.2006 20:41 |
writing this is getting hard, i'm running out of ideas..but no worries |
| RETROLOVE 16.03.2006 00:33 |
Ladymercury... Yeah, just keep Brain-storming, but your doing good so far, but 9 chapters is a lot, I give you props for that girlfriend!! |
| Sergei. 16.03.2006 15:43 |
Lol I have the perfect scenario: If you are willing to continue all this amour (lol) between Freddie and Roger how about make them get in the bath tub together after Brian gets out..? haha...I am the servant for the king of sodomy... |
| blerp 16.03.2006 18:17 |
Finally, here it is! THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 10. Freddie climbed over Roger, still asleep, stretched his arms and legs, and yawned. He peered out of the window, the bright sun gleaming into the room, giving off a feeling of warmth and comfort. He looked again over at Roger, who was sleeping on his tummy, arms wrapped around a pillow. Freddie shook him awake. "On your feet, lazy bones!" cried Freddie, shaking his shoulders. "We need to get up, we're going out today!" Roger rolled over onto his other side and groaned. "Mummmm.....I'll get up later." he murmured. Freddie threw a pillow on him and walked into the hall. Freddie desperately needed to use the loo, so, creeping near the bathroom door, he listened attentively to see if it was occupied. Indeed, it was. He heard light splashes and bits of whistling and humming. "La la...La..Hmmmm-hmmm...." he heard Brian sing out. More splashing. "Waaaaaterrrr..." sang out Brian again. The utter mentioning of the word 'water' made Freddie's bathroom needs even needier. So, he girded his loins and pushed into the bathroom. Brian was washing up his hair, not noticing Freddie, but feeling the presence of someone. He turned round and saw Freddie. "Oi! I told you not to come in here!" said Brian, his hands still lathering up his mass of soapy hair. "Erm..It's all right, what do you want, mate?" "I just came in here to use the loo!" replied Freddie, then he turned around and did so. Brian shrugged and continued washing himself. - - - Freddie finished getting ready, and before leaving, told Brian that he'd be using the shower next. Now, his bladder lighter than ever, returned back to his room. Roger was sitting up in bed now, holding a mug with both hands, taking small gulps of hot coffee. "Hullo!" said Roger cheerfully. He pointed to another mug, for Freddie. "Hullo, dear," said Freddie, picking up his mug. He sat down at the side of Roger's bed, and drank with him. I know this chapter seems very...well...stagnant with the story..but i liked it, because...i am the author! anyway i just thought it was a funny bit, it will get better of course gawd i am tired, i would be having my usual 3 hour nap but skipped it :P |
| blerp 16.03.2006 18:19 |
childwhoevery1hates wrote: Lol I have the perfect scenario: If you are willing to continue all this amour (lol) between Freddie and Roger how about make them get in the bath tub together after Brian gets out..? haha...I am the servant for the king of sodomy...haha i believe you are..patience, dear! well, i'm not very good with sex scenes but something will happen |
| Sergei. 16.03.2006 19:56 |
Edited because I fail at life |
| RETROLOVE 17.03.2006 01:01 |
Good job Ladymercury: Again, dont ever rush it...I am not a storyteller myself, but you dont have to rush it, dont feel pressure to do anything...let those creative juices flow, and Brian-storm for as long as you want! LOL! |
| RETROLOVE 17.03.2006 02:03 |
Ladymercury, you might want to see this, lol link |
| val 29467 17.03.2006 14:20 |
haha, great story. brian in a towel... jummie... |
| blerp 18.03.2006 02:21 |
hey there, i've been thinking up chapter 11, but i'm getting really bored with the Egg Story...a new idea popped into my little brain in the loo, but if you all want me to continue with this and get a piece of my new idea, suggestions/comments would be welcome! that's right, i need some ideas from you all, i can't think P-( |
| blerp 18.03.2006 19:37 |
never fear! chapter 11!!!! THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 11. "I must be going off to the shower now!" said Freddie, setting his mug down and getting up. "Do you need the bathroom, Roger?" "Yes, I do. This coffee really goes down fast," answered Roger, skipping out of the room to the bathroom. Freddie followed. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * The sound and steam of hot water splashing against the bathtub filled the room. Freddie stood round in his under-roos, waiting for it to fill. Roger sat on the toilet, swaying his feet back and forth, watched him. "God dammit! How long does it take for a bloody bath to fill?!" "A very long time, Freddie. Sometimes about 6 minutes!" said Roger in awe, his eyes growing larger and rounder as he said this. "Thank you for the lovely information, darling!" said Freddie, sweeping into a low bow, with his arms spread out. He got up and checked the bath; Almost filled. Freddie grabbed a bottle of bubble liquid and squeezed it onto the water. The rush of water pouring out of the tap attacked the clear liquid and turned immediately into a frothy mass. He dipped his hand into the water and moved it around, mixing the rest of the bubble solution with the water. He then closed the tap and made to get into the tub. "Oh dear!" exclaimed Freddie, taking his foot out. "How can I take a bath with my knickknacks on?" He took them off and threw them in the clothes hamper nearby. Roger stirred in his place on the toilet. He looked at the skinny, tan figure moving around, dark-wavy hair on his shoulders. Freddie turned and looked at him. "Well," said Roger, slightly stuttering. "Go on!" He pointed to the bath. Freddie lifted one leg over the side of the tub and set it down. Then he made to put his entire self into the tub, sighing as he covered himself with warm, bubbly water. "Good-bye now!" cried Freddie, sinking his whole self underwater. He came up again, his entire head soaked, little white bubbles weaved through the hairs. "You know, I think you should take a bath, I mean, look at your hair! Take one now -- with me. It would save time." A mischievous smile curled on Freddie's mouth. "All right, as you insist," said Roger happily. He stripped off the pants and got into the tub with Freddie. Roger hummed and poked the bubbles, lathering shampoo into his hair. He played and pushed the floating rubber duck around the surface of the water, stifling giggles as he was for no reason whatsoever amused by this object. "I see Brian has left his little friend here with us! Must've forgotten it." said Roger, still moving the duck around. "Ahhhh! The tunnels! Not the tunnels!" he cried, shoving the duck into a mountain of bubbles. He left the ducky alone then and continued cleaning his hair. He dove his head into the water, scrubbing out the excess, and came up again with a clean head. "Roger, would you mind washing my hair for me?" said Freddie, holding out the shampoo bottle. Roger took the bottle and poured out a small pile of the shampoo. He rubbed it between both hands and placed them on top of Freddie's head. "Hmm, hmm..My, this is fun!" said Roger, massaging his fingers into Freddie's hair. But Freddie was a bit busy looking at Roger's body, stretching out of the water and bending over him. Still staring at the area around his belly, he reached his hands out and gently pinched his waist. Roger flexed and jumped back a little. He continued washing his head. A couple of loud, hard knocks came from the door. "Hurry up in there! We need to leave soon!" said John and Brian together. Roger cleaned the stuff off his hands, while Freddie cleaned out his hair. They both got out of the bath and Roger pulled out the drain plug. The water slowly and steadily went down. this chapter is sexy |
| Hooligan's Holiday 18.03.2006 20:10 |
My, this has by far escelated from not being able to boil an egg, now hasn't it? |
| Hooligan's Holiday 18.03.2006 20:19 |
vallie wrote: haha, great story. brian in a towel... jummie...Now, I do like that thought... ^.^ |
| RETROLOVE 18.03.2006 21:13 |
Hey Ladymercury great story, loved the story! But you dont have to go into a sex scene, that would ruin the fun with the flirting, teasing, kissing etc...I think an actual sex scene would ruin it, for real!!! BUT GREAT JOB, YOUR WRITING IS OFF THE HOOK GIRL!!! |
| Sergei. 19.03.2006 06:10 |
lol nice chapter... erm...was roger on the dumper in the beginning of this chapter?? |
| val 29467 19.03.2006 13:19 |
<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:really, I think we are soul mates, 39.vallie wrote: haha, great story. brian in a towel... jummie...Now, I do like that thought... ^.^ Finally, someone who understands!!! |
| blerp 19.03.2006 18:12 |
childwhoevery1hates wrote: lol nice chapter... erm...was roger on the dumper in the beginning of this chapter??isn't that obvious?! well, at first i was going to do that because i thought it was funny, but i thought it too...crude, you know. so i left that out and besides, if i were making him sit on the toilet doing his er..business, i'd most likely say something about his pants being down....haha!! |
| blerp 19.03.2006 18:14 |
Hello, you tits! THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 12. "Come on now!" said Brian, playfully chasing after Freddie and Roger. "Get dressed, and let's go!" Freddie and Roger quickly dressed, then met up with Brian and John who were waiting in the living room. They all walked out the door and into the car. Brian took the wheel, and drove off. "Erm, where are we going?" said John, pulling his bottom lip. "To the park, that's where. Is the blanket in the boot?" said Brian. "Yes, I think so," said Freddie staring at the front of his seat, as in hope that it would crack open and he could check if the blanket was there. "Are we having picnic?" "Good heavens, no! I didn't make any sandwiches!" replied Brian. "Well...Can't we stop at a store or something?" said Roger now, sitting himself up. "Me and Freddie didn't eat breakfast...What about you, John?" "Ermph...Nope." Brian nodded in agreement; he hadn't eaten either. He then drove to the nearest food market. They all scrambled out and into the shop. Brian went off in search of the sandwiches, Roger went off to look at the fruits and veggies (most likely to punch them), John wanted to go look at the paper stand, and Freddie was left by himself. He wandered around the store, with his hands in his pockets, looking at all the products and foods. He finally caught Brian bending over a pile of packaged sandwiches, looking at the price sign. "Cor!" said Brian, turning to Freddie. "Two for the price of one." He picked out 4 packages and dropped them in his basket. The two walked over to the register, calling for John and Roger. John came and placed a newspaper with the rest of the stuff. Roger came running, something in his hand. "Can I get this?" said Roger, huffing, presenting something to Brian. It was a baby pineapple. "Why do you want to get that?" asked Brian, looking at it with a pleasant smile on his face. "Cos...Cos it looks so weird...And it's so small," said Roger, marveling at it. Brian took the little pineapple from him and placed it with the other things. "Is that all?" drawled the tired-looking clerk. "Yes." said Brian. They paid for their things and walked out. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * They drove on to the park. When they reached there, they parked in a pretty spot and set up their place. John laid out the blanket, and Brian put down the food. They all sat down to have a small lunch. Roger sat his pineapple down next to him and petted it. "What are you going to name it?" giggled Freddie, John chuckling behind him. "Hm?" said Roger, biting into his sandwich. "Well, you're treating that pineapple more like a pet than something you eat!" said Freddie. "Oh. Maybe I should name it." said Roger slowly, thinking. "I'll name it....Roger." "Good choice," said John. They all sat silent for a while, till Roger looked around at the park and spotted some good climbing trees. "Oi! I want to climb that tree!" said Roger aloud. He jumped up and walked quickly to his tree of choice. He had neglected his pineapple. Roger began climbing the tree by lifting his right leg up onto a branch, using his foot as a grip. Both arms were outstretched, gripping two other tree limbs. "Do you need any help, dear?" said Freddie, Brian and John following behind. They watched as Roger struggled to lift his other leg up. "Here, let us help," said Brian, putting a large hand on Roger's back, then used his other hand to push his bottom up. Roger sighed and finally let his other foot rest in a crook of the tree. Brian put his hand in the crook of the tree next after Roger had took his foot out to climb another branch. But Roger put his foot back down, grinding Brian's hand into the bark. "Bloody hell!&qu |
| blerp 19.03.2006 18:18 |
I also did a funny stick figure drawing on paint for this chapter, but stupid Photobucket resized and it is now too small. But i hope you all can still make out who's who...and Roger's leg all the way up on the branch. P-b link |
| Hooligan's Holiday 19.03.2006 19:48 |
vallie wrote:Awwwwwwwww, thanks!<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:really, I think we are soul mates, 39. Finally, someone who understands!!!vallie wrote: haha, great story. brian in a towel... jummie...Now, I do like that thought... ^.^ |
| RETROLOVE 20.03.2006 00:54 |
LadyMercury: You are sooooooooo hilarious, especially with the picture that you drew that goes with the chapter...that was tooooooooooooooooo funny!!! HAHAHAHA!!! Lol @ Roger climbing up trees, I could really picture him doing that in real life, lol!! |
| RETROLOVE 20.03.2006 01:02 |
****Roger went off to look at the fruits and veggies(most likely to punch them)**** I busted out laughing so hard when I read this, and him naming the baby pineapple also, that was tooooo hilarious!!!! |
| val 29467 20.03.2006 03:09 |
lady mercury: we love the story!!!! think i'll print it out and stick it in one of my school books, it'll give me a laugh during classes |
| val 29467 20.03.2006 03:10 |
<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:always a pleasurevallie wrote:Awwwwwwwww, thanks!<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:really, I think we are soul mates, 39. Finally, someone who understands!!!vallie wrote: haha, great story. brian in a towel... jummie...Now, I do like that thought... ^.^ |
| RETROLOVE 20.03.2006 06:55 |
Ladymercury: I saw your myspace page, and its great!! I'm too lazy to put a page on there :( I'm not a myspace kinda girl, lol... |
| The Lost Queen 20.03.2006 09:51 |
This is so fun! LadyMercury, you're such a good writer!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! I want to know what happens next!! |
| blerp 20.03.2006 15:38 |
Thanks! you all are fab. if you ever want to see the full version of the picture, i can send it to you on aim if you all want! anyway, i am off to type up chapter 13 |
| blerp 20.03.2006 15:45 |
onelonelypussycat wrote: ****Roger went off to look at the fruits and veggies(most likely to punch them)**** I busted out laughing so hard when I read this, and him naming the baby pineapple also, that was tooooo hilarious!!!!I know!! I had to take like 10 breathers while writing this!! |
| Sergei. 20.03.2006 16:24 |
Enjoyable... You know, I was writing in my ideas notebook today, and one of those dumb stuck up prep childs walks up to me and goes, "Hey everyone, Raleigh's writing in her DIARY!!" And I say, "Yep. I'm writing about what your mother did with your daddy last night, so I can post it on my myspace." Okay, so it is childish, not funny and asanine, but it shut her up. Just thought I'd share. Go daddy! Go daddy! |
| Sergei. 20.03.2006 16:26 |
(I am not normal. A skinny, scary, rocker child, understand.) |
| Sergei. 20.03.2006 16:30 |
Oh dear, I have revealed my name... be gentle. |
| blerp 20.03.2006 16:36 |
haha, why do people go apedoodoo over saying their names online? as you can see, i am pretty childish myself...i just had to use the word 'apedoodoo.' |
| Hooligan's Holiday 20.03.2006 16:37 |
I think Raleigh is a very nice name. Oh, and in response to Chapter Nine (I'm so fucking slow, I apologize), I love it, Brian clad in NOTHING but a towel. *drools* Genius. |
| blerp 20.03.2006 16:53 |
<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote: I think Raleigh is a very nice name. Oh, and in response to Chapter Nine (I'm so fucking slow, I apologize), I love it, Brian clad in NOTHING but a towel. *drools* Genius.you? slow? no, no, dear, you are doing what i believe is...SAVOURING it... :) |
| Hooligan's Holiday 20.03.2006 17:19 |
I suppose that makes sense. Thanks! |
| DreaminQueen 20.03.2006 18:01 |
omg, i love this!!! Its sooo entertaining! And i can see it all happening too! lol i couldnt stop laughing at these!! Mmmh.. our lovelies keep ending up in rather hott situations!! lol Bri in nothing.. Fred and Roge in a bath... ;D But what about deaky?? |
| Sergei. 20.03.2006 18:25 |
Deaky choked on a ham sandwich which was shoved down his throat by Momma Cass's spirit due to retaliation from a feud they had when the woman was still alive. She wanted to give him a "taste of his own medicine." Can't you READ? ;-) |
| blerp 20.03.2006 19:16 |
here -- i made another stick figure scene for chapter 11, quite literally, bath time link you will also see some of our favourite objects in the picture, like the ducky (haha not just Freddie and Roger) |
| blerp 20.03.2006 20:02 |
Short chapter today, it's going to get better and longer though: THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 13. Freddie, Brian and John returned to their places on the blanket and continued eating. They occasionally glanced over at the tree where Roger was hiding, catching a small glimpse of Roger's foot, or arm flailing around wildly. Sometimes the tree shook quite violently, and they became a little worried that Roger might end up hurting himself. "Maybe we should check on him..." said John after a while. They others nodded and they walked over to the tree again. "Roger?" Freddie called out, moving closer to the tree. "Roger, what are you doing?!" The tree shook greatly again, and they moved back quickly. "Woop!" yelled Roger, and with a small crash, he came down, landing right on Freddie and John. "Ahhh, bugger bugger, bum...Ouch ouch ouch owww, bugger!!!" said Freddie, heaving Roger off him. "Roger!" cried John, getting up also, "Why didn't you just climb down?!" "I didn't know how to! Too scary!" he said to the both of them, walking off to finish his sandwich. He took no notice of Roger, the baby pineapple. Freddie and John limped back with Brian, who was still holding his hand. Three lads injured by one! "I want to go home -- I'm tired," said Freddie, rubbing his shoulder. They all got up to go: except Roger. "Come on, Roger, we're going home." said Brian, holding his uninjured hand out to him. "Mannnn!" said Roger, getting up, knocking over the pineapple. He took Brian's hand and walked off with him. "Aren't you going to take your pineapple, Roger?" said Freddie behind them, looking back at it. "My what?" asked Roger. "Nevermind," he said, and they walked on. |
| RETROLOVE 21.03.2006 00:46 |
Ladymercury: Lol @ him falling over, and being to scared to climb down out of the tree...thats too funny!!! |
| val 29467 21.03.2006 03:16 |
LadyMercury wrote: here -- i made another stick figure scene for chapter 11, quite literally, bath time link you will also see some of our favourite objects in the picture, like the ducky (haha not just Freddie and Roger)Ducky(L) |
| val 29467 21.03.2006 03:18 |
LadyMercury wrote: Short chapter today, it's going to get better and longer though: THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 13. Freddie, Brian and John returned to their places on the blanket and continued eating. They occasionally glanced over at the tree where Roger was hiding, catching a small glimpse of Roger's foot, or arm flailing around wildly. Sometimes the tree shook quite violently, and they became a little worried that Roger might end up hurting himself. "Maybe we should check on him..." said John after a while. They others nodded and they walked over to the tree again. "Roger?" Freddie called out, moving closer to the tree. "Roger, what are you doing?!" The tree shook greatly again, and they moved back quickly. "Woop!" yelled Roger, and with a small crash, he came down, landing right on Freddie and John. "Ahhh, bugger bugger, bum...Ouch ouch ouch owww, bugger!!!" said Freddie, heaving Roger off him. "Roger!" cried John, getting up also, "Why didn't you just climb down?!" "I didn't know how to! Too scary!" he said to the both of them, walking off to finish his sandwich. He took no notice of Roger, the baby pineapple. Freddie and John limped back with Brian, who was still holding his hand. Three lads injured by one! "I want to go home -- I'm tired," said Freddie, rubbing his shoulder. They all got up to go: except Roger. "Come on, Roger, we're going home." said Brian, holding his uninjured hand out to him. "Mannnn!" said Roger, getting up, knocking over the pineapple. He took Brian's hand and walked off with him. "Aren't you going to take your pineapple, Roger?" said Freddie behind them, looking back at it. "My what?" asked Roger. "Nevermind," he said, and they walked on.hahaha laughing my head of here!!! MORE, WE WANT MORE!!!!! |
| val 29467 21.03.2006 06:38 |
by the way Ladymercury: can we have a bit more brian in the story? |
| The Lost Queen 21.03.2006 09:54 |
LadyMercury wrote: "Can I get this?" said Roger, huffing, presenting something to Brian. It was a baby pineapple. "Why do you want to get that?" asked Brian, looking at it with a pleasant smile on his face. "Cos...Cos it looks so weird...And it's so small," said Roger, marveling at it. Roger sat his pineapple down next to him and petted it. "What are you going to name it?" giggled Freddie, John chuckling behind him. "Hm?" said Roger, biting into his sandwich. "Well, you're treating that pineapple more like a pet than something you eat!" said Freddie. "Oh. Maybe I should name it." said Roger slowly, thinking. "I'll name it....Roger." "Good choice," said John.Oh my God, I laughed so much when I read this! Roger is like a child! |
| Sergei. 21.03.2006 18:50 |
lol funny @ them doing all this normal everyday stuff like picnicking and going to the grocery store! |
| blerp 21.03.2006 20:35 |
You asked for more Brian, that's what you get! :) THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 14. When they got back and into the house, Freddie immediately made his way upstairs. "Well, I'm going to go take a nap," he said turning around. "Oh! I almost forgot..." He grabbed Roger and dragged him off with him. "Come, poppet, nap time!" Freddie said to him. "Oof...Ermph, all right..." said Roger. Brian shook his head and turned to John. "They're odd..." said Brian. "But they never cease to make me laugh." "Yeah," said John. "Well, I'm rooted myself, I guess I'll go have a nap too. Are you?" "No, I'm not really tired," said Brian quietly, "I'm just going to hang around, maybe wash up my hand." John nodded and went up too. Brian finally heard the click of bedrooms doors. Silence. Quiet alone time for himself. He walked into the bathroom, turning on the light, and peering into the mirror. He slowly untied the handkerchief on his hand, picking it off and examining his hand. Scratched in a few places, skin peeling and some bleeding. He slightly moved his fingers; but regretted doing so because stretching his hand out meant stretching the wounds out. He turned the taps on and bathed his hands in the warm water. Lathering soap on his injured hand, he cleaned of the dirt and small bits of bark. He dried it, then opened the medicine cabinet and took out clean bandages and some wound ointment. Brian finished nursing to himself and walked out to the kitchen. He wanted to soothe himself, so he decided to make himself a cup of coffee. He put the coffee pot on and went into the living room to sit down. He was actually pretty tired himself, but didn't want to nap, especially with everyone else up there. He preferred to do things alone. He reclined, putting his head back against the couch. He groaned whilst stretching his arms and legs out -- It felt great. He ruffled his curly, mass of soft hair with his hands and then placed them on his stomach. He kicked off his clogs and crossed his legs. He felt very tired then. "Oh, the coffee!" Brian said, jumping up. He walked back to the kitchen and took the pot up, pouring himself a big cup. Returning to the living room, he walked over to the bookcase, pulled out a novel on edible herbs, and walked back to the couch. He took a gulp of his coffee and enjoyed a long read. An hour and a half later, the coffee finished, the novel read, Brian laid down and pulled the quilt on him. The sun was setting, and looking out the window at the dying sun in the pink sky made Brian feel sweetly exhausted. He fell alseep quickly. ------------------------------------------ Brian awoke to the sounds of the telly. He tried turning on his other side, but couldn't. He looked at the end of the couch and said Freddie and Roger sitting on his legs, eating cornflakes, watching Tom & Jerry. John was sitting in the armchair, half alseep, watching with them. "Ha ha ha! Look at them go!" said Freddie, bouncing up and down. He was in his usual pajamas -- Satin knickers. "Ergh, Freddie, get off me," growled Brian, cranky and tired. "You too, Roger!" "Party pooper!" said Roger, jumping off him. He took another bite of his cereal. "Man, I need more sugar on this." He walked off into the kitchen. "Sorry, Brian, we didn't know you were on the couch!" said Freddie, sitting back down in the small space Brian had allowed him. "No wonder the couch felt so lumpy and weird!" "Aren't you cold, Freddie?" said Brian, eyeing Freddie's mostly naked body. "No, I'm warm all the time!" replied Freddie. He then began hugging himself and going: "Mmm mmm mmmm!" Brian laughed and got up. He patted Freddie's shoulder and walked upstairs into his room. He changed into some more comfortable clothing and fell onto his bed |
| RETROLOVE 22.03.2006 00:48 |
This chapter was soooooo sweet!!! Especially how Roger said I'm sorry to Brian, and kissed him on the hand, that was sooooo sweet!!! Lol @ Freddie making Roger go to bed with him, that was too funny...and Brian waking up to Fred, Rog and John watching Tom and Jerry...I used to watch that when I was a little girl...lol |
| RETROLOVE 22.03.2006 00:57 |
***Off subject*** I know in the Chapter 14...Roger said that he needed more sugar on his cornflakes...I LOVE my cornflakes to be plain, but almost everyone that I know HAVE to add sugar in cereal (I hate biting down on sugar, cause it makes my teeth hurt) thats plain, like Kellogg's Cornflakes, Cheerrios, Branflakes, etc, lol...I dont eat cereal much anymore, I havent eaten any in the past like three months (watching my carbs, lol) but when I was growing up my favorite cereal was FRUIT LOOPS, LUCKY CHARMS, FROSTED FLAKES, COOKIE CRISP...lol What kinda cereal do you guys like, lol...yeah, I know, I have no life....:) |
| Sergei. 22.03.2006 15:34 |
I love Cinnamon Life, especially when it gets soggy. Come to think of it, I don't like any other breakfast foods. Kashi Go Lean makes you G-A-S-S-Y, take it from my brother who was quarentined to his room for half the day last Saturday. I opened the door and it was like a fricking atomic bomb when off in there..... |
| Jesspit 22.03.2006 15:56 |
this story just gets better every time!!! keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxo |
| Hooligan's Holiday 22.03.2006 18:57 |
I loved that chapter!!! Lady Mercury, you should put this into a book and sell it, I'd sure buy it. Anyways, Tom & Jerry, good times... |
| RETROLOVE 23.03.2006 01:15 |
childwhoevery1hates wrote: I love Cinnamon Life, especially when it gets soggy. Come to think of it, I don't like any other breakfast foods. Kashi Go Lean makes you G-A-S-S-Y, take it from my brother who was quarentined to his room for half the day last Saturday. I opened the door and it was like a fricking atomic bomb when off in there.....Yeah, I liked Cinnamon toast crunch cereal too...that was darn good. When I go shoppping, I always see that box of Kashi Go lean W/ that happy-ass looking man and woman on the box, and I always think to myself, that cereal looks like it taste gross...well, after what you said CHILD, I wont be buying it AT ALL in the near future, lol!!!! lol @ atomic bomb!!! |
| blerp 23.03.2006 21:18 |
The next chapter will be here in about.....2 weeks writer's block...again |
| Fiendishly Yours 23.03.2006 21:35 |
Two weeks? Oh, LadyMercury... I don't think I can wait that long! Heh, cool story. It's very cute. |
| blerp 23.03.2006 21:42 |
Thanks! But yeah, it might take me a bit to get the new chapter up... But just to entertain you all, have a look at these- link link |
| RETROLOVE 24.03.2006 01:15 |
LadyMercury wrote: Thanks! But yeah, it might take me a bit to get the new chapter up... But just to entertain you all, have a look at these- link linkThats toooo cute...especially Freddie over there with the plant, and in his underwear, and Roger kicking poor Brian, hilarious, did you draw that in paintshop in Microsoft?? Maybe I can help you out a bit, maybe in someway, the story should lead back to the egg? Well, you have time to brainstorm, so do your thing! Girl, if you have writers block, dont sweat it, when you feel that its time to write again, write...your the author so its up to you!! :) Good luck!! |
| val 29467 24.03.2006 04:54 |
LadyMercury wrote: The next chapter will be here in about.....2 weeks writer's block...againAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHhh we can't wait that long!!! HA. more brian is great!!! even MORE BRIAN MORE BRIAN |
| The Lost Queen 24.03.2006 10:06 |
Oh my God, TWO WEEKS??? That's so long... :( But, LadyMercury, you're so awsome for doing this so I wont nag. |
| blerp 24.03.2006 15:22 |
<B><font color=pink>Onelonelypussycat wrote:Ha! Thanks, yeah, I did draw them on microsoft paint, I'm just bored.. :PLadyMercury wrote: Thanks! But yeah, it might take me a bit to get the new chapter up... But just to entertain you all, have a look at these- link linkThats toooo cute...especially Freddie over there with the plant, and in his underwear, and Roger kicking poor Brian, hilarious, did you draw that in paintshop in Microsoft?? Maybe I can help you out a bit, maybe in someway, the story should lead back to the egg? Well, you have time to brainstorm, so do your thing! Girl, if you have writers block, dont sweat it, when you feel that its time to write again, write...your the author so its up to you!! :) Good luck!! Anyway, I'm off to go write chapter 15! I'm back on track again! |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 24.03.2006 15:29 |
LadyMercury wrote:Yay! I'll look forward to it! :D<B><font color=pink>Onelonelypussycat wrote:Ha! Thanks, yeah, I did draw them on microsoft paint, I'm just bored.. :P Anyway, I'm off to go write chapter 15! I'm back on track again!LadyMercury wrote: Thanks! But yeah, it might take me a bit to get the new chapter up... But just to entertain you all, have a look at these- link linkThats toooo cute...especially Freddie over there with the plant, and in his underwear, and Roger kicking poor Brian, hilarious, did you draw that in paintshop in Microsoft?? Maybe I can help you out a bit, maybe in someway, the story should lead back to the egg? Well, you have time to brainstorm, so do your thing! Girl, if you have writers block, dont sweat it, when you feel that its time to write again, write...your the author so its up to you!! :) Good luck!! |
| blerp 24.03.2006 16:35 |
here you go...it's a bit retarded, but it made me laugh THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 15. Brian woke up groggy and sore. He sat up and nibbled on some of the biscuits, then picked up the mug of tea and grimaced. It was cold. He lifted himself off of the bed and went down to make a new cup. As he walked down the hall, he got a glimpse of the inside of the bathroom: Freddie was still in his knickers, sitting on the toilet, nonchalantly smoking a cigarette. Brian walked down and into the kitchen, where he saw Roger and John sitting round, doing nothing but staring at their empty cups. Had they gone stupid? "Erm..." said Brian after a while. "What are you lot doing?" "Eh!?" answered John. "Raaaaaaaaa!" said Roger. "What the hell is wrong with you guys?" said Brian, a little loudly this time. "Sheesh!" "Sorry, Brian, but we had a few lines," said Roger, rubbing his nose. Brian continued making his tea. He dumped out the cold cup in the sink and waited for the water to boil. He leaned against the counter, rubbing his eyes, watching the two coked up men. Then John stood up and waddled out of the kitchen. "Briiiiian, I feel funny..." murmured Roger. He stood up and walked slowly up to him, his arms outstretched towards him. "I don't feel well. Carry me up now, that's a good lad." Roger pushed himself into Brian, wrapping his arms round his neck and lifting himself off the ground. "Roger, don't!" Brian almost fell over, but balanced himself and picked Roger up. He carried him up into his room, placing him on his bed. "Brian, Brian, I feel hot." Brian opened up a window and made to leave. "Fuck, it's cold in here." Brian walked back and closed it. "Ahhh, blinding hot! I must be having a hot flash." Brian made to open the window again, but then stopped short. "Roger, I think you might have a fever," he said. "Let us check your temperature." Brian walked off into the bathroom where Freddie was still sitting and smoking. He walked over and opened the medicine cabinet, taking out some aspirin and a thermometer. "What are you doing, dear?" asked Freddie, blowing out a perfect smoke ring. "Checking Roger's temperature, I think he's becoming sick," replied Brian, walking out of the bathroom. "Wait!" cried Freddie, throwing his cigarette out the window and running after him. "Can I be your nurse, Doctor May?" "Erm...I guess," said Brian. He walked off to the room. Freddie ran down to the coat closet, wrenching open the door and rummaging through an old costume box of his. "Perfect!" he said, holding a white nurse's cap. He rammed it on and went back up the stairs to his room. Brian was in there, sitting on the bed with Roger. Brian poured out two aspirins, laid them on the table, then stuck the thermometer in Roger's mouth. "Don't open your mouth." "Oh, let me help!" said Freddie, fixing the nurse's cap. "Now, Roger, does it hurt when I do...THIS?" he poked him in the stomach. Roger merely waved away his hand. "How about...THIS?" he poked Roger this time in the thigh. Roger hit his arm. "Erm....This..." he put his hand over Roger's bulge. Roger boxed him on the ear. "Oi! I'm the nurse here!" yelled Freddie, jumping back. "Freddie, just sit down, or...I dunno, stand there," said Brian, tending to Roger still. Freddie stood still, in his knickers and nurse cap. Brian took the thermometer out of Roger's mouth and checked it. "Mmm...One hundred...and four. Hm, you're awfully sick," said Brian, placing a cool hand on Roger's forehead. "But..I wanted to do some drumming tonight!" "Sorry, but you shouldn't. You need rest." Brian pulled the blankets over Roger, and patted his chest. "I |
| bohemian_queer 24.03.2006 16:44 |
awww.. this chapter is so cute, and it made me laugh. :-) Thank goodness your writer's block didn't last two weeks!!! I love your story LadyMercury! Keep it up! :D:D:D:D |
| Hooligan's Holiday 24.03.2006 17:33 |
Yay! I love this story! |
| Sergei. 24.03.2006 17:39 |
Huh..I am beginning to feel a momentary lapse of interest. No offence. I feel like crap today. |
| bohemian_queer 24.03.2006 18:58 |
OMG! Somebody shoot off some fireworks! The Child is LOSING INTEREST! What ever shall we do? How can you go on, LadyMercury, without the Child?!? Hehe, narcissists are annoying... |
| Sergei. 24.03.2006 19:00 |
Shut up. You are damn right you're annoying. |
| blerp 24.03.2006 19:50 |
Calm down. |
| bohemian_queer 24.03.2006 19:50 |
hahahahahahaha. I just got burned by a 12 year old. hahahaha. this is too good! your screen name is fitting of you, dear. |
| I♥The80's 24.03.2006 21:02 |
childwhoevery1hates wrote: Shut up. You are damn right you're annoying.Oh stand back, the 12-year-old is getting pissed off.....better watch yourself freddieistheloveofmylife_89, I mean who wouldn't be intimidated by a 12 year old???? lol :P Seriously though, why are you being a typical little 12-year-old wussy??? Gotta agree that your name does fit you, and as far as I'm concerned, you're the one that's being rude and annoying, especially towards freddieistheloveofmylife_89. hah! Got your back freddieistheloveofmylife_89 ;P |
| Sergei. 24.03.2006 21:24 |
i will come back and say this: shut the f*ck up, all three of you. In case you haven't noticed take a look at my topic in the personal forum; not in much of a playful/sarcastic mood. |
| RETROLOVE 25.03.2006 01:47 |
LadyMercury wrote: Calm down.Thats all I'm saying, lol! |
| bohemian_queer 25.03.2006 01:52 |
I apologize, LadyMercury. We've taken the focus away from you awesome story. It shall end it here. Your story is great btw, We all wait in anticipation for the next chapter to unfold! :D:D:D:D |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 25.03.2006 06:32 |
Great Chapter! Oh and by the way after reading this little argument between Freddieistheloveofmylife and childwhoevery1hates I was just going to point out that the 12 year old comes across more mature than the 16 year old. |
| skiqueen 25.03.2006 14:44 |
somebody should make this into a graphic novel, its a great story and the visuals would be hilarious!!! |
| skiqueen 25.03.2006 15:54 |
an idea for ur story? link :P |
| The Lost Queen 25.03.2006 18:06 |
Baha, LadyMercury, you should really do something out of that picture! |
| blerp 25.03.2006 18:36 |
childwhoevery1hates wrote: i will come back and say this: shut the f*ck up, all three of you. In case you haven't noticed take a look at my topic in the personal forum; not in much of a playful/sarcastic mood.My, my, my, if you're going to be so sour, punch your wall out or something, don't release your venom on us. I know that I am usually nice to you, but until your temper subsides, I will be completely the opposite. |
| blerp 25.03.2006 18:39 |
skiqueen wrote: somebody should make this into a graphic novel, its a great story and the visuals would be hilarious!!!Speaking of graphic novels! I drew some great visuals for the song Lazing On A Sunday Afternoon, and I gave them to my friend to scan them, and send them to me so I can show you all! But he hasn't done so, and I've been waiting very patiently...I should talk to him. So yeah, if you all would list some of your favourite scenes, I'd be more than happy to draw them! |
| bohemian_queer 25.03.2006 21:31 |
Oh definitely this last scene where Freddie plays the nurse!!! :D:D That would be a totally fab pic! |
| blerp 25.03.2006 22:22 |
freddieistheloveofmylife_89 wrote: Oh definitely this last scene where Freddie plays the nurse!!! :D:D That would be a totally fab pic!Yeah, ever since I wrote that bit, I totally planned on drawing that. Have anymore bits you'd like to put down? Surely you want scene drawings from the earlier chapters and so on? Come on, I KNOW you all have suggestions for me, let's speed it up! |
| blerp 25.03.2006 22:23 |
Cute chapter for you all tonight. THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 16. The next morning, Roger woke up feeling extremely tired and dizzy. He groaned, and turned on his other side, where Freddie, who was still asleep, was facing him. He watched Freddie for a little, his eyes closed, breathing lightly, the nurse's cap on the pillow next to his head. Freddie stirred, then opened his eyes. He gave Roger a sweet smile, then placed his hand on his head. "Good morning...You still feel hot," said Freddie, using the other hand to rub Roger's shoulder. "How are you feeling?" "Mph, fine, I guess...Very tired," said Roger. "I think I'll go downstairs to get something to eat." "All right." Roger climbed off the bed. He stood up, but sat back down again because the sudden movements made him feel faint. Freddie sat up. "No, no. Don't go anywhere, stay in bed, please," said Freddie, steadying him by holding his shoulders. "You are still very sick." Freddie got up and helped Roger lay down again. He tucked him up into bed comfortably and kissed him on the cheek. He then told Roger that he would go down and get him something to eat. Freddie walked out of the room, downstairs, and into the kitchen, where he found Brian and John sitting at the table talking. "Hello Freddie!" said Brian, looking up. "How's Roger doing?" "Still sick, but all right," he replied. "I'm just going to make him something to eat." Freddie went over and opened the refridgerator. "Erm..." said Brian, turning around and watching Freddie as he set down the milk, eggs, and some other things. "What...Is it all right if I help you?" "Yes." Brian got up and stood behind Freddie. "Okay, what are you planning on making him?" "Some porridge and a boiled egg." said Freddie, looking round the kitchen. "Oh! And some fruit!" He went over to the counter, peering at the fruit bowl, then picked out an orange. "Good," said Brian. "Why don't you cut up the orange while I make the porridge and so on?" "Oh, thank God you are helping me, I don't know how to make any of that!" said Freddie, sweeping into a gracious bow. He then carried on getting a knife and slicing the orange in half, then in quarters and so on. "John, can you be a dear and pour out the milk and set up a tray?" asked Freddie, facing John, who was reading a newspaper. "Yes." said John, getting up and joining the busy men. Finally, a pretty breakfast tray was set up and carried up to Roger, who was asleep, the nurse's cap held in his hands. "Good morning, starshine!!! The earth says hello!!!" sang Brian, removing the cap and placing the tray on Roger's lap. "Come on, wake up, time to eat." "Er...Wha-What? Ermph, g'morning Brian," muttered Roger, opening his mouth quickly as Brian spooned some porridge into it. "Can you manage yourself?" said Brian, handing the spoon to him. "Yeah...Yeah, of course," replied Roger, blinking slowly. "Freddie: stay by his side." said Brian sternly, pointing to Freddie. Then Brian emitted a very fruity laugh and walked out with John, who were now both rubbing their tummies and patting their heads. Freddie climbed onto the bed with Roger, put his arm around his shoulder and began to sing to him. He played with his hair, then checked his forehead, and occasionally rubbed his back. "Roger," sang Freddie. "I love youuuu." Roger put down his spoon and returned his affection by giving him a hug. "Not talking much now, are you, Roger?" said Freddie, looking at him with loving eyes. Roger shook his head. "God, you are so adorable when you do that!" Freddie then began covering Roger's face with kisses, in which Roger returned them. "Would you li |
| bohemian_queer 25.03.2006 23:02 |
Love it, love it, love it! A bit unrealistic with Roger being so sick and all, but who cares?! Not me! :D You are such a good write LadyMercury, I hope this story goes on for a long time. Oh yes, and nice job subtly adding in that boiled egg. ;) As for the picture suggestions... Freddie giving Rog that lap dance would be pretty hott... lol jk...:-P |
| RETROLOVE 25.03.2006 23:02 |
LadyMercury wrote: Cute chapter for you all tonight. |
| RETROLOVE 25.03.2006 23:06 |
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| RETROLOVE 25.03.2006 23:13 |
<B><font color=pink>Onelonelypussycat wrote:Good morning, starshine!!! The earth says hello!!! Ladymercury, who sings this song, I forgot? I know its from the 60's...let me take a wild guess...no, no, just tell me, lol... |
| blerp 25.03.2006 23:18 |
freddieistheloveofmylife_89 wrote: Love it, love it, love it! A bit unrealistic with Roger being so sick and all, but who cares?! Not me! :D You are such a good write LadyMercury, I hope this story goes on for a long time. Oh yes, and nice job subtly adding in that boiled egg. ;) As for the picture suggestions... Freddie giving Rog that lap dance would be pretty hott... lol jk...:-POh, pish, the entire story is supposed to be unrealistic. Whatever. Anyway, hey, if you really mean it and want me to...I'll draw that!!! |
| RETROLOVE 25.03.2006 23:18 |
<B><font color=pink>Onelonelypussycat wrote:LadyMercury wrote: Cute chapter for you all tonight. |
| blerp 25.03.2006 23:20 |
<B><font color=pink>Onelonelypussycat wrote:I have no clue, haha, but while I was writing that bit, that part where Johnny Depp is saying good morning to the kids in the movie Charlie and the Choc. Factory came into my head...I thought it would be perfect for Brian to say, heh heh<B><font color=pink>Onelonelypussycat wrote:Good morning, starshine!!! The earth says hello!!! Ladymercury, who sings this song, I forgot? I know its from the 60's...let me take a wild guess...no, no, just tell me, lol... |
| blerp 25.03.2006 23:22 |
Man...I know this is really random of me, but, I'm watching the Aviator right now, and I am quite turned on by Leonardo DiCaprio locking himself in a theater where he is naked with greasy hair and a beardy thing...Oh yeah, and all those glass bottles of urine. |
| RETROLOVE 25.03.2006 23:26 |
I've never seen that movie...I loooooove him in Titanic!!!! |
| blerp 25.03.2006 23:30 |
<B><font color=pink>Onelonelypussycat wrote:HAHA! Yes, and Mary Austin will be Freddie's best man!<B><font color=pink>Onelonelypussycat wrote: Why wont Freddie and Roger just get married all ready!! I can hear wedding bells for them, lol! Freddie: Roger,dear, (gets out 24kt diamond ring) will you marry me? Roger: Oh Freddie, you've just made me the happiest drummer in the world!!! Starts crying...emotional music starts playing...the rest of the band jumps up and down, their happy because they'll be bridesmaids!!!lol That really made me laugh, heh heh. |
| blerp 25.03.2006 23:34 |
Oh, and I forgot to add: On their honeymoon, Freddie and Roger will play 'Good Old Fashioned Lover Boy.' [music playing]...I learned my passion at the good-old fashioned school of lover boys!... Roger: Cor, Freddie, that must've been a really ace school!! Freddie: Yes, yes, yes, now hold still!! |
| RETROLOVE 25.03.2006 23:55 |
LadyMercury wrote: Oh, and I forgot to add: On their honeymoon, Freddie and Roger will play 'Good Old Fashioned Lover Boy.' [music playing]...I learned my passion at the good-old fashioned school of lover boys!... Roger: Cor, Freddie, that must've been a really ace school!! Freddie: Yes, yes, yes, now hold still!!LOL!!! |
| RETROLOVE 26.03.2006 01:25 |
LOL @ Mary Austin being the best man...hahhahaha! |
| Sergei. 26.03.2006 09:23 |
LadyMercury: Lord, you should leave me alone. I don't give a rat's ass if you act nasty to me because I don't need someone who I don't even know to tell me to be nicer (ahem, or, should I say, waiting for my behaviour to "subside...." how poignant) We have some serious illnesses in my family right now and you're only putting salt on the wound by acting like I'm just a big smelly ass who is going around being mean to everyone. I am having problems right now, I already said I would be gone for a while, so stop making me come back by contiuing to say stuff to me. peace. |
| Sergei. 26.03.2006 09:32 |
But I'll be mature and say I'm sorry if you are (cue the, "I didn't do anything wrong" cliche sometime soon). Actually, even if you aren't. I don't care. I don't like people being mad at me. |
| val 29467 26.03.2006 12:24 |
LadyMercury wrote: here you go...it's a bit retarded, but it made me laugh |
| val 29467 26.03.2006 12:57 |
o anb btw, a friend of mine told me to ask you, lady mercury, if you could in a sexy chapter with brian ;) |
| deleted user 26.03.2006 13:11 |
ahh that was me :o thank you vallie ^.^ |
| val 29467 26.03.2006 13:26 |
drivenby_you wrote: ahh that was me :o thank you vallie ^.^it was? wauw you must be a clone ;) |
| val 29467 26.03.2006 13:27 |
<font color=blue>vallie wrote:i meant that in a nice way :)drivenby_you wrote: ahh that was me :o thank you vallie ^.^it was? wauw you must be a clone ;) |
| Hooligan's Holiday 26.03.2006 15:02 |
<font color=blue>vallie wrote: o anb btw, a friend of mine told me to ask you, lady mercury, if you could in a sexy chapter with brian ;)Oh, yes please! Oh, and nice idea, he took such good care of Rog! |
| blerp 26.03.2006 15:39 |
<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:wait..you want me to put Brian into a sex scene?<font color=blue>vallie wrote: o anb btw, a friend of mine told me to ask you, lady mercury, if you could in a sexy chapter with brian ;)Oh, yes please! Oh, and nice idea, he took such good care of Rog! |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 26.03.2006 15:40 |
LadyMercury wrote:No, more Roger and Freddie!<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:wait..you want me to put Brian into a sex scene?<font color=blue>vallie wrote: o anb btw, a friend of mine told me to ask you, lady mercury, if you could in a sexy chapter with brian ;)Oh, yes please! Oh, and nice idea, he took such good care of Rog! |
| blerp 26.03.2006 15:43 |
Yeah, I'd rather keep it up with Freddie and Roger. I don't want Brian to infiltrate on their relationship and then Freddie gets extremely jealous and violent or something heh... :P |
| The Lost Queen 26.03.2006 16:05 |
I love this story so much!! You're amazing for doing this, LadyMercury. I applaud you *claps hands* This chapter was probably the best so far!! Together with chapter 7 :) I love the Freddie-Roger-romance!!! Keep it up!! :) :) |
| blerp 26.03.2006 16:05 |
Does anyone have anymore scenes they'd like for me to draw up? Two isn't enough |
| Sergei. 26.03.2006 17:22 |
How about one of Freddie rummaging through the coat closet and finding the nurse cap? |
| Hooligan's Holiday 26.03.2006 17:55 |
LadyMercury wrote:No that's not what I mean, I- Well I- nevermind, ask vallie, i dunno what I'm talking about.<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:wait..you want me to put Brian into a sex scene?<font color=blue>vallie wrote: o anb btw, a friend of mine told me to ask you, lady mercury, if you could in a sexy chapter with brian ;)Oh, yes please! Oh, and nice idea, he took such good care of Rog! |
| bohemian_queer 26.03.2006 19:12 |
Other scenes to animate: Freddie and Rog rocking out in the car while John was shopping.. Rog washing Freddie's hair would be funny..;).. Roger and his precious pineapple, Roger! hehe...Rog and Freddie sitting on Bri while he was napping on the couch.. There's soo many good scenes! Come on ppl! I don't want to be the only one making suggestions. :) Good stuff Ladymercury, good stuff.... |
| blerp 26.03.2006 21:23 |
God you people are like...dead anyway, good suggestions above |
| RETROLOVE 27.03.2006 01:21 |
LadyMercury wrote: God you people are like...dead anyway, good suggestions aboveLadymercury... I dont know what scene you should draw, maybe fred nursing rog in bed? |
| val 29467 27.03.2006 03:58 |
<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:i dunno, ask drivenby_you ;) i've been told that he should meet me :DLadyMercury wrote:No that's not what I mean, I- Well I- nevermind, ask vallie, i dunno what I'm talking about.<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:wait..you want me to put Brian into a sex scene?<font color=blue>vallie wrote: o anb btw, a friend of mine told me to ask you, lady mercury, if you could in a sexy chapter with brian ;)Oh, yes please! Oh, and nice idea, he took such good care of Rog! |
| val 29467 27.03.2006 04:02 |
<font color=Violet>Poppy wrote:\we've had enough chapters of that!!!LadyMercury wrote:No, more Roger and Freddie!<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:wait..you want me to put Brian into a sex scene?<font color=blue>vallie wrote: o anb btw, a friend of mine told me to ask you, lady mercury, if you could in a sexy chapter with brian ;)Oh, yes please! Oh, and nice idea, he took such good care of Rog! |
| val 29467 27.03.2006 04:02 |
LadyMercury wrote: Yeah, I'd rather keep it up with Freddie and Roger. I don't want Brian to infiltrate on their relationship and then Freddie gets extremely jealous and violent or something heh... :Pbrian doesn't have to become gay!!!! |
| The Lost Queen 27.03.2006 08:40 |
No.. but it's not as fun if he you know, just slept with some random girl no one knows of. I think it would be fun if something small happened between him and Roger, and then Freddie would find out and be insanely jelous, and he and Rog would have a huge fight, but then it would end with Rog screaming : "But I love you" to Freddie and then Frddie would be all silent and go : "I love you too" *kiss kiss hug hug* :) That would be great :) |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 27.03.2006 11:07 |
val<font color=violet>lie wrote:No, we really haven't. Roger and Freddie are waaaaay more interesting than Brian and Roger.<font color=Violet>Poppy wrote:\we've had enough chapters of that!!!LadyMercury wrote:No, more Roger and Freddie!<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:wait..you want me to put Brian into a sex scene?<font color=blue>vallie wrote: o anb btw, a friend of mine told me to ask you, lady mercury, if you could in a sexy chapter with brian ;)Oh, yes please! Oh, and nice idea, he took such good care of Rog! |
| bohemian_queer 27.03.2006 13:41 |
FunnyFella wrote: No.. but it's not as fun if he you know, just slept with some random girl no one knows of. I think it would be fun if something small happened between him and Roger, and then Freddie would find out and be insanely jelous, and he and Rog would have a huge fight, but then it would end with Rog screaming : "But I love you" to Freddie and then Frddie would be all silent and go : "I love you too" *kiss kiss hug hug* :) That would be great :)I think I'm w/ FunnyFella here.. that would be sooo sweet. Really great idea.. I just went "awww" outloud. :D |
| skiqueen 27.03.2006 18:34 |
i know this is kind of off-subject, but, ladymercury, have u heard of the drugs mixed with jasmine tea story? that would be something good to put in... |
| DreaminQueen 27.03.2006 20:33 |
omg i love this story!!!! seriously! Im laughin the whole way through, and saying aww at all these sweet parts... sooo cute... I want adorable room mates to take care of me like that!!! hehe Well more Freddie and Roger... But i wanna know about Bri too! Give em all a sexi scene! :-P Wow... i need help.... haha |
| blerp 27.03.2006 21:55 |
skiqueen wrote: i know this is kind of off-subject, but, ladymercury, have u heard of the drugs mixed with jasmine tea story? that would be something good to put in...YES, I have heard that one! GAH!!! Thank you for the idea, this chapter is going to make me laugh and it is going to be all gooey and nutty and chewy and sweet and salty..... (squeals) |
| bohemian_queer 28.03.2006 01:03 |
haha! You've got me hangin' on the edge of my seat! I'm so excited for the next chapter! Especially if it's gooey and nutty and chewy and sweet and salty! How will your readers be able to stand this suspense? ;-) |
| RETROLOVE 28.03.2006 01:29 |
Ladymercury... I think their should be a fighting scene next, a FUNNY fighting scene, like a duel or something, and you should put in a music section too, like where playing their instruments or something, lol... |
| val 29467 28.03.2006 02:45 |
<font color=Violet>Poppy wrote:not brian and roger!!!! only brian and hisself ;) brian is sexy and lonely...val<font color=violet>lie wrote:No, we really haven't. Roger and Freddie are waaaaay more interesting than Brian and Roger.<font color=Violet>Poppy wrote:\we've had enough chapters of that!!!LadyMercury wrote:No, more Roger and Freddie!<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote:wait..you want me to put Brian into a sex scene?<font color=blue>vallie wrote: o anb btw, a friend of mine told me to ask you, lady mercury, if you could in a sexy chapter with brian ;)Oh, yes please! Oh, and nice idea, he took such good care of Rog! |
| skiqueen 28.03.2006 16:22 |
...or how about when the group run into the gang members and rogers all 'im a karate master, if u dont leave us alone...u just dont wanna know' and then freddie can be all insulting them and saying how roger is the greatest and make the gang dudes all angry while roger is getting all uneasy....just a thought... |
| RETROLOVE 28.03.2006 18:24 |
skiqueen wrote: ...or how about when the group run into the gang members and rogers all 'im a karate master, if u dont leave us alone...u just dont wanna know' and then freddie can be all insulting them and saying how roger is the greatest and make the gang dudes all angry while roger is getting all uneasy....just a thought...hehehehe! LOL! |
| DreaminQueen 28.03.2006 19:02 |
o0o0 all those are great suggestions!!! :-P And make pics for them too if ya can!! aaah... im dying for the next chapter... this is good fun!!! |
| skiqueen 29.03.2006 12:41 |
...or when brian gets pulled aside in an alley way by these other gang members who ask him where he got his drugs because of the way he was dressed and his 'unique' hair....thats a lot of material for u, ladymercury, start writing!! i want the next episode!!!!! |
| beautifulsoup 29.03.2006 13:14 |
You do know that there are fanfic websites for this sort of thing? |
| blerp 29.03.2006 16:30 |
Double chapter today, just 'cos... I'm feeling really sluggish, and depressed, so I'm not sure if the story has lost it's feel. I'll start the drawings whenever. THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 17. Late evening came. Freddie and Roger both leaned on the window ledge, staring at the moon, and gazing at the stars. All was silent, except for the muffled sounds of the tele, or the occasional footsteps of the two others downstairs. They heard someone walking quickly up the stairs; it was Brian at the door. "Hey," he said, watching Roger and Freddie as they still stared out the window. "Do you two want to sit out in the garden with me?" "Yes," said Freddie. "We'd love to." "Erm, aren't you two going to get up?" "What did you say before?" asked Roger, finally turning around to face him. "I wasn't listening." "Ergh...Just come outside with me; I think you two need some fresh air." The two got up and put on some real clothing, then walked out with Brian, who led them to the back garden. John was there, sitting in a lawn chair, nodding his head to the song playing on the radio. "Hello John, dear!" said Freddie, walking over to hug him. "Oh, hello, Freddie!" said John, smiling as he was smothered by the tight embrace. Roger sat next to John and began patting his back for several minutes. Then Freddie turned to Brian and started talking about very random things, from the warm weather, to the Beatles, then to Pete Townshed, and back to the weather. It was very late out, around midnight, and the warm air and bright moon provoked Freddie and Roger to stand up and sing as loudly as they could. They tried getting Brian and John to join but they did not want to disturb the neighbours, even though Freddie and Roger had already done so themselves. The couple next door went out into their backyard and looked to and fro to find where the noise was coming from. "Ruddy hell!" said the man, grimacing as he walked towards the tall hedge that divided the two yards. "Those daft lads next door are singing again!" he said, studying the sounds even closer. "Can't you yell at them or something?!" his wife asked, standing a few feet behind him. He ignored her, and eventually she went back into the house to pop an aspirin or two. "Oi!" he yelled out. "Stop that blasted singing! Or I'll call the PC plod, I mean it!" The noise went down a bit. "Do mine ears deceive me?" said Freddie, cupping his ear in the direction of the hedge. "That hedge is talking!" He continued singing, while Roger began banging on the table with sticks and stomping his feet. The neighbour ran back in to call the police. "Phwoar, I'm thirsty," said Freddie after a while. "I'm going to slip in and make myself a cuppa." Freddie walked into the house towards the cupboard to find the teabox. He opened it to find that there were two identical boxes, both unmarked. He shrugged and grabbed the one he felt more obliged to pick, opened it, and sniffed it. "Jasmine tea, I reckon!" said Freddie. He let the water boil and scooped some tea into the pot. Jasmine tea it was, yes, but it was tea mixed with the weed Roger had put in with it to save for some other joyous time. Freddie, obviously enough, was unaware of that. He finally poured himself a cup and took a sip. It tasted like normal tea. He eventually walked back out to join the others. |
| blerp 29.03.2006 16:40 |
THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 18. Freddie finished his tea, and groaned pleasantly, setting the cup back on the table. He felt extremely relaxed; almost like he was about to sink into the ground. "Cor," said Freddie, tilting his head back and lifting his arms into the air. "That tea was fab." "Er, Freddie, are you okay?" asked John, leaning out his chair to look at him. "You're acting all funny." "Ah-what...Ah-what are you ah-talking about?" said Freddie slowly, smiling. He got up and walked back into the house. "Shit...I can smell colours!" cried Freddie, spinning in circles around the room. He then collapsed onto the couch. He could still hear Roger singing loudly and kicking things and so on. Brian came in and sat near Freddie. "Freddie??" "Yesssssss?" They were interrupted by a loud, harsh knock on the door. Brian opened it to find a gruff-looking man, scowling. Brian was a little intimidated, I mean, it was the police! But looking down at the cop, who was several inches shorter than him was quite amusing. Behind this small cop were two others, standing around with their flashlights. "Are you the lot making all this noise?" asked the cop roughly. "Erm, well, my friend, in the back, er, well, I just need to quiet him down," said Brian, giving Freddie a sign to take over for him. "Freddie!" he whispered fiercely. "Let them in while I shut Roger up...I don't know, chat with them, be right back!" "Oh, hello!" said Freddie, getting up. "Come in, come in, there's room for all! Mi casa es...er...Su casa! Cor, are you three able to smell sounds too?!" They looked at him oddly, then reluctantly walked in. Freddie scurried back into the kitchen and poured out more "tea." "Man, oh man, you gotta try this..." said Freddie, setting down the tea tray and a plate of cookies. "Drink up! Cheers!" he said again, gulping some of his own cup. The three men mumbled their thanks and sipped their tea, and nibbled on the biscuits. They didn't want to stay long. Brian came back a few minutes later with Roger, who had taken his shirt off. "Sorry, constables, about the noise," said Brian, pushing Roger upstairs. "I promise it won't happen again." "God, what is in this tea?" said one of the cops, taking another sip. He was smiling, the others chuckling a bit. Brian gave Freddie a stern look. He walked over to him, hurried him to the side and said, "Freddie! What's with the tea!? You didn't...Oh no...Roger!" Roger came running down again, up to Brian. "Eh?" he said. "Well, erm, I think Freddie used your stash..." "What!" Roger turned to Freddie. "Aw, don't worry, we'll get you more!" replied Freddie, leaning against the wall and rubbing his bum. "Freddie, I want them out of the house now!" said Brian, looking back at them. "I'm not throwing a party. Especially with policemen." "All right, all right..." Freddie eventually got the men out, which took a while, since one of them wouldn't let go of Brian's hair ("It's huge!"), and the other mistook Roger as a topless girl ("This place keeps getting better and better!"). "Ergh! Don't come back, you bum-sucking tits!" yelled Roger, throwing the biscuits at them. "I'm going to bed!" he said, walking up the stairs. A few minutes later, he popped his head back around the wall. "And I'm going to try growing a beard tomorrow." Freddie and Brian exchanged humourous looks. |
| skiqueen 29.03.2006 17:33 |
i LOVE IT!! i think my favorite chapter(s) so far!! i was laughing my head off....great job, once again |
| Hooligan's Holiday 29.03.2006 20:06 |
skiqueen wrote: i LOVE IT!! i think my favorite chapter(s) so far!! i was laughing my head off....great job, once againOh man, I agree! heheh I ran out of breath on that one. |
| DreaminQueen 29.03.2006 22:10 |
LMAO!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVEEEEE ITTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA! On a side note, has anyone seen the Beatles "A Hard Day's Night" and/or "HELP" ?? Wouldn't it be great if Queen did some fun little films like that??? id love it!!!! |
| blerp 29.03.2006 22:23 |
DreaminQueen wrote: LMAO!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVEEEEE ITTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA! On a side note, has anyone seen the Beatles "A Hard Day's Night" and/or "HELP" ?? Wouldn't it be great if Queen did some fun little films like that??? id love it!!!!A Hard Day's Night is the only one I've seen, but I thought it was so funny! There is this one part that I thought was hilarious, it was just a small bit...But the part where Ringo (I'm not sure) and the others are exploring their hotel room(?) and Ringo accidentally falls into a bed that's is literally in the floor. I just think about it and it's hilarious. Sorry for my inaccuracies (if I had any). :P |
| blerp 29.03.2006 22:25 |
Ahem!! But yeah, I'd love it if Queen did movies like that. But that just wouldn't go, haha. |
| skiqueen 29.03.2006 22:36 |
i can just visualize brian telling roger that freddie drank his drugs and roger going 'what?' with his mouth sort of hangin open, kind of confused.........................sorry, laughing fit :) |
| RETROLOVE 30.03.2006 02:06 |
Cute Chapter Ladymercury... Cheer up!!! Why are feeling down, depressed, etc? |
| val 29467 30.03.2006 02:44 |
LadyMercury wrote:it would be funny if they had a couple of those films!DreaminQueen wrote: LMAO!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVEEEEE ITTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA! On a side note, has anyone seen the Beatles "A Hard Day's Night" and/or "HELP" ?? Wouldn't it be great if Queen did some fun little films like that??? id love it!!!!A Hard Day's Night is the only one I've seen, but I thought it was so funny! There is this one part that I thought was hilarious, it was just a small bit...But the part where Ringo (I'm not sure) and the others are exploring their hotel room(?) and Ringo accidentally falls into a bed that's is literally in the floor. I just think about it and it's hilarious. Sorry for my inaccuracies (if I had any). :P |
| val 29467 30.03.2006 06:40 |
very good last chapter btw, i was reading it during my dutch class, i''m suprised that that guy didn't ask me what i was laughing about ;) |
| The Lost Queen 30.03.2006 07:45 |
Hahahahahaha, oh my god, this chapter(s) was so funny, especially when the policeman grabbed Brian's hair ("it's huge!") that was hilarious!! Kepp it up, LadyMercury, and I hope you feel better. DOn't worry, you've not lost "the feel", this is just getting better and better!! :) |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 30.03.2006 11:10 |
DreaminQueen wrote: On a side note, has anyone seen the Beatles "A Hard Day's Night" and/or "HELP" ?? Wouldn't it be great if Queen did some fun little films like that??? id love it!!!!I love A Hard Days Night and I'd love to have seen Queen do something like it! |
| deleted user 30.03.2006 15:25 |
val<font color=violet>lie wrote: very good last chapter btw, i was reading it during my dutch class, i''m suprised that that guy didn't ask me what i was laughing about ;)mwuha me2 do you think he can read english ;p ? |
| blerp 30.03.2006 15:32 |
<B><font color=brown>onelonelypussycat wrote: Cute Chapter Ladymercury... Cheer up!!! Why are feeling down, depressed, etc?Eh, it's my mum, she's a pest, and I'm just sick of the people around me. I've been teased since I was in kindergarten, and it's sort of continued till today, but for some reason, people still find me a cool person, so I usually hide my depression, but now living with completely different people, I can show it. Does that make sense? :P |
| Sergei. 30.03.2006 15:40 |
That's what happens to me only people say shit about me to my older brothers. On occasion people say stuff to my face. Yay! You incorperated the Garden in your chapter! Whee! This is a great story, ladymercury, and my old elementary school has a small "publishing company" so if you would like I could put in a good word for you? |
| blerp 30.03.2006 15:57 |
childwhoevery1hates wrote: That's what happens to me only people say shit about me to my older brothers. On occasion people say stuff to my face. Yay! You incorperated the Garden in your chapter! Whee! This is a great story, ladymercury, and my old elementary school has a small "publishing company" so if you would like I could put in a good word for you?Same thing happened last year with my older sister. She has some really observant friends, so anything weird that I did they would basically report it to her. Mind you, I was a freshman last year, and she was a senior, and well, come on, I was a freshman! "my old elementary school has a small "publishing company" so if you would like I could put in a good word for you?" I want the title to be: The Egg Story - For the Lust In All Of Us Females....And Gays |
| Sergei. 30.03.2006 16:15 |
Haha I shall see what I am able to do! ~Or~ maybe by three weeks I will have the story I am writing finished and I like to send copies to publishing companies (I have done it before and no replies, but then again, that story was full of cheap dollar store humour, not to mention written in the 4th grade- my new one is more mature) I could send them a copy of yours if you like (I have been to this publishing company in South Carolina and they have like STACKS of submissions, like, to the ceiling, so the actual chances are slimmer than Lindsay Lohan) but it's fun to try! |
| blerp 30.03.2006 19:00 |
THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 19. Freddie, Brian and John sat at the table the next morning, eating their breakfast and chatting about the music press. Roger came down a few minutes late, immediately walking to the counter to take the plate they had left for him. "Well, good morning, Roger!" Freddie said, waving to him. "Hello," said Roger, sitting down with them. He took a bite of his bacon. "Erm...How do you grow a beard?" He directed this question to Brian, who was busy cutting his egg and toast sandwich in half. "Huh?" said Brian, looking up. "Oh. You just...Stop shaving." He continued cutting his sandwich. "I've grown a beard before!" said Freddie, raising his hand. "No, Freddie, the only thing you've grown is your chest hair," said Brian, looking up again. "Oh." Freddie put his hand down. "But I've grown scruff on my face..." "Yes. We all have." said Brian. "How long does it take, Brian?" asked Roger. "I don't know...About four or five days?" "Ergh, I can't wait that long!" cried Roger. "Why so anxious, dear?" questioned Freddie, placing both of his hands on Roger's cheeks. "I'm tired of people thinking I'm a girl." "No one has ever thought you were a girl!" said John. "Yeah! Yeah, they have!" said Roger, getting a bit irritated. "Rog, those policemen last night were stoned, what do you expect?" said Brian. "That isn't the only time though!" said Roger, becoming more and more agitated. "Okay, darling, calm down," cooed Freddie, holding his shoulder and stroking his head. "Tell us the other times it's happened then." "All right, well, you know when we went to the park?" They all nodded their heads, making sure to not annoy Roger any further, 'cos Roger losing his temper wouldn't be nice. "Well, when I was in that tree, these two blokes saw me climbing around and walked over. One of them went up and said, Oi! You're a real firecracker! Fancy a shag?" Freddie tried as hard as he could to contain his laughter. "D-Did you tell them that you were a bloke then?" he said. "Heck yes I did," said Roger, stabbing the yolk of his eggs and watching the yellow stuff ooze out. "I flashed them my cock -- Gave them a good right scare, it did." Freddie burst out with laughter, while Brian and John's mouths dropped open. "Ha ha! Bet that's why the tree shook like so! Busy pulling your trousers down, eh?" Freddie roared again and almost fell out of his chair. "Oh God, haha, God..." he wiped the few tears leaking out of his eyes. Freddie's eyes lighted up at a sudden idea. "Maybe we should buy you a beard!" he began laughing again. "No, no, that's silly!" said Brian. "I don't care!" said Roger, sitting up. "Can't we look?" "Oh, come on, Brian, maybe we can find you a hair piece, for your chest, like me!" said Freddie, still giggling. Brian put his head into his hands. |
| skiqueen 30.03.2006 19:18 |
no roger, dont grow a beard!!!!! story was great as usual and getting it published isnt a bad idea! like i said before, a comic would be nice... |
| blerp 30.03.2006 19:24 |
skiqueen wrote: no roger, dont grow a beard!!!!! story was great as usual and getting it published isnt a bad idea! like i said before, a comic would be nice...Yeah, the scenes...I really don't know what I should draw first! But I'm going to start soon. |
| DreaminQueen 30.03.2006 21:05 |
val<font color=violet>lie wrote:Yea it would!!LadyMercury wrote:it would be funny if they had a couple of those films!DreaminQueen wrote: LMAO!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVEEEEE ITTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA! On a side note, has anyone seen the Beatles "A Hard Day's Night" and/or "HELP" ?? Wouldn't it be great if Queen did some fun little films like that??? id love it!!!!A Hard Day's Night is the only one I've seen, but I thought it was so funny! There is this one part that I thought was hilarious, it was just a small bit...But the part where Ringo (I'm not sure) and the others are exploring their hotel room(?) and Ringo accidentally falls into a bed that's is literally in the floor. I just think about it and it's hilarious. Sorry for my inaccuracies (if I had any). :P The part you're referring too is in HELP and its John lol hes got a bed built in the floor! :-P thats a smart idea, a real space saver!! the only problem is, what do you do in a flood?? lol |
| DreaminQueen 30.03.2006 21:12 |
Im sorry LadyMercury you're in a depressed state... Ignore older upper classmen, they're jerks... I know how you feel because i had some freshmen when i was a 7th grader have some inside joke about me being an oompa loompa from willy wonka and the chocolate factory, because i was short, and well kinda round... But you know what?? FORGET THEM! I know its hard, i still worry about what other people think, but at the end of the day, if you can find something that will make you happy, like for me its writing or listening to my favorite music, just do it and let the rest wash over you... If ya ever need to talk, you can email me DreaminQueen@queenzone.com ive been told im a good listener... Anywho, back to the task at hand... LOVE THE STORY! Roggie can grow a goatee, just not a beard, it makes him look like a country western singer... lol I can see them saying and doing everything in my head as i read it! It sooo good! GOD THEY"RE SOO ADORABLE!!!! :-P Keep up the great work! |
| skiqueen 30.03.2006 22:00 |
ur right about the country singer part, dreamin queen.....never really thought of that, but now that i see it in my head, ur right! |
| RETROLOVE 31.03.2006 01:22 |
LadyMercury wrote:Ladymercury:onelonelypussycat wrote: Cute Chapter Ladymercury... Cheer up!!! Why are feeling down, depressed, etc?Eh, it's my mum, she's a pest, and I'm just sick of the people around me. I've been teased since I was in kindergarten, and it's sort of continued till today, but for some reason, people still find me a cool person, so I usually hide my depression, but now living with completely different people, I can show it. Does that make sense? :P Ahhhh, sorry you have to go through the things that you are going through....I know, growing up is very very hard, and so is being a teenager, it was very tough for me, I was very introverted, but a good person underneath, and hardly had any friends, and the few that I had were very "FLAKY" meaning that they were friends with me sometimes, and sometimes they werent. And dont even get me started on family, oh god!! I got a brother that is about your age, and he is going through a very hard time right now...my mother and him dont get along very well, their always fighting and bumping heads with eachother, I have another brother who is 21, and who has literally dissapeared off of the face of the earth, we never hear from him anymore, we dont know what happened to him...but I still keep him in my thoughts and prayers!! I'm 23 and just moved back home, and while I like saving money, I dont like getting treated like a little kid, so I am plannng on moving again....and trust me, the REAL WORLD IS NO JOKE!!! Its very expensive! I just dont do the roommate thing, and paying $500.00 a month for rent just isnt my cup of tea, along with many other bills! YOU HAVE YOUR WHOLE LIFE AHEAD OF YOU...and trust me, HIGH SCHOOL ENDS!!!!(but cherish your teenage years, cause they go by so fast) dont let those people get you down, do what I did, and keep looking forward to graduation day!!!! I know we only talk over the internet, but you seem really nice, and I always look forward to reading your story, its the highlight of my day! Keep your head up, and dont let people get you down...cause you cant control what people do....just keep on loving yourself, and loving people who loves you back!!! Cyberhugs and kisses!!! |
| skiqueen 31.03.2006 11:10 |
<B>Brokeback Queen <h6>onelonelypussycat wrote:ur so nice :)LadyMercury wrote:Ladymercury: Ahhhh, sorry you have to go through the things that you are going through....I know, growing up is very very hard, and so is being a teenager, it was very tough for me, I was very introverted, but a good person underneath, and hardly had any friends, and the few that I had were very "FLAKY" meaning that they were friends with me sometimes, and sometimes they werent. And dont even get me started on family, oh god!! I got a brother that is about your age, and he is going through a very hard time right now...my mother and him dont get along very well, their always fighting and bumping heads with eachother, I have another brother who is 21, and who has literally dissapeared off of the face of the earth, we never hear from him anymore, we dont know what happened to him...but I still keep him in my thoughts and prayers!! I'm 23 and just moved back home, and while I like saving money, I dont like getting treated like a little kid, so I am plannng on moving again....and trust me, the REAL WORLD IS NO JOKE!!! Its very expensive! I just dont do the roommate thing, and paying $500.00 a month for rent just isnt my cup of tea, along with many other bills! YOU HAVE YOUR WHOLE LIFE AHEAD OF YOU...and trust me, HIGH SCHOOL ENDS!!!!(but cherish your teenage years, cause they go by so fast) dont let those people get you down, do what I did, and keep looking forward to graduation day!!!! I know we only talk over the internet, but you seem really nice, and I always look forward to reading your story, its the highlight of my day! Keep your head up, and dont let people get you down...cause you cant control what people do....just keep on loving yourself, and loving people who loves you back!!! Cyberhugs and kisses!!! <font size=12 color=red> <I> <marquee>Cheer up Lady Mercury!!</marquee> </font> </b<B><font color=brown>onelonelypussycat wrote: Cute Chapter Ladymercury... Cheer up!!! Why are feeling down, depressed, etc?Eh, it's my mum, she's a pest, and I'm just sick of the people around me. I've been teased since I was in kindergarten, and it's sort of continued till today, but for some reason, people still find me a cool person, so I usually hide my depression, but now living with completely different people, I can show it. Does that make sense? :P |
| The Lost Queen 31.03.2006 11:16 |
^^ aww, that's sweet... :) Brokeback Queen:Like Brokeback mountain du you, huh? This chapter was so funny!!! Haha, Roger is just like a child, he's so sweet. The story is awsome, LadyMercury. The first thing I do when I get home from school, is alway go into QZ and look if there's a new chapter here. You're such a good writer. Hope you feel better. |
| RETROLOVE 31.03.2006 11:20 |
skiqueen wrote:Thanks...I try my hardest!!! XXXOOOOOO<B>Brokeback Queen <h6>onelonelypussycat wrote:ur so nice :)LadyMercury wrote:Ladymercury: Ahhhh, sorry you have to go through the things that you are going through....I know, growing up is very very hard, and so is being a teenager, it was very tough for me, I was very introverted, but a good person underneath, and hardly had any friends, and the few that I had were very "FLAKY" meaning that they were friends with me sometimes, and sometimes they werent. And dont even get me started on family, oh god!! I got a brother that is about your age, and he is going through a very hard time right now...my mother and him dont get along very well, their always fighting and bumping heads with eachother, I have another brother who is 21, and who has literally dissapeared off of the face of the earth, we never hear from him anymore, we dont know what happened to him...but I still keep him in my thoughts and prayers!! I'm 23 and just moved back home, and while I like saving money, I dont like getting treated like a little kid, so I am plannng on moving again....and trust me, the REAL WORLD IS NO JOKE!!! Its very expensive! I just dont do the roommate thing, and paying $500.00 a month for rent just isnt my cup of tea, along with many other bills! YOU HAVE YOUR WHOLE LIFE AHEAD OF YOU...and trust me, HIGH SCHOOL ENDS!!!!(but cherish your teenage years, cause they go by so fast) dont let those people get you down, do what I did, and keep looking forward to graduation day!!!! I know we only talk over the internet, but you seem really nice, and I always look forward to reading your story, its the highlight of my day! Keep your head up, and dont let people get you down...cause you cant control what people do....just keep on loving yourself, and loving people who loves you back!!! Cyberhugs and kisses!!! <font size=12 color=red> <I> <marquee>Cheer up Lady Mercury!!</marquee> </font> </b<B><font color=brown>onelonelypussycat wrote: Cute Chapter Ladymercury... Cheer up!!! Why are feeling down, depressed, etc?Eh, it's my mum, she's a pest, and I'm just sick of the people around me. I've been teased since I was in kindergarten, and it's sort of continued till today, but for some reason, people still find me a cool person, so I usually hide my depression, but now living with completely different people, I can show it. Does that make sense? :P |
| RETROLOVE 31.03.2006 11:21 |
FunnyFella wrote: ^^ aww, that's sweet... :) Brokeback Queen:Like Brokeback mountain du you, huh? This chapter was so funny!!! Haha, Roger is just like a child, he's so sweet. The story is awsome, LadyMercury. The first thing I do when I get home from school, is alway go into QZ and look if there's a new chapter here. You're such a good writer. Hope you feel better.Yep...thats my motavation.... I looooooved Brokeback Mountain, and I looooove Queen, so go figure...lol Oh yeah, and if you havent seen the movie...go and rent the DVD from blockbuster |
| The Lost Queen 31.03.2006 13:49 |
<B>Brokeback Queen <h6>onelonelypussycat wrote:Ooo, Brokeback Mountain is my favourite movie :) It's amazing :) When I've seen it I always feel like someone has hit me with a slegdehammer in the chest... :/FunnyFella wrote: ^^ aww, that's sweet... :) Brokeback Queen:Like Brokeback mountain du you, huh? This chapter was so funny!!! Haha, Roger is just like a child, he's so sweet. The story is awsome, LadyMercury. The first thing I do when I get home from school, is alway go into QZ and look if there's a new chapter here. You're such a good writer. Hope you feel better.Yep...thats my motavation.... I looooooved Brokeback Mountain, and I looooove Queen, so go figure...lol Oh yeah, and if you havent seen the movie...go and rent the DVD from blockbuster Can I just ask, how do you get that small "onelonelypussycat" in your name????? |
| blerp 31.03.2006 21:31 |
Thanks to you lot for the kind words; I appreciate it. Will be working on the new chapter tonight |
| blerp 31.03.2006 21:32 |
Oh yes, and my day was MUCH better today |
| Fiendishly Yours 31.03.2006 22:41 |
LadyMercury wrote: Will be working on the new chapter tonightMake it a long one! ;D Naw, just kidding. Go at your own pace. This is just really fun to read. |
| skiqueen 31.03.2006 23:07 |
glad ur feelin better, ladymercury...life sometimes really sucks, doesnt it? |
| RETROLOVE 01.04.2006 03:33 |
FunnyFella wrote:Oh...for that you just put in your username in your profile....trying copy and pasting this where your username goes in your profile box....it should work...<B>Brokeback Queen <h6>onelonelypussycat wrote:Ooo, Brokeback Mountain is my favourite movie :) It's amazing :) When I've seen it I always feel like someone has hit me with a slegdehammer in the chest... :/ Can I just ask, how do you get that small "onelonelypussycat" in your name?????FunnyFella wrote: ^^ aww, that's sweet... :) Brokeback Queen:Like Brokeback mountain du you, huh? This chapter was so funny!!! Haha, Roger is just like a child, he's so sweet. The story is awsome, LadyMercury. The first thing I do when I get home from school, is alway go into QZ and look if there's a new chapter here. You're such a good writer. Hope you feel better.Yep...thats my motavation.... I looooooved Brokeback Mountain, and I looooove Queen, so go figure...lol Oh yeah, and if you havent seen the movie...go and rent the DVD from blockbuster Funnyfella<h6>funnyfella the second funnyfella should come out small...lol |
| The Lost Queen 01.04.2006 05:27 |
Thanks a lot :) but it doesn't work... it just says "Server error" or something like that, when I try... But thanks anyway... |
| RETROLOVE 01.04.2006 15:31 |
FunnyFella wrote: Thanks a lot :) but it doesn't work... it just says "Server error" or something like that, when I try... But thanks anyway...Man, well, I dont know why it would do that...I know when I try to add a picture, server error ALWAYS comes up for me...I would say try again...and copy and paste it where you put your username...: funnyfella<h6>funnyfella |
| blerp 01.04.2006 16:54 |
Voila. THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 20. A few hours after breakfast, Roger approached Brian, who was sitting on the couch watching an episode of Monty Python. "Brian, are we going to find me a beard?" "Er, I guess," he replied, looking up at Roger as if he had just stabbed him with a dull knife. "But we'll have to go late at night..." "Why?" "Er, I don't want to be seen by anyone." "Okay, fine." Roger left the living room. Brian continued watching his show. "Silly little benny," he said quietly, smiling slightly. ------------- Somewhere around 9 'o' clock, they all left (except John, he had plans with some old mates early tomorrow) to go off to the downtown wig store. As Brian drove down the dimly lit street, he noticed some funny-looking people standing around the corner. "Eh oh," he said aloud. Freddie and Roger looked at him. "What?" they both asked. "Well, nothing," he said, avoiding the glares of the group standing outside. "Just those guys look a little shifty...They might be druggies!" "Oh, pish, they aren't going to do anything!" said Freddie, waving his hand rather rudely in their direction. Brian tried to shrug it off, but ended up feeling even more uncomfortable. He parked the car and cautiously climbed out, while Freddie and Roger basically fell out and were laughing loudly. The shady-looking group looked over, unfriendly faces stabbing their presence. They walked down the sidewalk to the wig shop. Brian was getting a little nervous, since they would have to pass by the troupe of drug dealers. "You guys," Brian said through the side of his mouth. "Quiet down!" "Brian, you're such a little worrying thing!" said Roger, as Freddie tried climbing onto his back. They were almost past the group when one of them walked out and stood in front of the three. He had a huge afro, wearing his shirt unbuttoned and ripped jeans, smoking a joint. A smile appeared on his gaunt face. Brian stepped back a little. "Hey, chill out, man," said the dreg. He walked over to Roger, who still had Freddie on his back. He looked at Freddie, then Roger. "Woah, you must be a pretty strong girl." The rest of the group laughed. "I'm not a girl!" yelled Roger, dropping Freddie. "And if you don't leave us alone, I'm going to have to bring out my...Er...Judo skills!" he whipped out his student ID card. The group walked over a little more, peering at Roger's ID. "Wait, what does that say?" "I dunno....I can't read." "He must be telling the truth then, man!!" They backed away from Roger. Then they turned to Brian. "Shit! Wonder what kind of drugs he sells." "Yeah, what d'you have on you, eh?" "I don't have anything on me!" said Brian, backing up. "Man, look at those clogs, sweet buckles..." "Bet he hides the stash in his hair..." "This dude dresses so damn weird..." By this time, they had gotten Brian to back up in an alleyway; they were completely mesmerized with his appearance. They demanded Brian to cough something up. "Look, just leave me alone!" he cried. They almost closed in on him, when Brian decided to gird his loins and push through. "Oh, erm, have to go, terribly sorry!" he said, separating the entire troupe in half with his long arms. "Hey, you should hang out with us!" "Yeah!!!" "We love you, man!!!" "Spread the love!!!" Then they all began hippie dancing and flashing peace signs to Brian, Roger, and Freddie. They ran off. "I don't want a beard anymore!" whined Roger, walking alongside Freddie, who had put his arm around him. "All right, all right, let's just get home..." |
| RETROLOVE 01.04.2006 17:50 |
LOL!!! Why was Freddie on Roger's back (their dropping too many hints)...that is toooo funny, you've got a good imagination!!...I could just picture Brian running off like that...(but seeing him in interviews,((he can really really talk)) and knowing how smart he is ) it seems like he'd be able to 'talk' his way out of a fight...lol |
| bohemian_queer 01.04.2006 17:55 |
hahahahaha! I love it Ladymercury!! This chapter was great, I laughed thru the entire thing! Keep it up. :) |
| Sergei. 01.04.2006 19:14 |
This is a great story! |
| skiqueen 01.04.2006 19:25 |
loved it....keep writing! |
| DreaminQueen 01.04.2006 19:56 |
LMAO!!!! Good stuff... :-P |
| blerp 01.04.2006 21:49 |
Haha, thanks you all. Nah, I just had Roger giving Freddie a piggy back ride because I thought it was funny/cute, and it pretty much added to how silly they were being. |
| eedodededededea 02.04.2006 03:20 |
i cant imagine what could happen when Freddie was lookin for his moustache |
| val 29467 02.04.2006 10:11 |
<font color=lime>driven by you wrote:nah, he's too stupidval<font color=violet>lie wrote: very good last chapter btw, i was reading it during my dutch class, i''m suprised that that guy didn't ask me what i was laughing about ;)mwuha me2 do you think he can read english ;p ? |
| The Lost Queen 02.04.2006 14:11 |
Hhahaha, this chapter was so funny!! I can just see them in front of, doing all the things you write, LadyMercury. It's great :) |
| MrOrange 02.04.2006 14:19 |
:) This is fun |
| skiqueen 04.04.2006 17:52 |
i know this is kind of random, but is there really going to be a queen night on american idol? OMG im so excited!!!!!!!!! |
| Sergei. 05.04.2006 19:15 |
I think there will be but I know this girl who sits at my table and ruefully scorned my announcement and said Queen sucked too bad for A.I. To do them a tribute. I told her simply to watch and we shall indeed see who is right. But I am very excited too! Whee! I get to sing along and judge as well!! :-D |
| blerp 05.04.2006 20:45 |
Why is this thread up again? I thought it died down. |
| Fiendishly Yours 05.04.2006 21:09 |
[no message] |
| Roger'sGirl72610 05.04.2006 21:13 |
We want another chapter!!! |
| its_a_hard_life 26994 05.04.2006 21:16 |
LadyMercury wrote: Why is this thread up again? I thought it died down.Me too... |
| skiqueen 05.04.2006 21:38 |
LadyMercury wrote: Why is this thread up again? I thought it died down.does this mean no more chapters? :( |
| blerp 05.04.2006 22:50 |
Well, I'm not sure. 'Cos last night as I was trying to fall asleep, two chapters formed in my head based on a new story involving the song the Fairy Feller's Master Stroke! Freddie would be the fairy feller, and some fat bloke would be the ostler, etc. Erm...Roger could be the dragonfly trumpeter...You know...With a huge dragonfly on his head. |
| Sergei. 06.04.2006 08:42 |
...And John could be the ogre whom roars with despise when someone does so little as call his name. |
| DreaminQueen 06.04.2006 18:07 |
thatd be fun!!! :-P But dont stop this one if you can help it! I have been hanging on for another chapter.. maybe even just a closing chapter??? |
| blerp 06.04.2006 19:15 |
Hey y'all. Closing chapter, y'all. THE EGG STORY - CLOSING CHAPTER. "Thank God we are home!" cried Freddie, jumping out of the car and grabbing Roger's hand. "Roger, up to the bedroom -- now." "What are we doing, Freddie?" asked Roger. "I'll show you upstairs." They both went into the house. Brian listened at the bottom of the stairs as they stomped around, then all went silent. Brian raised his eyebrows, shrugged and went up to his room. He sat on his bed, noticing that John was asleep. Not wanting to bother him, he went down into the kitchen to sit down and think a little before going to sleep himself. Brian sat down at the table, turning on only one light so that the kitchen seemed dim and shallow. He couldn't hear much from upstairs, but a few minutes later he heard several loud thumps from what seemed to be coming from Freddie and Roger's room. "What are they doing up there?" he thought, then continued thinking. A few hours later, Freddie and Roger came down, quiet but smiling. "What have you been doing?" Brian asked. "Oh, nothing," said Roger, sitting next to Freddie. Freddie and Brian began talking about things that didn't really interest Roger at all. He began to droop over, ready to fall asleep. Freddie put his hand on his shoulder. "Roger, why don't you brush your teeth and go to bed?" asked Freddie, rubbing his back. "You seem very tired. Come on, go." Roger stood up timidly, and Freddie gave a gentle push on his back. "Eh, good night, see you all tomorrow morning." said Roger, dragging himself up the stairs. Freddie and Brian continued talking. "What was going on up there?" asked Brian then, leaning closer to Freddie. "What did you do to him? He seems really tuckered out." Freddie leaned back in his chair, examining his nails from afar. "Hmm, well, I used my skills and finally got him into bed." Brian blinked. "Oh...Er, how was it?" "Orgasmic." "Oh, well, congratulations, I guess." "Thank you." "Anything else happen?" questioned Brian, sitting back in his chair now. "Well, I told him," said Freddie, groaning and sitting up now, "That instead of growing a beard, he could grow sideburns. Told him it was easier." "Oh! That's good. A beard really wouldn't suit him, you know." "Yeah..." It went quiet for a few minutes. "Well, you're really good at that, you know, convincing people and so on. Clever." "I know, right?" replied Freddie, smiling broadly. Y'all. |
| skiqueen 06.04.2006 20:07 |
awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! cant believe its the final chapter....everything is ending!! the egg story, the tour.......im so sad!!! |
| DreaminQueen 06.04.2006 22:31 |
i know!!!! :'( :'( I cant handle this!! Oh well LadyMercury said shes got another story in mind so thats good... And they're just gonna have to come back for another tour SOONNN!!!! Im going through withdrawl here!!!! |
| blerp 06.04.2006 23:18 |
Yes! Never fear! But every time I put up a new chapter of the Fairy Feller, you must play the Fairy Feller's Master stroke, like a theme song to it...Well, only the first verse. Oh come now, they're going to be touring next year, right? |
| bohemian_queer 07.04.2006 01:08 |
What a great last chapter! Cute and hot and just wonderful. ;) Thanks for the story, Ladymercury, it was fun. Lookin' forward to the next one.. (damn I need Queen and Queen II...:( ) |
| RETROLOVE 07.04.2006 02:47 |
LadyMercury wrote: Hey y'all. Closing chapter, y'all. THE EGG STORY - CLOSING CHAPTER. "Thank God we are home!" cried Freddie, jumping out of the car and grabbing Roger's hand. "Roger, up to the bedroom -- now." "What are we doing, Freddie?" asked Roger. "I'll show you upstairs." They both went into the house. Brian listened at the bottom of the stairs as they stomped around, then all went silent. Brian raised his eyebrows, shrugged and went up to his room. He sat on his bed, noticing that John was asleep. Not wanting to bother him, he went down into the kitchen to sit down and think a little before going to sleep himself. Brian sat down at the table, turning on only one light so that the kitchen seemed dim and shallow. He couldn't hear much from upstairs, but a few minutes later he heard several loud thumps from what seemed to be coming from Freddie and Roger's room. "What are they doing up there?" he thought, then continued thinking. A few hours later, Freddie and Roger came down, quiet but smiling. "What have you been doing?" Brian asked. "Oh, nothing," said Roger, sitting next to Freddie. Freddie and Brian began talking about things that didn't really interest Roger at all. He began to droop over, ready to fall asleep. Freddie put his hand on his shoulder. "Roger, why don't you brush your teeth and go to bed?" asked Freddie, rubbing his back. "You seem very tired. Come on, go." Roger stood up timidly, and Freddie gave a gentle push on his back. "Eh, good night, see you all tomorrow morning." said Roger, dragging himself up the stairs. Freddie and Brian continued talking. "What was going on up there?" asked Brian then, leaning closer to Freddie. "What did you do to him? He seems really tuckered out." Freddie leaned back in his chair, examining his nails from afar. "Hmm, well, I used my skills and finally got him into bed." Brian blinked. "Oh...Er, how was it?" "Orgasmic." "Oh, well, congratulations, I guess." "Thank you." "Anything else happen?" questioned Brian, sitting back in his chair now. "Well, I told him," said Freddie, groaning and sitting up now, "That instead of growing a beard, he could grow sideburns. Told him it was easier." "Oh! That's good. A beard really wouldn't suit him, you know." "Yeah..." It went quiet for a few minutes. "Well, you're really good at that, you know, convincing people and so on. Clever." "I know, right?" replied Freddie, smiling broadly. Y'all.Cute chap Lady Merc!! |
| val 29467 07.04.2006 13:25 |
aaaahhhh, it was a very good time, lady mercury! |
| blerp 16.04.2006 00:33 |
Woohoooo...I'm dancing with the eggs right now. |
| That guy who digs energy domes 16.04.2006 00:38 |
You should put this in a blog |
| blerp 16.04.2006 01:20 |
I really had to jump to a sexy part, I've been feeling bunged up lately, if you know what I mean. THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 22. Freddie and Brian sat in their chairs, in a mild silence that seemed to seep in slowly and enclose upon them. Every so often, Freddie would look up at Brian with a coy smile on his tan face, both fists under his chin. They locked eyes for a few seconds, and ended up giggling quietly. "Why do you keep giving me that look?" said Brian after a while, putting his hand over his mouth to conceal his smile from the flirtatious eyes of Freddie. "What look?" replied Freddie, sitting back, smiling broadly. "That look...You're giving me those sticky eyes, like you've got warm toffee in them, you don't, do you?" With this Brian leaned over the table and began to lightly poke Freddie's eyelids. Freddie snuffled and took his hands and held them. He began to rub his hands between Brian's, feeling his palms with his fingertips, then the top of his hands. He felt every long finger, each one causing a shock of sensation to course through his veins. "Your hands...So warm," he whispered, placing each hand on his cheeks. "Oh..." He let out a small moan. Freddie held Brian's hands on his face, then brought them back up to his eyes. He let Brian touch his eyebrows, shivering as the long thumbs smoothed over his eyelids. "Woah yo mama!" yelled Brian, taking his hands away. "What's happening?" "Brian, please!" said Freddie impatiently. "This was getting very good, and you ruined it with your stupid little phrase!" "But it's what I always say!" Brian retorted, folding his hands again. "Woah yo mama!" He laughed, putting on a humourous face of pure shock. "You don't like it?" Freddie wrapped his hands over Brian's. "Brian," Freddie whispered, looking small and innocent. "Please." He bent down and kissed Brian's wrists, and looked up again. "W-would you like it better if we were in the living room?" Brian asked, realizing how much Freddie wanted to do this. He also then realized he wanted to do this too. "Yes, exactly my thinking," said Freddie, he got up and made his way to the living room. He turned around slowly, to give Brian another one of his seductive looks. Brian smiled, and followed Freddie. |
| bohemian_queer 16.04.2006 03:05 |
*fans face frantically* Thank goodness you're back! We've missed your story! Nice chapter, but don't leave us in suspence too long, this is too good to wait long for! *whoo it's hot in here, isn't it???* :-P |
| The Lost Queen 16.04.2006 08:56 |
AAAAAAA!!!! Oh-my-God (d'you watch 'Friends'?)!!!!!!! Jeeeeez, please, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter!!!!! AAAAA!!! |
| RETROLOVE 16.04.2006 12:41 |
Cute chap Lady Merc!! aka la-merc! Its more sexual tension in this house then an episode of the real world, or an episode of Friends...lol Fred's always trying to turn somebody out! |
| RETROLOVE 16.04.2006 12:48 |
Ha LadyMercury: Can you put in a chapter where its having to do with music, like rehersing or something? |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 16.04.2006 12:49 |
Nooooo! Not Brian and Freddie! Roger and Freddie are cuter. Still great as ever though! :D |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 13:01 |
that is not how you spell cuter |
| flash! 28068 16.04.2006 13:03 |
queenkateg4 wrote: that is not how you spell cuterYes it is. |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 16.04.2006 13:04 |
queenkateg4 wrote: that is not how you spell cuterAnd how would you suggest I spell it? |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 13:05 |
sorry |
| flash! 28068 16.04.2006 13:09 |
<font color=Violet>Poppy wrote:I didn't know she thinks she can correct your spelling with the incorrect spelling. Ha! :Squeenkateg4 wrote: that is not how you spell cuterAnd how would you suggest I spell it? |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 13:10 |
thanks youve made me upset |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 16.04.2006 13:11 |
How's that? |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 13:12 |
everyones being nasty to me |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 16.04.2006 13:15 |
Sorry. It's just my reaction against bad grammar. |
| flash! 28068 16.04.2006 13:20 |
<font color=Violet>Poppy wrote: Sorry. It's just my reaction against bad grammar.lol Mine too. Here's my reaction = "What the hell does that supposed to mean??? Huh???" |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 13:26 |
sorry for saying get of my message board its just i dont like people being nasty |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 16.04.2006 13:32 |
Well I don't like bad grammar but that's life. |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 13:33 |
so arewe cool |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 16.04.2006 13:35 |
Yeah. I guess so. |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 13:39 |
how many easter eggs did u get |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 13:42 |
Oh, I don't get easter eggs. I only recieve them. |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 13:54 |
cheeky |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 14:14 |
Not intentionally, though... |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 14:17 |
are you flirting with me |
| flash! 28068 16.04.2006 14:18 |
Yes, he just secretly told me he's fallen madly in love with you. lol |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 14:20 |
you know queen sang that song liar that is all you are flash a liar |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 14:21 |
<font color=red>Flash! wrote: Yes, he just secretly told me he's fallen madly in love with you. lolFlashy, I trusted you! How dare you?? |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 14:22 |
is he telling the truth cos i might feel the same way if you told the truth |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 14:23 |
Yes, Flashy? Am I telling the truth? |
| queenkateg4 16.04.2006 14:24 |
tell me for real |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 14:29 |
Yes, Flashy, tell her! |
| flash! 28068 16.04.2006 14:34 |
The Millionaire Waltz wrote: Yes, Flashy, tell her!Er...well.... |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 14:41 |
Well... I'm guessing she'd like to know? |
| flash! 28068 16.04.2006 14:42 |
Ok... the real truth is... you do love her! It's the truth! You told me! Don't you remember!? |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 14:53 |
<font color=red>Flash! wrote: Ok... the real truth is... you do love her! It's the truth! You told me! Don't you remember!?Maybe I do...? |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 16.04.2006 14:55 |
Yes, it's official, he's madly in love with you Kate. |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 14:57 |
What are you doing tomorrow, Kate? How do you feel about marriage? Just you and me? And Fred Astaire? |
| skiqueen 16.04.2006 15:27 |
ha, yes, the egg story is back in business! |
| flash! 28068 16.04.2006 16:03 |
The Millionaire Waltz wrote: What are you doing tomorrow, Kate? How do you feel about marriage? Just you and me? And Fred Astaire?Honestly, you always have to drag Fred Astaire in everything, don't you? lol! |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 16:44 |
I...er.. I have a thing for Fred Astaire. Yes, I know, it's sad. |
| flash! 28068 16.04.2006 16:46 |
The Millionaire Waltz wrote: I...er.. I have a thing for Fred Astaire. Yes, I know, it's sad.And i have a thing for Freddie Mercury...a huuugggeee thing for him! (actually that did sound a little wrong, sorry, not intended!!!!) So, why Fred Astaire? Dancing? Or more? |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 17:10 |
<font color=red>Flash! wrote:It's just everything about him, you know... his smile, those dreamy eyes, and most of all, his heavenly behind... seriously. I love him.The Millionaire Waltz wrote: I...er.. I have a thing for Fred Astaire. Yes, I know, it's sad.And i have a thing for Freddie Mercury...a huuugggeee thing for him! (actually that did sound a little wrong, sorry, not intended!!!!) So, why Fred Astaire? Dancing? Or more? |
| blerp 16.04.2006 17:50 |
Hey!! Go discuss your love/marriage/backstabbing crap in another thread!! Not my eggs! I stole the eggs from little kids as they were on their egg hunt. :p |
| Freya is quietly judging you. 16.04.2006 18:01 |
LadyMercury wrote: Hey!! Go discuss your love/marriage/backstabbing crap in another thread!! Not my eggs! I stole the eggs from little kids as they were on their egg hunt. :pSorry.. :D |
| Poo, again 16.04.2006 18:13 |
So, what's left to say about the Egg Story? |
| Freddie89 16.04.2006 18:14 |
omg thats funny! |
| blerp 16.04.2006 18:43 |
This chapter is quite stupid. THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 23. Freddie sat down on the couch, and stared at Brian as he walked around and sat next to him. "No, no! Sit here!" Freddie said, slapping his lap. Brian sat there, looking at Freddie as if he were very stupid. "Tisk!" Freddie pulled Brian onto his small thighs. Freddie began humming and twisting one of the many fine brown curls on Brian's head. He then opened his lap, letting Brian's bottom sit between his legs. "Oh, Brian!" cried Freddie, rubbing up against him. "Let me ravage you!" "Freddie, let me breathe a little!" Brian muttered, Freddie now laying on top of him. Freddie seemed to have taken full control of him; but it didn't seem too serious. Freddie only kept rubbing himself on him and playing with him. "Freddie, you are such a little tease!" Brian said quietly, squirming around as Freddie tried grabbing his crotch. "Don't touch me there!" "Why not?" said Freddie, laughing out loud. "I'm just messing around, my true love is Roger." He waved his hand around in the air and put on a face of grave seriousness. "Then gerroff me!" Brian growled. Freddie resisted and stayed in his place on top. Freddie put his arms around Brian's neck and held him close. Brian didn't care much, and wrapped his arms around his back. "Oooh, you're my best, best friend!" Freddie said, kissing him on the nose. "Mhmm," replied Brian. Freddie would really not let him go. They passed the next few hours without talking, then drifted into slumber. |
| blerp 16.04.2006 18:47 |
<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>onelonelypussycat wrote: Ha LadyMercury: Can you put in a chapter where its having to do with music, like rehersing or something?Yes, I will do just that soon.. |
| blerp 16.04.2006 19:37 |
Double chapter. Y'all deserve it. THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 24. Brian was having a horrible nightmare. A man dressed in black was putting a very heavy stone block on his chest. The man in black waited, then placed another one on his chest. Brian groaned. He was scared to death -- he wanted to scream, but the heavy stones kept him from doing so. He looked around, and saw Freddie standing not too far off. He was laughing, chatting with a large group of people. Brian tried calling out to him, but Freddie could not hear him. Several tears made their way out of Brian's eyes and into his hair and ears. The man in black was just about to place another stone on him when he suddenly awoke. Brian opened his eyes quickly, breathing heavily, and found that the heavy weight on him was Roger sitting on his chest. Freddie was sitting on his legs, talking to Roger. Brian was relieved that he was still in the living room. "Roger," Brian mumbled out. "Can-can you get off my chest?" "What?" Roger said. "Ergh...Get your arse out of my face!" Brian pushed him off, and sat up, rubbing his head. "Oh. Sorry!" Roger said, putting his arm around him. "Freddie told me what you two did last night!" He sang to him. "Ooooh, you two are baddddd." He laughed, hanging onto his shoulders. "But we didn't do anything," Brian said, looking at Freddie. "Psh, you're such a liar!" He laughed a little and stretched. "Well," said Freddie, now holding Roger. "What will we do today?" "I don't want to do anything today," Brian said quietly. "I just want to lie down in my bed and read a book." "I want to go for a walk!" cried Roger, bouncing in his seat. "It's nice out today!" Freddie looked out the window. "You're right. Maybe we should go for a walk." "Yes!!!" Roger ran upstairs to change. Freddie turned to Brian, still reclining with his eyes closed. "Well, I'm off to go change," Freddie said to him. "Are you sure you don't want to come along?" "Yes, I'm sure," answered Brian, not moving. "Is John still here?" "No, he left with his mates, remember? He left when we were still sleeping." "Oh...Well, you two have fun." Freddie nodded and turned to go. "Oh, and remember that there are cops in the park, so no taking off your clothes." Freddie playfully pushed Brian's head and went up. |
| All I Hear Is Radio Gaga 16.04.2006 20:58 |
I love it keep it going! Cheers |
| blerp 16.04.2006 22:06 |
All I Hear Is Radio Gaga wrote: I love it keep it going! CheersThanks! Yes, I will. :) |
| That guy who digs energy domes 16.04.2006 22:12 |
HAHA, you really need to keep this going. And you should make a blog with all of these too. |
| RETROLOVE 17.04.2006 00:50 |
Great Chap La Merc....(is it okay if I call you that? lol) LoL @ Fred offering Brian to go upstairs and 'help' him change...oh, that Freddie, always turning someone out! He's like a fat man at a Sunday buffet, he just cant enough. Hell, If I was Fred, I'd just be happy that I conquered Roger, lol... |
| The Lost Queen 17.04.2006 02:22 |
haha, it's so good. I can really see them in front of me, doing all the thing you write. You're so good at this, LadyMercury. |
| val 29467 17.04.2006 05:20 |
i wouldn't mind being freddie in the last few chapters *smiles guiltely |
| queenkateg4 17.04.2006 06:07 |
i am who i am and no to that question the millionaire waltz. |
| Poo, again 17.04.2006 06:59 |
queenkateg4 wrote: i am who i am and no to that question the millionaire waltz.Er... what? |
| queenkateg4 17.04.2006 07:09 |
hi darling u okay its me you said we could be friends |
| Sergei. 17.04.2006 07:48 |
^Hey. Go do your mud slinging in some other thread. |
| flash! 28068 17.04.2006 07:49 |
^ I agree. |
| Poo, again 17.04.2006 08:01 |
I must agree ^^ |
| queenkateg4 17.04.2006 08:07 |
sorry i got mixed up what do you think of the egg story |
| Hooligan's Holiday 17.04.2006 12:41 |
No offence, but I don't think Brian and Freddie works as well as Freddie and Roger. |
| The Lost Queen 17.04.2006 12:51 |
<B><font color=black>*39*<B> wrote: No offence, but I don't think Brian and Freddie works as well as Freddie and Roger.Of course not, but it's still hot as hell ;) |
| mayniac316 17.04.2006 13:15 |
It was still a good chapter, buy yeah, they don't have chemistry. lol. Besides, Brian is MY man!! Freddie can't have him! ;) |
| flash! 28068 17.04.2006 13:17 |
mayniac316 wrote: It was still a good chapter, buy yeah, they don't have chemistry. lol. Besides, Brian is MY man!! Freddie can't have him! ;)You're right! Freddie can have me! ;) |
| Poo, again 17.04.2006 15:20 |
Freddie can have my virginity... er, I mean, he can have my left sock. |
| skiqueen 17.04.2006 19:30 |
awesome chapters as usual |
| blerp 17.04.2006 20:05 |
AUTHOR'S WARNING: This chapter is pretty HOT. Sizzzzzzz. If you're a guy, beware. |
| blerp 17.04.2006 20:06 |
THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 25. Freddie and Roger said their good-byes to Brian and walked out of the house. The day was warm and sunny, the heat of the rays warming their backs. They walked down the sidewalk, breathing in the sweet air, waving to the neighbours and people on the street (though of course they didn't wave to the couple next door, who continued to hate them as much as they could). "Oh, it's a beautiful today!" exclaimed Freddie, spreading his arms out. "Perfect weather for making out." He let his fingers crawl up Roger's arm. "Ha ha, you're funny!" said Roger, placing his hand on the small of Freddie's back. "But that would be nice!" "It will be nice..." said Freddie. He put his face near Roger's, then picked up his pace, leaving Roger behind. "Wait!" Roger ran up to him. ------- They walked through the park gates, and down a path leading to the green. Benches lined both sides, filled with loads of people who decided to come out and enjoy they day too. Freddie brought out his sunglasses and put them on, walking along as if he were the coolest cucumber to ever live. Roger whipped his head to and fro, looking at the people smiling and talking on the benches. He saw two girls sitting a little ahead of them. "Hello, pretty ladies!" he smiled and waved to them. They giggled and waved back. "Roger, stop that, you are mine," whispered Freddie, holding two of his fingers. He smiled. "Aw man, can't I have fun?" "Oh, look, Rog, a spot!" Freddie dragged him over to a clear spot, under a large oak tree. If they really wanted, they could easily conceal themselves from the crowds of people around them. They sat down together, with their arms around each other. They watched the clouds go by, and listened to the sounds of bicycle bells ringing, children laughing, people chatting, and the fountain bubbling and splashing near them. "This is very nice," said Roger, laying his head on Freddie's shoulder. "Don't you think?" "Yes," Freddie replied, placing his hand on Roger's chest. "Very nice." He brought his hand down to Roger's stomach. Roger pressed his lips on Freddie's neck. They moved in closer; into a tighter embrace. Roger removed his head from Freddie's neck, and planted small kisses on his jawline. Freddie sighed and brought his hand down further more; this time placing it on his inner thigh, rubbing down hard, then placed his hand over Roger's groin. Roger shifted as if he were uncomfortable, but then put his hand on Freddie's waist. His breathing became deeper, and he put his face in front of Freddie's, licking his lips. They shared quite a few long kisses, not wanting to let go, but having to do so to catch their breath. Roger groaned and placed his hand over Freddie's groin as well. "Oh, Roger," whispered Freddie, breathing in and lightly biting his chin. "Let's not do this here." Roger moved his hand around, feeling Freddie's thighs. "Roger, Roger, er," Freddie tried getting up, taking hold of Roger's hand and pulling it out. "Come on...Roger, let's go." He stood up, excitement and pleasure swirling around his entire self so rapidly, so quickly, he thought he'd collapse. Roger, still breathing deeply, got up and put his hand on Freddie's bottom, making his fingers crawl around and underneath it. "Oh, Roger, you naughty boy, let's go home!" Freddie took hold of Roger's hand and they walked off, at a fast pace. |
| bohemian_queer 17.04.2006 20:13 |
Will someone please dump some cold water on me?? This story is soooo hot, that I fear I shall suffer a heat stroke! Nice LadyMercury.. :-P |
| That guy who digs energy domes 17.04.2006 20:30 |
Oh my! |
| SomebodyWhoLoves 17.04.2006 20:56 |
Why is that hot? Homosexuality is never hot unless it's two gorgeous women kissing each other. Sorry but Roger was not gay and he would never do that. He'd more likely chase after those two pretty girls. |
| Roger'sGirl72610 17.04.2006 21:33 |
Great chapter! Keep going, this is so much fun to read. |
| its_a_hard_life 26994 17.04.2006 21:35 |
SomebodyWhoLoves wrote: Sorry but Roger was not gay and he would never do that. He'd more likely chase after those two pretty girls.True, true. |
| its_a_hard_life 26994 17.04.2006 21:35 |
Roger'sGirl72610 wrote: Great chapter! Keep going, this is so much fun to read.Getting hot for ya? lol... |
| blerp 17.04.2006 23:51 |
<font color="#FF00CC">its_a_hard_life wrote:Are you being negative about this? Cos like I said it isn't really serious...It's fun. I don't know where you're coming from, but if you have nothing good to say about it, then don't peek in!Roger'sGirl72610 wrote: Great chapter! Keep going, this is so much fun to read.Getting hot for ya? lol... Hm... |
| blerp 17.04.2006 23:53 |
Same for SWL. If homosexuality is wrong, then doesn't that apply to lesbianism? Oh, that's because you're a guy, and you can think about anything you want and it'll be okay for everyone else. What a weird world! |
| bohemian_queer 18.04.2006 00:54 |
LadyMercury wrote: Same for SWL. If homosexuality is wrong, then doesn't that apply to lesbianism? Oh, that's because you're a guy, and you can think about anything you want and it'll be okay for everyone else. What a weird world!Amen. Stop w/ the negitave shit guys. Nobody likes being ragged on. |
| RETROLOVE 18.04.2006 01:39 |
Yeah...off subject, do any of you guys watch gay pornos at all...lol I've only watched straight or lesbian ones, never full blown gay ones...after reading this story...I reeeeaaally want to...lol |
| RETROLOVE 18.04.2006 01:39 |
Oh yeah, great chap la merc! |
| blerp 18.04.2006 14:50 |
Aw man, now this thread is tainted with the assholeness of those two. Will I be able to continue writing?? |
| skiqueen 18.04.2006 16:52 |
HOT HOT HOT! :) |
| Poo, again 18.04.2006 16:57 |
Please do so! I love these love stories about Freddie and Roger, though I'm pretty sure that Roger would be furious if he ever read them! ;) |
| Sergei. 18.04.2006 17:10 |
***Roger's current wife is sitting at her computer, giggling and reading something on the internet*** (Roger comes in, tenderising the nipple of a baby bottle for his most recent kid) Roger:What the bloody hell are you reading? Wife:Oh, a story...written by this girl on a website called Queenzone.**giggles and turns back to computer** Roger:Oh? What about? Wife:Nothing. **snickers** Roger:Let me see! (Pushes wife out of chair and sits down, reading as his face begins to grow red and hot) THAT IS NOT TRUE!! **Roger goes upstairs to have himself a good soak in the tub along with a martini and files a divorce report whilst at it.** Roger:Note to self. Steer clear of Queenzone.com! |
| RETROLOVE 19.04.2006 00:55 |
TheFairyFeller'sFreakyFan wrote: ***Roger's current wife is sitting at her computer, giggling and reading something on the internet*** (Roger comes in, tenderising the nipple of a baby bottle for his most recent kid) Roger:What the bloody hell are you reading? Wife:Oh, a story...written by this girl on a website called Queenzone.**giggles and turns back to computer** Roger:Oh? What about? Wife:Nothing. **snickers** Roger:Let me see! (Pushes wife out of chair and sits down, reading as his face begins to grow red and hot) THAT IS NOT TRUE!! **Roger goes upstairs to have himself a good soak in the tub along with a martini and files a divorce report whilst at it.** Roger:Note to self. Steer clear of Queenzone.com!LOL that was funny! |
| RETROLOVE 19.04.2006 00:56 |
Ooooookay, guess no one in here watches gay porn at all...oh wait, a lot of y'all are under 18, y'all better not watch any gay porn!!! |
| All I Hear Is Radio Gaga 19.04.2006 01:20 |
Great story keep it going please...and just ignore the negative comments.... Cheers |
| blerp 19.04.2006 01:23 |
Sorry to sound like a complete sourpuss, but I feel very disappointed for some reason. Probably won't continue till...Who knows. |
| blerp 19.04.2006 01:29 |
All I Hear Is Radio Gaga wrote: Great story keep it going please...and just ignore the negative comments.... CheersYou're right, whatever, back on track. Thanks for the feedback, but I want to know what you all think of my writing, not just the hot stuff, haha. |
| k.dodo 19.04.2006 12:25 |
:-) Ok, well Roger wasn't gay, but this is just a story, imagination, so it's ok. I wright stories just like you (of course just in hungarian), and I like your writings, so I think just write more, and more, carry on, and work as hard as you can if you cant to reach succes. I tried, I was looking for newspapers what expends writings of youth, and finally I found one, and I was very happy to see my novelette, in a newspaper. You're so good, don't listen pepole, who say, don't write anymore, because it's worthy! Good luck!!!!! |
| Poo, again 19.04.2006 16:51 |
<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote: Ooooookay, guess no one in here watches gay porn at all...oh wait, a lot of y'all are under 18, y'all better not watch any gay porn!!!We'd better not watch any porn at all! ;) |
| Sergei. 19.04.2006 17:14 |
You all should read Leviticus 20 in the bible...Oh, lordy lordy. People back then were having sex with animals and plants and god knows... Leviticus 20:13-"If a man should lie with a man the way one lies with a woman, then they have commited what is detestable. Both of them should be put to death, their blood placed on their head. What happens to them thereforth they have brought upon themselves." Isn't that sick minded?! My brother stood on his chair and announced, "If a man were to have sex with his foot, then they have done what is utterly detestable. The foot should be severed and fed to a rabid pit of howling rats." To which I come to my conclusion: Most of the old testament is full of B.S. |
| bohemian_queer 19.04.2006 17:44 |
TheFairyFeller'sFreakyFan wrote: You all should read Leviticus 20 in the bible...Oh, lordy lordy. People back then were having sex with animals and plants and god knows... Leviticus 20:13-"If a man should lie with a man the way one lies with a woman, then they have commited what is detestable. Both of them should be put to death, their blood placed on their head. What happens to them thereforth they have brought upon themselves." Isn't that sick minded?! My brother stood on his chair and announced, "If a man were to have sex with his foot, then they have done what is utterly detestable. The foot should be severed and fed to a rabid pit of howling rats." To which I come to my conclusion: Most of the old testament is full of B.S.hahahaha, that's funny! i kinda think that too.. hm.. :-P |
| All I Hear Is Radio Gaga 19.04.2006 18:27 |
LadyMercury wrote:I really like your style of writing...not just the "hot" stuff...but I like how you use explicit details when describing something...it's like i can invision in perfectly in my head...keep it up!All I Hear Is Radio Gaga wrote: Great story keep it going please...and just ignore the negative comments.... CheersYou're right, whatever, back on track. Thanks for the feedback, but I want to know what you all think of my writing, not just the hot stuff, haha. Cheers |
| Kensington Love 20.04.2006 00:22 |
<font color=red>Flash! wrote:And me! ;)mayniac316 wrote: It was still a good chapter, buy yeah, they don't have chemistry. lol. Besides, Brian is MY man!! Freddie can't have him! ;)You're right! Freddie can have me! ;) |
| RETROLOVE 20.04.2006 02:39 |
La-Merc, dont lose you inspiration!!!! |
| blerp 20.04.2006 02:40 |
Don't worry! I'm on chapter 26! Just having small difficulties trying to build it...Damn legos. |
| The Lost Queen 20.04.2006 03:10 |
Aaa, LadyMercury, you're so good at this!! You must have so much imagination! I reallyy like your way of writing, you pay attention to detail, your dialog is casual and funny, you could write a script for a play or a movie. I mean, you must be good, otherwise people wouldn't want to read it after 25 chapters :) |
| RETROLOVE 20.04.2006 03:15 |
LadyMercury wrote: Don't worry! I'm on chapter 26! Just having small difficulties trying to build it...Damn legos.Hey....why are you up so late missy poo!!! I have an excuse, I work third shift!!! If I were you, I'd be in bed getting my sleep on...lol |
| blerp 20.04.2006 17:02 |
THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 26. When Freddie and Roger got home, they noticed it was still early afternoon. They wondered what they could do during the rest of the day. They wandered around the house, looking for Brian, where they found him in his room. "Oh, hey, guys," said Brian, looking up from his book. "How was your walk?" "Oh, all right," said Freddie, sitting down with him. "We don't know what to do today, Brian, and we want to do something." "Hm..." hummed Brian, tapping a corner of the book against his chin. "Well, I was going to go down to the studio later, chat with the guys there and jam out." "Oh!" said Roger, folding his arms. "And you weren't going to take us?" He smiled, pretending to gang up on Brian. "Well, I thought you two would be out longer," Brian answered, closing his book and setting it on the table. "But of course you guys can come too. They've got great equipment!" "Yes!" cried Roger, punching the air. "Time for me to get my drumming on." "It sure won't be the same without John today," put in Freddie, lying on Brian's leg. "But I guess we can do without bass then." "Oh, don't worry, it'll be fine!" said Brian. "There will probably be someone there who plays it, and is nice enough to play with us. And stop sitting on my legs." He removed his leg from under Freddie. "Well, when are we going?" asked Freddie, now leaning against the wall. "Oh, well, I was going to wait a bit longer, but we can go now if you'd like." "Yes! Let's go now!" yelled Roger. He went downstairs. Brian and Freddie followed. ---------- Brian parked outside of the studio. They all got out and walked towards the entrance, when two blokes walked out. One had mousy brown hair, reaching his ears, tall and lanky; a bit like Brian. The other had dirty blond long hair, and was quite short, but still slim. The two groups slowed down a bit, then Brian walked out and said a very estactic hello to them; along with handshakes and hugs. "Roger, Freddie," called Brian, putting an arm around each guy. "These are my old mates from university, Rick and Tom. Say hello, guys!" "Hello!" said Roger and Freddie together, putting on polite smiles and waving. "Oi," said Rick, the blond one. "Are you Freddie Mercury? From Wreckage?" "Used to be," replied Freddie, smiling, and shaking his hand. "Man, you guys were great!" said Tom. "Well, now we're Queen!" said Freddie, grabbing Brian and Roger. "Well, hope this band does well too," Rick said, winking. "We've got to go now, but we'll call you Brian, all right?" "Yeah! Sure," Brian said, hugging them both again. "Chat with you later!" "Bye!" they both said. Tom turned around. "It was nice meeting you two!" he yelled, waving to Roger and Freddie. Rick nodded along. "Well!" said Freddie, looking back at them. "They were very nice!" "Yeah, they're real good mates," Brian said. "Ahem, drums!" Roger cried, spreading his arms out. He went inside. |
| blerp 20.04.2006 17:08 |
Don't ask me who Rick and Tom are. They're made up. |
| skiqueen 20.04.2006 17:34 |
i love legos! yay, a studio scene! i was waiting for one of these to come up, i was gonna mention it, but it kept slipping my mind... |
| That guy who digs energy domes 20.04.2006 21:01 |
haha! nice |
| RETROLOVE 21.04.2006 03:00 |
The Millionaire Waltz wrote:And dont watch any EVER...its as addictive as candy...I discoverd my brothers private 'library' and it was all over for me... it was PORN EVERYDAY....but I dont watch it much anymore...I'll end up doing something (or somebody) that I'm not suppose to do...lol<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote: Ooooookay, guess no one in here watches gay porn at all...oh wait, a lot of y'all are under 18, y'all better not watch any gay porn!!!We'd better not watch any porn at all! ;) |
| val 29467 21.04.2006 03:19 |
TheFairyFeller'sFreakyFan wrote: ***Roger's current wife is sitting at her computer, giggling and reading something on the internet*** (Roger comes in, tenderising the nipple of a baby bottle for his most recent kid) Roger:What the bloody hell are you reading? Wife:Oh, a story...written by this girl on a website called Queenzone.**giggles and turns back to computer** Roger:Oh? What about? Wife:Nothing. **snickers** Roger:Let me see! (Pushes wife out of chair and sits down, reading as his face begins to grow red and hot) THAT IS NOT TRUE!! **Roger goes upstairs to have himself a good soak in the tub along with a martini and files a divorce report whilst at it.** Roger:Note to self. Steer clear of Queenzone.com!making a fool out of myself once again... |
| The Lost Queen 21.04.2006 10:11 |
Ah, chapter 26 was a nice one. Good that you break away from the hot stuff for a while (I mean, the hot stuff was GREAT!!! But now, when you do this too, with the studio, it gets more realistic). Keep it up!! |
| FreMe 21.04.2006 15:01 |
Dahmn good! Why didnt i find that story before today? hurry up with the next chapter! |
| blerp 21.04.2006 16:34 |
I have officially run out of ideas. This chapter, with the studio/rehearsal bit is quite hard cos I know nothing about that stuff. Does anyone have experience or knowledge of working in studios? Help. Oh, and I'm trying to think of a song that Brian and Roger could play, and that Freddie could sing. What would they most likely play?? Thank you, readers. |
| deleted user 21.04.2006 16:46 |
yep |
| blerp 21.04.2006 17:33 |
<font color="#CC66FF">xloveofmylifex wrote: yepErr....? |
| skiqueen 21.04.2006 22:14 |
seven seas of rhye? |
| blerp 21.04.2006 23:34 |
Well, I wanted it to be something other than a Queen song. |
| That guy who digs energy domes 22.04.2006 00:25 |
do the scene where Freddie meets Queenzone's own Flashy, that could get good ;) |
| That guy who digs energy domes 22.04.2006 00:27 |
<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:(or somebody) that I'm not suppose to do...lolAny underage ones? |
| FreMe 22.04.2006 02:54 |
Watch the bonus material on greatest flix 1 disc two (if you have it). they tell a little about how they made bo´rhap... |
| PlanetMercury15 22.04.2006 14:32 |
You could possibly make another chapter about Freddie Brian and Roger on stage performing......and them being stupid while singing...... |
| flash! 28068 22.04.2006 14:34 |
Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: do the scene where Freddie meets Queenzone's own Flashy, that could get good ;)*gasps* Oh my God! YES! Please do that! That would be VERY interesting! |
| Sergei. 22.04.2006 14:36 |
PlanetMercury15 wrote: You could possibly make another chapter about Freddie Brian and Roger on stage performing......and them being stupid while singing......Oh, yes! Like when the crown falls off and John comes to the rescue by picking it up!!! :-P |
| That guy who digs energy domes 22.04.2006 15:13 |
<font color=red>Flash! wrote:We have one volunteerQueen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: do the scene where Freddie meets Queenzone's own Flashy, that could get good ;)*gasps* Oh my God! YES! Please do that! That would be VERY interesting! |
| mayniac316 22.04.2006 17:24 |
OOH!! And Brian could meet me and it would be like a "love a first sight" situation :) Then we could get married and Freddie and Roger could be bridesmaids!! xD |
| FreMe 22.04.2006 19:27 |
Hehe.. gettin maried with a queen... i actually ike the thought of Freddie with Roger better than Freddie with Mary. Mayby beacause it´s so unrealistic, and i dont have to get jaleous (wouldent be able to behave myself if i met Mary... i´d be blind with jealousy)xDxDxDXD |
| blerp 22.04.2006 19:52 |
Shucks, you guys aren't helping. Well, I'm going to go think. |
| That guy who digs energy domes 22.04.2006 19:57 |
LadyMercury wrote: Shucks, you guys aren't helping. Well, I'm going to go think.Do the one with Freddie and Flashy! |
| blerp 22.04.2006 20:37 |
No! It goes way off the the story! Besides, I don't even know what she looks like! I'm still working on the studio one! Sheesh. :( |
| blerp 22.04.2006 20:39 |
It wouldn't be the Egg Story anymore, it'd be the Freddie and Flashy show, airing on ABC Family next week. |
| blerp 23.04.2006 00:39 |
THE EGG STORY - CHAPTER 27. They walked down the hall and into the recording room. Roger spotted his holy drumset and went over to sit down. He spotted a pair of drumsticks lying on the toms and picked them up. He stilled himself, then began playing at full force. Brian and Freddie watched, slight smiles growing on their faces. Then Brian went back out and brought in his Red Special, setting up his amp boxes and plugging everything in. He plugged in his guitar, and smiled again as it roared to life. He played along with Roger's drumming. Freddie turned around, and looked at the people in the other room who were watching. He waved to them; they waved back. "Hey," yelled Roger, stopping. "What should we play?" "I know!" said Freddie loudly, hopping up to Brian and Roger. He was trying to show off to the others in the room. Freddie grabbed the microphone, and immediately began singing "Tell Me Why." They shrugged and played along. Freddie sang energetically and strutted all over the room, like a mad hatter. He hopped up to Roger and shook his shoulders, going into some sort of deranged shimmy. They finished, Freddie plopping down on an unused amp box. The people whooped and clapped; they clearly loved their little performance. Brian went to tuning his guitar again, as Roger sat there, blank-faced. "Do you want an encore?" yelled Freddie, pointing to the group. They laughed and yelled back, "Yes! Please, more!" "Roger," quipped Freddie. "Go wild!" Roger went into a long, estastic drum solo. He whipped his head around, teeth gritted, hair in his face, and smiled wide; it was fun to occasionally let out on a very energetic instrument. He finally finished, standing up to hit all his cymbals, the small crowd were still laughing and cheering. "Yeah!!!" screamed Roger, arms shooting into the air. "Good night, Cleveland!!!" He chucked his drumsticks out, one of them whacking Freddie on the arm. "Ow!" cried Freddie, but brushed it off. "I mean, erm, ow!!! Go Roger!!!" The other people came in to talk to Freddie, Brian, and Roger. They small group was mostly men, a spot or two were girls. They chatted for a bit, praising the boys' small performance, then went onto the discussion of going out for drinks. "Lovely! Drinks for everyone!" said Freddie, delighting in this cool crowd. Brian and Roger happily gabbered away as well. --------- When they all finally got out of the building to their cars, they all decided to meet up again at a bar a few blocks away. Most of the cars left, and Freddie, Brian and Roger were left alone again. "Come on, let's get going," said Brian, getting in the car. "Don't want to miss out, do you?" "No, certainly not," said Freddie, opening his door. Roger opened his door going into the back, but looked up at Freddie before going in. "Yes, Roger?" said Freddie. "Erm, Freddie, where's Cleveland?" "I honestly don't know." They got in, and drove off to join the others. |
| skiqueen 23.04.2006 01:02 |
ha ha, last bit was funny! i love ur description in the beginning with the instruments, i saw the whole jam in my head........excellent job, L.M. |
| All I Hear Is Radio Gaga 23.04.2006 01:31 |
I agree, I really love the humor...keep it up! cheers |
| The Lost Queen 23.04.2006 09:29 |
Hahahaha, it's great!! |
| queenkateg4 23.04.2006 10:59 |
do you like the egg story |
| skiqueen 23.04.2006 11:47 |
queenkateg4 wrote: do you like the egg storyum....yes....? its quite entertaining |
| FreMe 23.04.2006 12:27 |
Yeah.. it was a good chapter... i missed some flirting though... but there is good chances for that in the bar. It could be funny, if someone got cheated on, or raped (not so funny that one)... |
| queenkateg4 23.04.2006 13:24 |
i like that aswell |
| Poo, again 23.04.2006 13:30 |
Doesn't Lady Mercury fear that someone really evil with no respect at all would steal her story and her ideas? |
| queenkateg4 23.04.2006 13:36 |
what? |
| skiqueen 23.04.2006 14:31 |
The Millionaire Waltz wrote: Doesn't Lady Mercury fear that someone really evil with no respect at all would steal her story and her ideas?thats would be really selfish....y? u planning to steal her story? :) |
| Poo, again 23.04.2006 14:55 |
skiqueen wrote:Yes. I've been dying to do so ever since I read it.The Millionaire Waltz wrote: Doesn't Lady Mercury fear that someone really evil with no respect at all would steal her story and her ideas?thats would be really selfish....y? u planning to steal her story? :) |
| queenkateg4 23.04.2006 15:00 |
i gotta get of this or my head will explode |
| skiqueen 23.04.2006 16:13 |
The Millionaire Waltz wrote:ohhhh ur bad, wait till l.m reads this. ur in trouble! :)skiqueen wrote:Yes. I've been dying to do so ever since I read it.The Millionaire Waltz wrote: Doesn't Lady Mercury fear that someone really evil with no respect at all would steal her story and her ideas?thats would be really selfish....y? u planning to steal her story? :) |
| blerp 23.04.2006 17:18 |
Don't steal it! :P Maybe I should edit each chapter and put a copyright symbol with the initials, R.P. (my real initials) and L.M. |
| blerp 23.04.2006 17:21 |
The Millionaire Waltz wrote:Gasp, you poohead.skiqueen wrote:Yes. I've been dying to do so ever since I read it.The Millionaire Waltz wrote: Doesn't Lady Mercury fear that someone really evil with no respect at all would steal her story and her ideas?thats would be really selfish....y? u planning to steal her story? :) |
| skiqueen 23.04.2006 18:11 |
LadyMercury wrote:dont worry l.m, uv got faithful witnesses :)The Millionaire Waltz wrote:Gasp, you poohead.skiqueen wrote:Yes. I've been dying to do so ever since I read it.The Millionaire Waltz wrote: Doesn't Lady Mercury fear that someone really evil with no respect at all would steal her story and her ideas?thats would be really selfish....y? u planning to steal her story? :) |
| blerp 23.04.2006 19:53 |
SHEESH! I get no respect! People want to illustrate my Egg Story! And they didn't even ask me! Well, it's actually just one person but... NEW NOTE: If you want to put the Egg Story in any other form, film (haha), illustration, etc, ASK ME FIRST! I'M THE AUTHOR! You all act like I just wrote it to do it and don't give a shit at what happens to it! I do give a shit! I was going to illustrate it myself, but my drawing skills are on hiatus, I was going to start another time. |
| Sergei. 23.04.2006 19:56 |
LadyMercury wrote: SHEESH! I get no respect! People want to illustrate my Egg Story! And they didn't even ask me! Well, it's actually just one person but... NEW NOTE: If you want to put the Egg Story in any other form, film (haha), illustration, etc, ASK ME FIRST! I'M THE AUTHOR! You all act like I just wrote it to do it and don't give a shit at what happens to it! I do give a shit! I was going to illustrate it myself, but my drawing skills are on hiatus, I was going to start another time.Preach it, sister! Preach it! I shared my Queen 2 novel with my friend (who is a boy) and he comes back with a picture of the Fairy Feller (who had like, a 15 inch dinger) screwing the Black Queen (who had humongo juggernuts)!!!! I wasn't at school so I kicked him so hard and tore that wretched thing up!! |
| blerp 23.04.2006 20:02 |
<font color=green>Fairy<b>Feller! wrote:Oh my! Well, serves him right.LadyMercury wrote: SHEESH! I get no respect! People want to illustrate my Egg Story! And they didn't even ask me! Well, it's actually just one person but... NEW NOTE: If you want to put the Egg Story in any other form, film (haha), illustration, etc, ASK ME FIRST! I'M THE AUTHOR! You all act like I just wrote it to do it and don't give a shit at what happens to it! I do give a shit! I was going to illustrate it myself, but my drawing skills are on hiatus, I was going to start another time.Preach it, sister! Preach it! I shared my Queen 2 novel with my friend (who is a boy) and he comes back with a picture of the Fairy Feller (who had like, a 15 inch dinger) screwing the Black Queen (who had humongo juggernuts)!!!! I wasn't at school so I kicked him so hard and tore that wretched thing up!! |
| That guy who digs energy domes 23.04.2006 22:43 |
Lady Mercury, Im going to request you do this for practicality and convienence. You should really start a blog and put each chapter in as a entry. That would make it easier to read the story without having to read the comments. You should still post it here but that would be really nice of you to do. |
| RETROLOVE 24.04.2006 02:15 |
Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Lady Mercury, Im going to request you do this for practicality and convienence. You should really start a blog and put each chapter in as a entry. That would make it easier to read the story without having to read the comments. You should still post it here but that would be really nice of you to do.Ah...QQW...thats what she should do!!! |
| RETROLOVE 24.04.2006 02:16 |
COPYRIGHT IT LADYMERCURY!!! COPYRIGHT IT LADYMERCURY!!! |
| blerp 24.04.2006 14:36 |
<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:I've been trying to do that though, I'm lazy, and by the time I had gotten the first chapter in, I was already tired.Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Lady Mercury, Im going to request you do this for practicality and convienence. You should really start a blog and put each chapter in as a entry. That would make it easier to read the story without having to read the comments. You should still post it here but that would be really nice of you to do.Ah...QQW...thats what she should do!!! So it might take a while. |
| skiqueen 24.04.2006 16:53 |
WOW! what a fuss |
| Sergei. 24.04.2006 18:13 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:I've been trying to do that though, I'm lazy, and by the time I had gotten the first chapter in, I was already tired. So it might take a while.Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Lady Mercury, Im going to request you do this for practicality and convienence. You should really start a blog and put each chapter in as a entry. That would make it easier to read the story without having to read the comments. You should still post it here but that would be really nice of you to do.Copy and paste it! Ah...QQW...thats what she should do!!! |
| Sergei. 24.04.2006 18:14 |
I'm sorry...ignore that. |
| That guy who digs energy domes 24.04.2006 20:37 |
well then, keep it up Fight the apathy! |
| skiqueen 25.04.2006 17:04 |
so.........................hows life? |
| blerp 25.04.2006 20:51 |
Oh, I'm fine! Anyway, new chapter...Coming soon. |
| That guy who digs energy domes 25.04.2006 21:14 |
Anyone want to explain what happened to my Devo Energy Dome? |
| skiqueen 25.04.2006 22:39 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: Oh, I'm fine! Anyway, new chapter...Coming soon.they're always... they're always... they're always... COMING SOON!! |
| Queen_Rox 26.04.2006 00:05 |
**singing** Coming soon on the outside...of the tracks! |
| bohemian_queer 26.04.2006 00:29 |
..joins in on the singing- quite loudly might I add! ;) ..I get some headaches when I hit the heights, like in the morning after crazy nights.. |
| RETROLOVE 26.04.2006 00:48 |
Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Anyone want to explain what happened to my Devo Energy Dome?Huh??? Man, you sure love Devo.... |
| Queen_Rox 26.04.2006 00:52 |
freddieistheloveofmylife_89 wrote: ..joins in on the singing- quite loudly might I add! ;) ..I get some headaches when I hit the heights, like in the morning after crazy nights..**finishes singing the next line for freddieistheloveofmylife_89**...like some mother in law in her nylon tights, yeah...they're always, they're always, they're always, they're always...coming soon...coming soon, on the outside...of the tracks. |
| beautifulsoup 26.04.2006 01:33 |
Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Lady Mercury, Im going to request you do this for practicality and convienence. You should really start a blog and put each chapter in as a entry. That would make it easier to read the story without having to read the comments. You should still post it here but that would be really nice of you to do.I agree. And so shoot me, but I think it's weird to have random fanfic story threads in a General Forum of a Queen message board. JMO. There are actually Queen fan fiction websites around - if you go looking on Google, you may find some. Also - a disclaimer would be nice - to cover your butt while writing about real people. Something like "This is a work of fiction, and totally conjured in my mind. I do not know (nor did I ever know) Freddie Mercury, Roger Taylor, Brian May, or John Deacon, nor do I have any knowledge of their personal or sexual interests." Hey, I dunno. Something like that. |
| skiqueen 26.04.2006 13:32 |
Queen_Rox wrote:wonderful, people! come on, u can join the band (F.M)freddieistheloveofmylife_89 wrote: ..joins in on the singing- quite loudly might I add! ;) ..I get some headaches when I hit the heights, like in the morning after crazy nights..**finishes singing the next line for freddieistheloveofmylife_89**...like some mother in law in her nylon tights, yeah...they're always, they're always, they're always, they're always...coming soon...coming soon, on the outside...of the tracks. ladymercury, i have a question......i am interested about the process in which u undergo in the making of each chapter...i am quite curious....and i know i am talking like an idiot... |
| That guy who digs energy domes 26.04.2006 21:09 |
<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:God made manQueen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Anyone want to explain what happened to my Devo Energy Dome?Huh??? Man, you sure love Devo.... but he used the monkey to do it Apes were the plan but they werent improven I can walk like an ape talk like an ape I can do what monkeys do God made man but the monkeys supplied the glue |
| blerp 26.04.2006 21:29 |
skiqueen wrote:Process? I don't go through any process. I just think of where I left off and let my brain (mister brain is his name) form what shall happen next. So it's all the imagination. I don't pre-write anything, like rough draft, I just go at it.Queen_Rox wrote:wonderful, people! come on, u can join the band (F.M) ladymercury, i have a question......i am interested about the process in which u undergo in the making of each chapter...i am quite curious....and i know i am talking like an idiot...freddieistheloveofmylife_89 wrote: ..joins in on the singing- quite loudly might I add! ;) ..I get some headaches when I hit the heights, like in the morning after crazy nights..**finishes singing the next line for freddieistheloveofmylife_89**...like some mother in law in her nylon tights, yeah...they're always, they're always, they're always, they're always...coming soon...coming soon, on the outside...of the tracks. Don't worry, I've got up to chapter 5 putting these in blogs...I'll try to quicken the pace. I think I'll start putting the new chapters in the blogs, fuck the order. So you will have to check out my blog now. |
| That guy who digs energy domes 26.04.2006 22:00 |
Well Lady Mercury, I'd give you a hug and the pulitzer prize if I could |
| its_a_hard_life 26994 26.04.2006 23:15 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:What you could do is COPY and PASTE all the work you have done on this thread on to your blog....?<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:I've been trying to do that though, I'm lazy, and by the time I had gotten the first chapter in, I was already tired. So it might take a while.Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Lady Mercury, Im going to request you do this for practicality and convienence. You should really start a blog and put each chapter in as a entry. That would make it easier to read the story without having to read the comments. You should still post it here but that would be really nice of you to do.Ah...QQW...thats what she should do!!! Does that help? |
| RETROLOVE 27.04.2006 00:16 |
Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:HUH? lol<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:God made man but he used the monkey to do it Apes were the plan but they werent improven I can walk like an ape talk like an ape I can do what monkeys do God made man but the monkeys supplied the glueQueen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Anyone want to explain what happened to my Devo Energy Dome?Huh??? Man, you sure love Devo.... Wow...so monkeys made man....mmmmmm lol |
| blerp 27.04.2006 00:42 |
<font color="#FF00CC">its_a_hard_life wrote:Yes, I did that, and without your help. I told you not to peek in if you weren't interested!<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:What you could do is COPY and PASTE all the work you have done on this thread on to your blog....? Does that help?<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:I've been trying to do that though, I'm lazy, and by the time I had gotten the first chapter in, I was already tired. So it might take a while.Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Lady Mercury, Im going to request you do this for practicality and convienence. You should really start a blog and put each chapter in as a entry. That would make it easier to read the story without having to read the comments. You should still post it here but that would be really nice of you to do.Ah...QQW...thats what she should do!!! I thought you were always a nice person, but you seem to be acting very...Curt. |
| blerp 27.04.2006 00:44 |
Oh, and please don't try to make me feel unintelligent. I know what the words COPY and PASTE are. You trying to belittle me is proving as feckless. |
| blerp 27.04.2006 00:48 |
Oh yes, and I finished putting everything in the blog, so you all should check that out from now on. Leave this thread alone. :] |
| May-niac On the Loose 27.04.2006 11:36 |
There's a Queen fiction site on Yahoo. My sister found it. It's realy good, it has a story like Big Brother (it's called Big Bugger!) with Queen members in! sooo funny! I love your stuff Lady Mercury! |
| May-niac On the Loose 27.04.2006 11:46 |
Where is the blog? |
| skiqueen 27.04.2006 12:38 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: Oh yes, and I finished putting everything in the blog, so you all should check that out from now on. Leave this thread alone. :]but that means we cant leave u wonderful feedback!!!!! |
| That guy who digs energy domes 27.04.2006 13:05 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:She's just so excited<font color="#FF00CC">its_a_hard_life wrote:Yes, I did that, and without your help. I told you not to peek in if you weren't interested! I thought you were always a nice person, but you seem to be acting very...Curt.<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:What you could do is COPY and PASTE all the work you have done on this thread on to your blog....? Does that help?<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:I've been trying to do that though, I'm lazy, and by the time I had gotten the first chapter in, I was already tired. So it might take a while.Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Lady Mercury, Im going to request you do this for practicality and convienence. You should really start a blog and put each chapter in as a entry. That would make it easier to read the story without having to read the comments. You should still post it here but that would be really nice of you to do.Ah...QQW...thats what she should do!!! |
| beautifulsoup 27.04.2006 13:39 |
skiqueen wrote:Her e-mail addresss is available.<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: Oh yes, and I finished putting everything in the blog, so you all should check that out from now on. Leave this thread alone. :]but that means we cant leave u wonderful feedback!!!!! |
| its_a_hard_life 26994 27.04.2006 16:30 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:What the hell.... I just thought I was helping!<font color="#FF00CC">its_a_hard_life wrote:Yes, I did that, and without your help. I told you not to peek in if you weren't interested! I thought you were always a nice person, but you seem to be acting very...Curt.<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:What you could do is COPY and PASTE all the work you have done on this thread on to your blog....? Does that help?<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:I've been trying to do that though, I'm lazy, and by the time I had gotten the first chapter in, I was already tired. So it might take a while.Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Lady Mercury, Im going to request you do this for practicality and convienence. You should really start a blog and put each chapter in as a entry. That would make it easier to read the story without having to read the comments. You should still post it here but that would be really nice of you to do.Ah...QQW...thats what she should do!!! I didn't mean anything to sound like the way you put it. Oh well. |
| its_a_hard_life 26994 27.04.2006 16:36 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: Oh, and please don't try to make me feel unintelligent. I know what the words COPY and PASTE are. You trying to belittle me is proving as feckless.Again I didn't mean it to sound that way. I was just helping and I hadn't checked your blog so how was I suppose to know you had done it? You never mentioned till after. I haven't done nothing to you so please don't act all harsh on me for just trying to help..... |
| That guy who digs energy domes 27.04.2006 20:09 |
<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:Devo's message (at least one) was that we've evolved to the point where we are dangerous to ourselves. They spoke of a world of talking spuds bouncing around. And, yes, they're my 2nd favorite bandQueen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:HUH? lol Wow...so monkeys made man....mmmmmm lol<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:God made man but he used the monkey to do it Apes were the plan but they werent improven I can walk like an ape talk like an ape I can do what monkeys do God made man but the monkeys supplied the glueQueen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: Anyone want to explain what happened to my Devo Energy Dome?Huh??? Man, you sure love Devo.... |
| blerp 27.04.2006 20:27 |
<font color="#FF00CC">its_a_hard_life wrote:Okay, so maybe you weren't acting the way I thought you were. It's just the way you say it that makes it sound so rude. Maybe if you wouldn't put those simple words like copy and paste in huge caps, maybe it wouldn't offend me. If I think something is attacking my self and intelligence, I will take offence. My mind works differently, as does yours, so I might interpret your words as something else. Anyway, since you've sort of explained it all, I can let it go. (shakes hand)<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: Oh, and please don't try to make me feel unintelligent. I know what the words COPY and PASTE are. You trying to belittle me is proving as feckless.Again I didn't mean it to sound that way. I was just helping and I hadn't checked your blog so how was I suppose to know you had done it? You never mentioned till after. I haven't done nothing to you so please don't act all harsh on me for just trying to help..... |
| blerp 27.04.2006 20:28 |
beautifulsoup wrote:Yes, that, and you can leave comments on the blogs too.skiqueen wrote:Her e-mail addresss is available.<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: Oh yes, and I finished putting everything in the blog, so you all should check that out from now on. Leave this thread alone. :]but that means we cant leave u wonderful feedback!!!!! |
| blerp 27.04.2006 20:29 |
May-niac On the Loose wrote: There's a Queen fiction site on Yahoo. My sister found it. It's realy good, it has a story like Big Brother (it's called Big Bugger!) with Queen members in! sooo funny! I love your stuff Lady Mercury!Big Bugger! HAHA! |
| That guy who digs energy domes 27.04.2006 20:37 |
God I need food |
| RETROLOVE 27.04.2006 22:55 |
Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: God I need foodTaco Bell? |
| its_a_hard_life 26994 28.04.2006 12:40 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:*Shakes hands*<font color="#FF00CC">its_a_hard_life wrote:Okay, so maybe you weren't acting the way I thought you were. It's just the way you say it that makes it sound so rude. Maybe if you wouldn't put those simple words like copy and paste in huge caps, maybe it wouldn't offend me. If I think something is attacking my self and intelligence, I will take offence. My mind works differently, as does yours, so I might interpret your words as something else. Anyway, since you've sort of explained it all, I can let it go. (shakes hand)<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: Oh, and please don't try to make me feel unintelligent. I know what the words COPY and PASTE are. You trying to belittle me is proving as feckless.Again I didn't mean it to sound that way. I was just helping and I hadn't checked your blog so how was I suppose to know you had done it? You never mentioned till after. I haven't done nothing to you so please don't act all harsh on me for just trying to help..... *Giggles* Your storys are cool by the way. :) |
| That guy who digs energy domes 28.04.2006 13:05 |
<B>Jellybean Queen <h6>sweet body kisses wrote:Yep, Jake and Megan dropped off some Taco BellQueen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: God I need foodTaco Bell? |
| Sergei. 28.04.2006 15:14 |
May-niac On the Loose wrote: There's a Queen fiction site on Yahoo. My sister found it. It's realy good, it has a story like Big Brother (it's called Big Bugger!) with Queen members in! sooo funny! I love your stuff Lady Mercury!Where is this site?! Oh and you all should visit link it's funny and I found it on a google search one time for Queen fanfictions. |
| skiqueen 28.04.2006 22:49 |
<font color=&#FF0063>Fairy<b>Feller! wrote:what a weird site!May-niac On the Loose wrote: There's a Queen fiction site on Yahoo. My sister found it. It's realy good, it has a story like Big Brother (it's called Big Bugger!) with Queen members in! sooo funny! I love your stuff Lady Mercury!Where is this site?! Oh and you all should visit link it's funny and I found it on a google search one time for Queen fanfictions. |
| blerp 28.04.2006 22:56 |
skiqueen wrote:<font color=&#FF0063>Fairy<b>Feller! wrote:That site IS weird, haha. what a weird site!May-niac On the Loose wrote: There's a Queen fiction site on Yahoo. My sister found it. It's realy good, it has a story like Big Brother (it's called Big Bugger!) with Queen members in! sooo funny! I love your stuff Lady Mercury!Where is this site?! Oh and you all should visit link it's funny and I found it on a google search one time for Queen fanfictions. |
| mayniac316 28.04.2006 23:12 |
<font color=&#FF0063>Fairy<b>Feller! wrote:Ha Ha!! I read the "Commander Brian" thing. LMAO. He'd make such a sexy pirate ;)May-niac On the Loose wrote: There's a Queen fiction site on Yahoo. My sister found it. It's realy good, it has a story like Big Brother (it's called Big Bugger!) with Queen members in! sooo funny! I love your stuff Lady Mercury!Where is this site?! Oh and you all should visit link it's funny and I found it on a google search one time for Queen fanfictions. |
| beautifulsoup 29.04.2006 10:12 |
One of the Yahoo sites is for age 17 and older. |
| Sergei. 29.04.2006 20:30 |
beautifulsoup wrote: One of the Yahoo sites is for age 17 and older.LINK PLEASE TO THESE FANFICTION SITES! :-P |
| That guy who digs energy domes 29.04.2006 21:28 |
When does Freddie jump out of the plane? |
| beautifulsoup 30.04.2006 01:40 |
<font color=&#FF0063>Fairy<b>Feller! wrote:Just Google.beautifulsoup wrote: One of the Yahoo sites is for age 17 and older.LINK PLEASE TO THESE FANFICTION SITES! :-P |
| Kensington Love 30.04.2006 01:53 |
Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: do the scene where Freddie meets Queenzone's own Flashy, that could get good ;)Aw,yes! And add me in,too!;) |
| blerp 30.04.2006 02:14 |
Didn't I say to leave this thread ay-lone? And I ain't incorporating no Queenzoners into this story, harhar. Actually, I haven't even been writing. |
| That guy who digs energy domes 01.05.2006 21:48 |
KensingtonLove(Dharankanawala) wrote:IT would be the best!Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: do the scene where Freddie meets Queenzone's own Flashy, that could get good ;)Aw,yes! And add me in,too!;) |
| blerp 01.05.2006 23:18 |
Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:Haha. I think maybe I should do a story with Freddie and Flash, now that I know Flash is a man and all.KensingtonLove(Dharankanawala) wrote:IT would be the best!Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: do the scene where Freddie meets Queenzone's own Flashy, that could get good ;)Aw,yes! And add me in,too!;) Now, leave this thread alone. |
| bas asselbergs 02.05.2006 05:17 |
what happened to the egg...? one was spoiled, a new one thrown in that burst open too, then Brian boiled one properly and ate it, but the first egg.....where did that go.....i lost track of it 'cause all this gay-erotic stuff istroubling my focus on the egg.....i mean...it was an egg-story? All i read as about the other "eggs" getting more and more attention? haha brilliant ! It's the very first time in all these years i have really read ALL the pages of a thread here in the zone....you should bring printed versions for sale with illustrations to the cum-vention i think....i would want a copy, that's for sure !!! keep writing....and....what about John's sex-activities? Haven't found him wankin'on a loo listening to the noises the others seem to produce all the time...? see y'all in Prestatyn then? |
| That guy who digs energy domes 02.05.2006 20:38 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:Come on, do it!Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:Haha. I think maybe I should do a story with Freddie and Flash, now that I know Flash is a man and all. Now, leave this thread alone.KensingtonLove(Dharankanawala) wrote:IT would be the best!Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: do the scene where Freddie meets Queenzone's own Flashy, that could get good ;)Aw,yes! And add me in,too!;) |
| blerp 02.05.2006 21:10 |
Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:Only if you leave this thread alone. :)<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:Come on, do it!Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:Haha. I think maybe I should do a story with Freddie and Flash, now that I know Flash is a man and all. Now, leave this thread alone.KensingtonLove(Dharankanawala) wrote:IT would be the best!Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: do the scene where Freddie meets Queenzone's own Flashy, that could get good ;)Aw,yes! And add me in,too!;) |
| That guy who digs energy domes 02.05.2006 21:11 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:but I like this threadQueen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:Only if you leave this thread alone. :)<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:Come on, do it!Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:Haha. I think maybe I should do a story with Freddie and Flash, now that I know Flash is a man and all. Now, leave this thread alone.KensingtonLove(Dharankanawala) wrote:IT would be the best!Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: do the scene where Freddie meets Queenzone's own Flashy, that could get good ;)Aw,yes! And add me in,too!;) |
| blerp 02.05.2006 22:17 |
Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:*grabs QOW's shoulders and shakes lightly*<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:but I like this threadQueen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:Only if you leave this thread alone. :)<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:Come on, do it!Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote:Haha. I think maybe I should do a story with Freddie and Flash, now that I know Flash is a man and all. Now, leave this thread alone.KensingtonLove(Dharankanawala) wrote:IT would be the best!Queen Of Wrestling<h6>Jamie's Louvre wrote: do the scene where Freddie meets Queenzone's own Flashy, that could get good ;)Aw,yes! And add me in,too!;) |
| blerp 02.05.2006 22:33 |
Flash, what do you look like? Does anyone know? |
| blerp 02.05.2006 22:33 |
I can't write a story without detail. And is Flash okay with me writing all this lusty stuff about him? |
| That guy who digs energy domes 03.05.2006 13:00 |
<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: I can't write a story without detail. And is Flash okay with me writing all this lusty stuff about him?He'd love it |
| ScaramoucheFandango 11.03.2007 21:19 |
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