Well, we all (I hope) know that demo version of TIM contains additional lyrics' lines which are absent from album's version and on other hand we all know how terrible is my English, so I'd be very thankful if someone would help me to understand (not a good word, but I can't find better one) what are these additional lines are. For me it sounds like:
"..... be lonely just like you.
No one noticed I was there,
When I walked into the room."
It's not complete and I'm not sure if it's correct.
Thanks in advance!
(Actually I need help for more lyrics of different demo versions - some of them are on Ron's QueenPictureHall, but some ain't)
Thank you so much!
About others - a lot of them, really - all those alternate Hot Space demos' lyrics, some of The Miracle ones (like A New Life Is Born - all these 'rain', 'sea', some are just add-libs, of course)... I just don't remember right now what exact words and lines I can't understand there. I'd write down what is clear for me and then I hope someone would help me to complete it (and maybe I'd put it on my site as a help for other guys with terrible English).
Thanks again! :)
Well, and here it is - one of examples. Lyrics of demo version of Action This Day. Not a hard work actually, they're pretty similar to album's version, but I'm sure I've made some mistakes anyway :)
Hey
This street honey is a mean street
Living in this street honey needs a mean streak
We've got criminals living in this street
But there's a heart beat pulse
That keeps on pumping
Like a juke box playing the same dead record
Or a radio in the corner keeps blaring
I got a feeling this world is using me
This town honey is a dead town
Living in this town honey is a let down
Coming to this town honey is a show down
But there's a heart beat pulse
That keeps on pumping some sunshine ray
Through a crack in the shutter
Or a sight of a light at the end of a tunnel
Still there's a feeling this world is using me
Huh
Action this day action this night
We've gotta learn to love to live
You can't say it ain't right
Action this day action this night
You've got the power you've got the power
You've got the power to learn to love to live to learn
You can't say it ain't right
Your mind honey is a bleak place
Living in your minds living in a blank space huh
Your mind is coming from a rat race
But there's a heart beat pulse
That keeps on pumping
Like a juke box playing the same dead record
Or a radio in the corner keeps blaring
I got a feeling that just won't quit
This world is using me
Action this day action this night
Oh we've gotta learn to love to live
We can't say it ain't right
Action this day oh action this night
Oh you've got the power you've got the power
You've got the power to learn to love to live to learn
You can't say it ain't right
Hey
Alright
Hey
Action this day
Action this day
Give me
A a ac
Action this day
Living in this street honey
Living in this street honey
It's a mean street
It's a mean street
Yeah baby
Action this day
Action this day
Action this day
Action this day...
And this is where I need help again. My Baby Loves Me (My Baby Does Me demo):
Hmmm
My baby
My Baby loves
My baby loves me good
My baby loves
My baby loves
My baby loves me good
My Baby loves me
My Baby loves me
My Baby loves me
My baby tells me that she cares
My baby tells me she really loves me
She really loves me
My lady
Understands
She understands me right
She understands
She understands
She understands me right
Yeah yeah
My baby cares
She really cares so good
She really knows what's good
..........
She understands what's right
She knows what I'm doing at day and night yeah
...........
Take it
Oooh
Aaah
My Baby loves me
My Baby loves me
My Baby loves me
My baby tells me that she cares
My baby tells me she really loves me
She really loves me
Alright!
What Fred sings instead of these mine '...........'?