QueenZone discussion #1039687

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: See what you guys think of our new song Lost bond.

Zebonka12 wrote:

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: See what you guys think of our new song Lost bond.

I think it can stay lost.

Adam Baboolal wrote: Yes, this belongs in the Personal section. NOT the "Queen - General Discussion" forum. What it says on the tin... Now, there's some good stuff in there, but there's also a fair amount of bad. The singer mostly. But overall, it sounds like a cheap demo. Needs help. I'd totally change the piano/string patch to separate pieces. Build a proper strings part on its own. I'd also change the key or at least have your singer move higher up at certain points in the song. It needs that variation to make it better. I might also change some of the guitar arrangements. But hey, it just needs more work. Believe it or not, I think it could be a great tune. Dum dum DUMMM! Adam.

<b><font color = "crimson"> ThomasQuinn wrote:

Adam Baboolal wrote: Yes, this belongs in the Personal section. NOT the "Queen - General Discussion" forum. What it says on the tin... Now, there's some good stuff in there, but there's also a fair amount of bad. The singer mostly. But overall, it sounds like a cheap demo. Needs help. I'd totally change the piano/string patch to separate pieces. Build a proper strings part on its own. I'd also change the key or at least have your singer move higher up at certain points in the song. It needs that variation to make it better. I might also change some of the guitar arrangements. But hey, it just needs more work. Believe it or not, I think it could be a great tune. Dum dum DUMMM! Adam.

So basically, what you're saying is: "Keep the chord progression, and some of the intervals of the melody", but change key, arrangements, singer, instrumentation... How can you say that AND state you think it could be a great tune? That's like saying minutes of triplets going "C-D-Eb Eb-D-C" resemble "Oh When The Saints" (note that the latter uses a MAJOR third and not a minor on the opening section).

pittrek wrote: Why do you change your nick more often than some people change their underware ?

Micrówave wrote: He means take some lessons and find yourselves a songwriter.

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: See what you guys think of our new song Lost bond. link

<font color=green>Bren<font color=orange>ski wrote:

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: See what you guys think of our new song Lost bond. link

be better if it was Lost Band - and STAY permanently lost

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: its sounds kinda of bad. That goes for all of our songs ,

JoxertheOrlandoBloompirate wrote:

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: its sounds kinda of bad. That goes for all of our songs ,

couldnt have put it better myself..

Adam Baboolal wrote: Listen, if the song in this demo is otherwise complete, recording it in mind for a record deal will NOT make it better! Adam.

willem-jan wrote: Well, since Treasure Moment is the only band on this planet that comes close to the quality of Queen in terms of song-writing skills as well as musicianship, I think this is indeed the right place to post this topic. Although, the serious discussion would be a candidate as well.

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: offcourse they will sound alot better when we go after a record deal.

Treasure Moment wrote:

pittrek wrote: Why do you change your nick more often than some people change their underware ?

i didnt, that wasnt me

JoxertheOrlandoBloompirate wrote:

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: its sounds kinda of bad. That goes for all of our songs ,

couldn't have put it better myself..

Treasure Moment wrote:

Micrówave wrote: He means take some lessons and find yourselves a songwriter.

dont need to since we crush all the crappy bands out there by far but thanks for the advice :)

Leaky Luke wrote:

Treasure Moment wrote:

Micrówave wrote: He means take some lessons and find yourselves a songwriter.

dont need to since we crush all the crappy bands out there by far but thanks for the advice :)

Have you actually seen a producer/record label to comment on your music? And if you beat the hell out ofany other bands, how come you haven't made it abroad yet (a video clip on MTV would be nice to show how good you are), And how many people (not involving your imaginairy friends) have heard of your band?

Leaky Luke wrote:

Treasure Moment wrote:

Micrówave wrote: He means take some lessons and find yourselves a songwriter.

dont need to since we crush all the crappy bands out there by far but thanks for the advice :)

Have you actually seen a producer/record label to comment on your music? And if you beat the hell out ofany other bands, how come you haven't made it abroad yet (a video clip on MTV would be nice to show how good you are), And how many people (not involving your imaginairy friends) have heard of your band?

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: This is just a demo , which means that its not recorded proffesionally. The vocals are not done , mixed properly either thats why its sounds kinda of bad. That goes for all of our songs , so offcourse they will sound alot better when we go after a record deal.

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: We KNOW we have talent , we KNOW what good music is and we're gonna continue until this music is so big that your gonna regret what you guys said about us

<font color=green>Bren<font color=orange>ski wrote:

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: This is just a demo , which means that its not recorded proffesionally. The vocals are not done , mixed properly either thats why its sounds kinda of bad. That goes for all of our songs , so offcourse they will sound alot better when we go after a record deal.

the only kind of record deal you are likely to get is at your local hmv - Where you can currently get all YOUR 80's idols - bon jovi, europe, mr mister, faith no more etc...in a 3 cds for £20 deal...

Treasure Moment wrote:

Leaky Luke wrote:

Treasure Moment wrote:

Micrówave wrote: He means take some lessons and find yourselves a songwriter.

dont need to since we crush all the crappy bands out there by far but thanks for the advice :)

Have you actually seen a producer/record label to comment on your music? And if you beat the hell out ofany other bands, how come you haven't made it abroad yet (a video clip on MTV would be nice to show how good you are), And how many people (not involving your imaginairy friends) have heard of your band?

you see, i know what our music is, i dont need ignorant people telling me what it is. You think i have any respect for producers/record companies when they have signed ALL these crappy bands we see on mtv and hear on radio? NO they dont know shit about good music, period

Knute wrote: Oh christ. Not these delusional idiots yet again. Its threads like this that scream for moderators.

Mercury SingerOfLife wrote:

Leaky Luke wrote:

Treasure Moment wrote:

Micrówave wrote: He means take some lessons and find yourselves a songwriter.

dont need to since we crush all the crappy bands out there by far but thanks for the advice :)

Have you actually seen a producer/record label to comment on your music? And if you beat the hell out ofany other bands, how come you haven't made it abroad yet (a video clip on MTV would be nice to show how good you are), And how many people (not involving your imaginairy friends) have heard of your band?

We havent begun sending our music to labels or producers yet , but im sure when we do , we will get a deal. We have good taste in music and we know our music is really great. You guys oppinions never affect us its just fun to see what you people think, fun to see you guys trying to put people down from things you never could create yourselves and you guys dont want anyone else get somewhere you cant. We KNOW we have talent , we KNOW what good music is and we're gonna continue until this music is so big that your gonna regret what you guys said about us

Thunderbolt<br><h6>Courtesy of God wrote: You know, I tried to be polite in my critique of your music (if you really want to call it that), but every time someone offers an honest, non-inflammatory opinion, suddenly they're stupid, ignorant fools who don't know sh*t about music. Since politeness obviously has no bearing for you, I'll just leave it to the great Dr. Zoidberg to provide the best critique possible of Treasure Moment: "Your music is bad and you should feel bad."

Treasure Moment wrote:

Thunderbolt<br><h6>Courtesy of God wrote: You know, I tried to be polite in my critique of your music (if you really want to call it that), but every time someone offers an honest, non-inflammatory opinion, suddenly they're stupid, ignorant fools who don't know sh*t about music. Since politeness obviously has no bearing for you, I'll just leave it to the great Dr. Zoidberg to provide the best critique possible of Treasure Moment: "Your music is bad and you should feel bad."

"you dont know anything and your taste sucks"

<b><font color=black>Mab Meddows Mercury wrote: ^Well said, Sparrow. :)

QueenMercury46 wrote: So I guess anybody who dislikes your music has horrible taste. Well since I love Queen, I guess that makes them horrible, eh? You really are a jackass.

Penetration_Guru wrote: I don't understand - every time you post a new "song" here, it gets utterly shredded and you point out that your critics are variously deaf, stupid, or just lack taste. Which begs the question - why continue to post them here?

Penetration_Guru wrote: I don't understand - every time you post a new "song" here, it gets utterly shredded and you point out that your critics are variously deaf, stupid, or just lack taste. Which begs the question - why continue to post them here?

Treasure Moment wrote:

Penetration_Guru wrote: I don't understand - every time you post a new "song" here, it gets utterly shredded and you point out that your critics are variously deaf, stupid, or just lack taste. Which begs the question - why continue to post them here?

it wasnt me who posted it and you are right, why should i post songs for retarded people who know shit about music? you are very right

Zebonka12 wrote: I actually love you.

Treasure Moment wrote: it wasnt me who posted it and you are right, why should i post songs for retarded people who know shit about music? you are very right

.*.Messenger: Jake Pyndle.*. wrote: Looks like some people enjoy their music. link

<font color=chartreuse>Thirtynine? wrote:

Treasure Moment wrote: it wasnt me who posted it and you are right, why should i post songs for retarded people who know shit about music? you are very right

If a band makes awesome music and no one is smart enough to hear it, does it make a sound?

.*.Messenger: Jake Pyndle.*. wrote: Looks like some people enjoy their music. link

AH WAIT! Is that Beethoven and Mozart I see in their Top 8? I thought they sucked compared to Queen!

<Font color=Wade>Deaky's<h6>Sex Microwa? wrote: Even my band kicks your arse and we're hardly ever able to practice together because my mum doesn't like our guitarist.

Treasure Moment wrote:

yeah right, dream on idiot

LozlanTheMage wrote: Good fucking god. Not only is your arrogance the most sickening display of narcissitic audio masturbation I've ever been subjected to, but you are actually pseudo-threatening us with promises of 'regrets.' No sir. If your music is accepted by a record label I will not 'regret' my very valid and very negative opinion of your tripe. I will question the sanity of the record label, and I will certainly shake my head in sorrow should you become, in any measure, popular. If record labels are, as you repeatedly and tiredly claim, only capable of signing 'talentless' acts, I should wonder at their supposed selection of your 'music' to round out their dubious catalogue. No single person has ever had 'regrets' about an artist they disdained after said artist became popular. Regardless of your future successes, we are never going to bow our heads and admit in trembling voices that we erred in judging you so harshly. You suck, and I don't give a bloody rat's ass if you become the biggest thing since the Beatles (who you still profess to loathe DESPITE the fact that they are widely recognized as the greatest musical act to ever exist). Thus success is no measure of individual judgement. We will continue to dislike your music and, moreover, despise the lot of you as disgusting and (to quote T M) 'low' people. You are nothing but whining entitled wannabe crap, as evinced by your above post (which, I must commend you on, is about the slimiest and most base stamping of feet I've ever been treated to on the internet). So go on. Stamp your little feet. Make your little music. And please, whine and bitch and act as entitled as a snuff-addled French nobleman. At least they were rightfully beheaded.

Treasure Moment wrote:

<Font color=Wade>Deaky's<h6>Sex Microwa? wrote: Even my band kicks your arse and we're hardly ever able to practice together because my mum doesn't like our guitarist.

yeah right, dream on idiot

<Font color=Wade>Deaky's<h6>San-Microwa? wrote:

Treasure Moment wrote:

<Font color=Wade>Deaky's<h6>Sex Microwa? wrote: Even my band kicks your arse and we're hardly ever able to practice together because my mum doesn't like our guitarist.

yeah right, dream on idiot

Oh I'm not the one who's delusional and thinks that my band is going to be the best band the world has ever seen. =)

LozlanTheMage wrote: I would recommend taking some time to THINK as well. It can be quite beneficial, especially to something we like to call the 'songwriting process.'

Treasure Moment wrote:

LozlanTheMage wrote: I would recommend taking some time to THINK as well. It can be quite beneficial, especially to something we like to call the 'songwriting process.'

thats what we have done and as you can see clearly crush all the modern popular garbage bands out there not to mention the old ones.

Treasure Moment wrote: i dont think

Leaky Luke wrote:

Treasure Moment wrote:

LozlanTheMage wrote: I would recommend taking some time to THINK as well. It can be quite beneficial, especially to something we like to call the 'songwriting process.'

thats what we have done and as you can see clearly crush all the modern popular garbage bands out there not to mention the old ones.

And what would you consider to be an "old" garbage band? Europe? Btw.. it's very professional to call other bands trash. That really shows that you can live yourself in other one's music.

Treasure Moment wrote:

Leaky Luke wrote:

Treasure Moment wrote:

LozlanTheMage wrote: I would recommend taking some time to THINK as well. It can be quite beneficial, especially to something we like to call the 'songwriting process.'

thats what we have done and as you can see clearly crush all the modern popular garbage bands out there not to mention the old ones.

And what would you consider to be an "old" garbage band? Europe? Btw.. it's very professional to call other bands trash. That really shows that you can live yourself in other one's music.

no not europe, their old albums are great. Im talking about garbage bands like U2, rolling stones etc