Please tell your all's thoughts on this, I know it's short but please? *pouts lip* :P hehe
I want to go back to my dreams because when I’m there, I feel more at ease. It’s in these dreams, that I usually find more happiness, peace, and love. It’s here that I want to stay for a bit longer than I have been lately. One glance either from or at you is enough to make my legs too weak for me to stand on. I yearn to be held in your strong embrace. I can achieve this by shutting my eyes and letting myself ingress into the dreamland that I covet.
While in this marvelous environment, you welcome me and clasp me in your arms. My lips graze yours in a sudden, unplanned occurrence; however you welcome me, and return the graze. As our kiss deepens, four hands begin to roam. Mine comb through your hair that’s a wonderful mixture of sandy blonde and a light tan as your hands travel along my back. Softly massaging it, you inch closer to my hair. You brush it slightly and although no one can see them, thoughts of jubilation fill our minds and hearts. Soon, we pull away and look into each other’s eyes with adoration.
“Te amo,” you tell me.
I smile and reply, “Te amo.”
We then walk to a couch to talk, connecting on various levels, laughing about jokes that only we understand. This is how it should be, perfect contentment. This is the place I want to stay; I want to stay in my dreams, because in my dreams we are together.
very sweet, sheer poetry
please don't hate me Catgurl!--> if you mean to say "I love you" in italian the correct form is "Ti Amo"....was this your intention?
i hope my note wasn't felt like an unpleasant criticism!
i would never write such a good texte with my poor english... :)
Thank you all for what you have said. :)
And okay, the "te amo" part is indeed Spanish, but the guy that is in the writing isn't Spanish, Italian or whatever, he's a guy at my school who probably has mainly European relatives, it's just we both have had Spanish classes at school and he is very smart and in that 'dream world' he says I Love You in a way that's special only for us.
There that's cleared up, continue the rave reviews! ;) lol jk I'm not that vain.