Good effort, but I probably would have enjoyed it more if not for the fact that the original music video is basically the same thing. You even used some of the same clips at the same times (ex., the bit from I Want to Break Free with Freddie sitting on a pile of women is shown as Freddie sings the first line of the song in both your video and the official video).
I prefer the Was it All Worth it video that was posted earlier for being a bit more original, but this was still nice.